Punar Vivah FF My Version AarYa's story49 Page 102 UPDATE 12/5/18 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats on the new story dear 👏👏

RES😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharlene1410


Thanks Tessa for your support, Oh now I want to read your version please do write I know it will be great specially the romance😳🤢




thank you sweetheart maybe I will but for now I'd rather enjoy your version! I love how you described everything that even having watched it it's still a joy to read!

yes I mean part one! it was beautiful! lol I have a feeling Aarti wants to express her dissatisfaction! I bet Yash the perfectionist won't like it one bit! lol eagerly awaiting the next part Sharlene dear :)
Edited by Tessaloni - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start
Interesting
Loved it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter two

After every one left the stage area Aarti went up to Mr. Yash The Wedding Planner and lightly taped him on his back "Excuse me are you blind?? Do I look like the bride to you??" asked an irate Aarti. Yash looked at the angry young woman covered in rose petals speaking to him, from her facial expression and body language it was evident she was displeased, ill at ease with the present situation. Aarti continued " Well what are you looking at? Cat cut your tongue?? " Yash was momentary mesmerize by this beautiful nymph that he did not comprehend what Aarti said to him "Hello Sir excuse me are you deaf? well say something!" she continued when he just continued to stare at her so she snapped her fingers in front of his face, that did the trick Yash came out of his trance. " Ji madam what do you say." asked Yash in what he hoped was a calm tone Dam she is beautiful thought Yash " Madam! do I look old too you!" asked Aarti who had become tired of this one sided conversation,and even more angry by this annoying handsome man,she made fist with her hands by her side, stamped her right foot and said" Look just forget it!" Aarti turned to leave and bumped into her Shoba ma " Sorry ma I did not realize you are here." " Beta why are you arguing with Mr Scindhia it was just a simple mistake." Said Shoba ma "Ma Mansi is dressed in her bridal wear yet the flowers fell on me: he spoil one of her special moments." she looked towards Yash with accusing eyes: all Yash did in his defense was to continue looking at her: Wow!! she has big beautiful expressive eye the shape of almonds, these eye are looking at me as if I am some villain in a movie thought Yash " Beta his timing was off that all, is that not so Mr Scindhia??" when Yash did not respond Shoba ma repeated "Mr Scindhia?" Yash who realized his folly immediately gather himself and replied "Ji auntie, my timing was off, please forgive me Miss" he smiled at the ladies and got a glare from Aarti. This girl is a JKR My heart goes out to her future husband, he will have his hands full a beautiful sexy wife who is a fire cracker, he thought and smiled to himself watching the two ladies turn their backs too him, walking in the direction of the bride and her family. At that moment his employee drew his attention away from the beautiful nymph "Yash Sir we should check..." Yash did not hear the rest of the man's statement he just nodded and went along with him like a robot because he realized where his thought just went he Yash Scindhia happily married to Aripta a father of two was gawking, openly appreciating the beauty of another woman chi how would he face himself in the mirror, how will he face his beloved Aripta. This is a sin he commit adultery, he is an adulterer my poor Aripta does not deserve this, shame on me, I have too beg her forgiveness.

Aarti sat with Mansi waiting on the auspicious time for the marriage "Aarti he is a handsome hunk is he not??" "Yes Vijay Jiju is indeed handsome." answered Aarti "Oh Hello I was not referring to him I am speaking about Mr Yash Scindhia the wedding Planner" said Mansi with a smile "Mansi today is your wedding day, your groom is seated a few feet away and you are looking at another man" replied Aarti she knew her best friend only too well all talk no action " there is no harm to look, and I am speaking the truth the man is sexy!!" continued Mansi " Mansi my pet Keep Your Eyes on Your Prize." playfully turning her head towards Vijay, and Mansi returned Aarti action turning her towards Yash " Aarti di only after you admit he is drop dead gorgeous" "Mansi I am not interested I am a married woman" Aarti said. This annoyed Mansi "Married are you insane; you are divorce from that monster how can you still consider yourself married to him!" " I took the seven vows around the holly fire with him, his is the father off my son, he is still alive; he broke the relation with me I did not break it with him, I love him" Aarti said in one rush. "That cad used you, beat, and cheated on you, married some one else, and you say you still love him Aarti you need to get your head examine!" Mansi complained she had never met Aarti's ex husband only heard what Aarti and Shoba ma said about Prashant Dubey, she did not like him not one bit and was frustrated with her best friend's thinking that you only have one love in your lifetime, and you must stay true to that person even if he is a no good, wife beater, and a cheater. When will Aarti realize that she is no longer married, that she is free from that devil, a single beautiful young woman of the twenty first century; yes she has a son but Ansh is such a darling everyone who meets him instantly loves him, god will not be that cruel to them he will send someone who will love, protect, accept, and appreciate them whole heart, if only she comes out of this illusion that her world begins and end with her ex husband Prashant Monster Dubey.
Mansi closed her eyes and prayed to god to protect and guide Aarti and Ansh " God today is my wedding day Aarti is my best friend and Sister soon I will leave for South Africa with my husband please protect, and guide both Aarti, and little Ansh send someone special for them who will love them through out their lives. Please god grant Aarti the wisdom to understand, and forget Prashant and move ahead in life into a bright future for Ansh and herself. Give us a sign god please. Yash came across to the group to discus something with Mansi's dad and both his and Aarti's eyes met for reasons only known to god they both acknowledged each other presence and smiled.
Edited by Sharlene1410 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh Sharlene I'm reading your updates with a bright smile! I loved the AarYa moments and could actually see them happening in my mind's eye! truly awesome!!

as for Arpita, I suppose he is referring to her memories and that she isn't actually alive! or is she? hmm that would be interesting!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni

oh Sharlene I'm reading your updates with a bright smile! I loved the AarYa moments and could actually see them happening in my mind's eye! truly awesome!!

as for Arpita, I suppose he is referring to her memories and that she isn't actually alive! or is she? hmm that would be interesting!


Tessa I had to answer you comment 😆 Aripta is dead but as in the show Yash is obsessed with her memory, just as in the show his room is filled with her stuff 😆 and he refuses to move on in life, he also needs the services of a psychiatrist like Aarti🤣
thanks so much for your comment 😆🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharlene1410


Tessa I had to answer you comment 😆 Aripta is dead but as in the show Yash is obsessed with her memory, just as in the show his room is filled with her stuff 😆 and he refuses to move on in life, he also needs the services of a psychiatrist like Aarti🤣
thanks so much for your comment 😆🤗

I thought that was it! they both seriously need their heads examined! 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing update.. eager to read next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful updates dear 👏
Loved the story 🤗
Continue soon waiting for next chpt 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sharlene... thats a splendid job must say
first update as u said though it is same as the actual show stilll felt so fresh and got to have same jittery feeling when aarti and yash brushed their shoulders ...uff that reveals that they r meant to be... a divine connection 😳

second one was a quite a different one though i must say u have done quite an excellent job ...aha... really !?yash was thinking like that abt aarti ...omg !! he is not Khadoos here😆
i m loving this confused Yash ...

Aarti as usual Chatter box she is and ofcourse JKR😆...poor yash ! he is gone for life !!!!!

m just enjoying reading it as much as u r while writing it ... way to go sharlene👏


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