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cuteariya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

superb update
oh god arpita is dead in car accident 💔
yash was feeling guilty for falling for aarti
he asked forgiveness from arpita 😭
oh how much I hate that jerk prashant 😡
monster just used aarti & left her kamina 😡
but why aarti still love that jerk & kept remind his wife that's really stupid
awe ansh is so naughty 😃
continue soon

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cuteariya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Thanks my dear for reading🤗I love your comment you got everything that I wanted to convey😆Keep reading my friend and sharing your comments😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Nice version of the story.

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cuteariya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Thanks my dear for reading🤗I love your comment you got everything that I wanted to convey😆Keep reading my friend and sharing your comments😆

that's really sweet of u dear 😉 😉
don't worry I will read & comment 😃 😃
plz keep update dear

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Lincy_Lins
Beautiful Update Dear👏
Eagerly waiting to know how Aarti will enter in Yash's life
Continue soon😳

Thanks Lincy 😊 AarYa will meet soon 😉

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Busi
Wow dear thanks for an amazing story. Please continue soon.

Thanks Busi 😊 will continue tomorrow 😊

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Tessaloni
thank you for the updates Sharlene! I loved both of them!
"if I had met her before she would be mine's today, at my side, my wife."

that was my absolute favorite line! I was smiling like a xmas cat when I read it hahahaha! at least Aarti was able to momentarily pull him out of his world of dreams but as soon as he got home he wallowed in them again, this time with added guilt! Aarti needs to come save him once and for all!

Gayatri's worry for her son was also depicted well.

Aarti's POV was also great although I hate reading anything that paints Prashant in a positive light, I understand that those are the good times that she hangs onto to remind herself that not all was bad, there was good too.

you have also described Shoba's emotions very well; that is exactly how I see her too. Ansh of course is the naughty little prince whom we all love!

keep it up dear, I love this story; now I can't decide which of your stories I like more!

very, very eager for the next update!

Thanks Tessa a big hug for you 🤗

I am happy you enjoyed and totally get my ff😆

I am not a fan of Prashant 😡 but in the show Aarti loved him there had to be a reason 😆why??? she was so adamant 😆 I am attempting to give my own reasons😆 I just hope I can entertain you all with my attempts 😉, both G3 and Shoba are wonderful moms loving their kids very much .

Ansh too cute❤️

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Busi
Thanks for the update dear. Hmm reading your story makes me smile always dear. Continue soon

Thanks dear you are so sweet i 😳 😊

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Lincy_Lins
Beautiful Update Dear👏
Your story is taken me to past "PV Memorise"
Missing my AarYa to the core😭

Thank you for a nice reply to my ff so sweet 😊 😳 I also miss PV

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: caller123
Beautiful story dear. I always loved to read different versions of PV. I love the way story is progressing dear. It's so amazing. I love the fact that Yash felt something at the first meeting itself.

Thanks so much Kate 🤗 your support means a lot
I always felt that there was more to their first meeting at Mansi's wedding if not why did the CV do the bumping of the shoulders, and showering of the rose petals 😉 😆

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