AarYa OS 'The Night That Changed Everything'-Epilogue,pg-38 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: caller123

Nikki, I will first wish Happy Anniversary to your MTB. Which we all loved. I'm so happy that it completed 1 year, Because f your wonderful writing we never felt how days passed so fast.

Thanks Abie and Charmi for helping Nikki with this wonderful OS. Like you all I too have fallen in love with this OS already.❤️

Coming to the update
It is the most wonderful Os you have written Nikki..
I have no words to express it.😳😳
A year has passed from the night that changed everything...
I love the way how YAsh felt uneasy when he could not find Aarthi and Ayu in the room...I didn't understand why till I read Aarthi's diary along with Yash. I too had done a sin of reading someone's diary...😉😆. yh I joined Yash to read Aarthi's diary.
May be Aarthi is stupid to leave all like that but when I see form her POV it's not. She's also a human. There's a limit she can bear.. but I felt so bad when I read how much she longed for Yash's care and love. This is what any pregnant woman needs and she did not get it both her pregnancy times. But I'm happy when she was delivering ayu Yash was there to support her. Thanks to Aman. He's a great friend.
When Aarthi said
When I started crying, he put his arms around me and joined me in to crying.

I really felt how these two longed for each others company and love. They were both not completed with out each other. Their stubbornness blind and they didn't see how much they need each other. Really Ayu showed them their hidden love. He was the one who bound them in love and the one who broke ice of their hearts.
What doctors said about Aarthi??
I too want to know.. I have to wait till you update the next part . I feel it 's in Yash's POV.

I really love the scene you describe that how Yash's protective arms around her when all came to see her. Great no one blamed her and no lectures from SP as happened in real PV. I love the fact that all welcomed her with opened arms.

Aman- He took a great care of Aarthi. I love the fact that he didn't take sides but he also thought from the side of Yash too. I don't blame Aarthi for not going back because her fear is stronger that time. At last Aman made them meet each other. Good... that meeting too changed everything just like the night that changed everything.
If it is not for that meeting Yash and Aarthi would have stayed in their own worlds and must have led miserable lives with out their better halves.

Nikki when I read this OS I really felt each of those emotions.. the loneliness of Aarthi.. how she yearned for Yash..how she yearned for her kids...her fear to go back to Yash as she thought Yash will reject her baby and happiness when Yash called her Aarthi( I too felt happy when I read it.) .

Yes, Yash will never leave her as time told him how important Aarthi is to him and that he is incomplete without him.

Baby feed - hmmm...They both want to be with each other but Yash got up to go coz of aarthi but Aarthi stopped and naughty nurse😉😆

Nikki thank you so much for this wonderful OS and like others I too waiting for the next chapter eagerly.
Waiting to see how Yash unfold his story.
Congratulations and best of luck Nikki dear!

P.S
Nikki hope you will like this.





Kate first of all a biggest THANK YOU for the links of my MOST Favorite episode of PV 🤗.
And these links are working for me 😳. But I can't watch this episode as I start to get goosebumps the moment the episode starts, especially the scene where lights go off 🤢.

That's why this OS has become my favorite as the base of this OS is the episode of USS RAAT of AarYa 🤢

I love each and every scene of this OS. And the next part is even more interesting than this one as you'll see a different side of Yash and his feelings and his struggle to fight with his changing feelings for Aarti.

Kate in this OS I've focused only on Yash and Aarti, and after them I've shown little bit of Aman and then Aayu and Ansh. There won't be any more characters, only one or two names will be mentioned. That's why I showed that the whole family welcomed Aarti with open arms.
This OS will consist of only three at the most, four parts OS. Had I shown other characters the feel wouldn't be the same, plus it would've become a 5-6 part OS, which I don't want.
Yash's part you'll get next week.

And Thank You so much for being with me throughout the journey of not just MTB but also on everything that I write.
You all deserves the wishes for MTB's anniversary as much as I do. ❤️ 🤗



Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg i just cant belive👏👏👏 our most favorite to say our jaan 🤗MTB🤗 completed 1year⭐️⭐️⭐️ ,,it felt like i just few days back saw the promo which i thought in a negative way 😕😕u know wat i saying 😉😉reg first promo of MTB nd today it completed remarkable one year👍🏼 and we all this much love with it🤗still the love meets increasing level only👍🏼 by the way u presenting di👏👏 ,,i lost wrds to express the journey so far we traveled together so many emotions running together ⭐️,,

MTB 🤗love it asap nd reading it again nd again👏 ..dnt know i felt love to read stories this well by myself even i too dnt know😕😕 di before i didnt read any ff os properly,,feeling fr it nd expressing wat i felt reg that but after catching MTB it turned my way ⭐️,,just fell in deep love with it ,,waitin every time eagerly fr updates ,,once u remeber u getin lost intrest on ur stories mainly MTB ,hw scared we r 😡😡nd joined hands together to recharge u asap nd started pm war👏😳👏 ,,u still remember my pm war too,,😉😉


like this sooo many memoreies👏😭😊 attached regarding this 1yr joruney which r soo much pleasure nw to cherish memorise ❤️,,as u said we never say take ur own time fr update😉😉 ..well known abt u 😳,,we keep on pressurize u 😡,,sorry it was the atmsphre😲 u created by ur write ups di🤗👍🏼 ,,still waitin to see ur remaining updates ⭐️⭐️,,,

now😃😃

ok ok coming to now the very spl 😳😳the one more very memorable os came from u 🤗fr us as the gift to treasure👏👏 ,,,

always wanted to see this dairy point of aarya 😳😳whenver watching aarya 😳-aarthi writin dairy ⭐️,yash tried to get it frm her in her beautiful sleep ⭐️,,but not done 😕,,the cute scene givin always thought about the dairy after then in pv never saw dairy part😡 ,,so this concept was freakin awesome to imagine nd read ,😳,

perfect title for a perfect outcome 👏👏yes it was absolutly true tht one night chnged everything between them the way thy to dnt know thy becoming soulmates in everysence 👏👏but to reach the destination thy faced alot 😭😭it was the dream becoming true fr aarthi tht night 😳😳which the dream tht shattered yash fully ,,which he regretted soo much😭 now yash too wanted to come again those beautiful dream again nd again if im not wrong 😳😳😳will know his pov the next update 😳😳

aarthi - yash-aman😳👏😳 how beautiful this charcters nd placing them in a wondreful manner wow wondreful⭐️ ,,feelin relaxing after rereading it😊😊 ,,

loved aman caring soo much for aarya👏 ..he helped her this thick time nd also concern abt yash may he change nd craving fr aarthi now such a true friend he is👏👏 ..

aarthi no matter how much she regret to go back nd check yash in this condition thn also feels absence of yashji😭😭 in everywhere in every time ..indeed true love😭❤️

aarya reunion by aman it was so heart touching😭😭 ,,he feel tht aarthi may not ready or leave but a true friend he did wat right to her👏👏 ..kudos to aman,👏⭐️👍🏼,

then aarya moments😳😳 after ayu born😃 soo hearttouching nd rejoicing the baby feeding scene nd tht naughty nurse clicked pic😉😛 ,,cherry on cake😛 ,,but aarya still in cocoon of ther inner feelings not opened still to each other😭👏👏 ,,

aarthi part we all have idea of wat she undergone hw she stable in thick nd thin conditions😭😭 ..u narrated the way tht wrds are less to compare ⭐️⭐️..claps are less to sound👏👏 ,,kudos to u di fr another wondreful treasure 🤗..

now waiting impatiently to know wat the yash pov 😲👏⭐️hw faced this all time without his soulmate😭 ,,u said lil about his physical state when he found aarthi .his life😭😭 ...now wanting nd waiting more to see his mental state in this period of time ,,his longing 🤗..craving fr his aarthi ,🤗,

dont take much time di ,😡,plzz update soon for us😳😳..


word of thanks to abie nd charmie dearies🤗 for staying 👏,,charging👏 ,,recharging👏 ,,editing👏😳 ,,motivating,👏👏,wat not the possible ways to perfect😳😊 u nd our heart resting updates👏👏 ,,

keep like this dearies😳😃 ..always maintain support👍🏼 ..make sure nikki di will cme soon asap with updates😃😃

love u all dearies❤️🤗❤️

@charmie- wondreful creations😳😳 which build the story perfect nd visualize with beautiful effect 👏👏,,thanks alot dear🤗..

@Nikki di nd all --now wanted to say some thing if u dnt mind -😳😳whenver u find my *res* post dnt think it was containing blank space di😕😕 ,,it was my heart filled emotions 😛,,unsaid wrds are hanging ther⭐️⭐️ ..dont stop me to res places plzz if i unres early or late mainly in MTB,😳,till nw i think i never missd place to resve ther ,,nd will never miss to do .😳😳..

in my vision res means 😉😊------*-re entry space*😳

- *-recharging energy source*😳😛

*-revising effective spot*👏😃 ...

i saying to all my buddies wher i placed res spots 😉,,dnt mind dearies ..🤗will unres when i get my time😳 ,,sorry to all nd u too nikki di 😭😭,,

hope u like my cmnt ,😃😃,it looks very small tht i didnt merged my feelings fully wat i want to say😭😕 but atleast said sme thing which came ready frm tht filled source(my heart)😳😳

btw one more to say liked ur idea of this very much😃😃 ,,at first dnt know y sayin permisn to reserve😕😕 aftr cmplting ur surprise viewing got it👏👏 ..its sooo refrshnin to see the very next of our cmnt ur reply fr it👏👏 ..great going ⭐️..amazing ..👍🏼..

now i wait to see the same page fr my reply ...thanq nikki di 😳🤗

love u🤗 Nikki di🤗

have a great time😊😊

Edited by vinnas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res for reply for Chandu's first post
Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res for reply for Kate's second post 😛
Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Awesome start
Looking forward to this OS :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Awesome Awesome update Nikki di loved it so much 🤗
ur a fantastic writer di👏👏👏
u will not believe di me read this OS for 2 times till now 😆
don't know how many time I will read now???🤪😆
M in full love with all ur OS, SS, FF ❤️❤️
waiting for nxt update di plz update soon..omg can't wait for long time, I know I have to wait for 1 week 😛 waiting waiting waiting
Waiting for our Jaan FF i.e MTB waiting waiting waiting

Happy Anniversary to MTB...🥳🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ken309

Awesome start

Looking forward to this OS :)

Thanks Ken.
Next part will come next week 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely , beautiful part.loved it.waiting to know about yash pov.thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lincy_Lins

Awesome Awesome Awesome update Nikki di loved it so much 🤗
ur a fantastic writer di👏👏👏
u will not believe di me read this OS for 2 times till now 😆
don't know how many time I will read now???🤪😆
M in full love with all ur OS, SS, FF ❤️❤️
waiting for nxt update di plz update soon..omg can't wait for long time, I know I have to wait for 1 week 😛 waiting waiting waiting
Waiting for our Jaan FF i.e MTB waiting waiting waiting

Happy Anniversary to MTB...🥳🥳


Thank you so Much Lincy for Everything 🤗

Lincy I fell in love with it the moment this idea and concept came to me.
Abie and Charmi are madly in love with this OS. Abie said that this is her favorite of all the OS that I've written so far.

Even I've read it so many times. Can I tell you a secret, if you've loved this part, you'll love Yashu's part even more 😉
The next update of this OS and MTB will come next week. PAKKA 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ksen

Lovely , beautiful part.loved it.waiting to know about yash pov.thanks for pm


Thanks Ksen.
Next part will come next week 😛

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