Every cloud has a silver lining indeed! Losing the baby was their dark cloud, the healing and closeness they got was the silver lining, Yash realizing his feelings was the silver lining.
I can understand her fear because Yash was a real brute after Mumbai. He put her under so much stress, she miscarried. I love that you gave her a voice, she was not some machine, she felt pain too. My heart broke at her struggle to accept that she lost the baby; it was her only real link to him, she was his in every way for at least one night. As a mother she also did not want to lose the baby, she wanted it to have every chance... She had to remove herself to heal.
The children though made her feel rejected. In her hurt she did not see that they want both their parents; a week away from Papa made them miss him that's all.
Then she disappears - where did she go? Yash becomes insane at the thought of having lost her; he proclaims her as his, surprising her. He then tricks her into returning and admitting she loves him; he uses her desperate moment to confess, to ask for a chance. She's afraid to trust again but she loves him enough to grant him a chance.
Uhhh I loved how he went about showing he loves her. She needed to see and feel his love, as much as she needed to hear it. Finally convinced, she confesses her love again trusting it would be returned equally... It results in a magical night, recreating the first night to mark a fresh start. Only, this time, it is much better because this time it's only love, and more love pouring much like the rain outside!
Beautifully done VD! ❤️
Edited by Tessaloni - 9 years ago
Indian Premier League
