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Oh la la..finally the update is here! Happy Anniversary to MTB. You are very right in calling it your jaan because its an incredible which and you always give in your 100% in each update. 🥳

Coming to this OS, need I say more about it because you know how I've fallen in love with it from your first hint itself. 😳😳 The beginning of Aarti's monologue itself is dreamy. How beautiful is it that when Aarti entered the room recalling that night, the first thing she laid her eyes on was Aayu. The same Aayu who came to their world because of that same night. He is their precious gift. And the same thunder and rain came back on that same date again refreshing memories of that night where they cross all barriers and become one. 😳

Yash knew what he was doing. He just forget the world and everything and give in to his desires which is why he went all crazy the next day. 😛 Poor Aarti woke up from her lovely dream seeing Yash all angry. Thanks to Aman's recordings she came to know of Yash's anger. How more painful could it be for Aarti to know Yash regretted. And then she got to know she's pregnant on that same night Yash terms as sin. She was right in her ways to leave because Yash was torturing himself and kids were witnessing all his madness which wasn't good.

Yash must have gotten a blow knowing Aarti left and a double blow knowing that she was pregnant with his child. Maybe the blow of Aarti leaving was the only way to bring him back to his senses.

Aman was not like only a friend but was a brother figure to Aarti. He helped her after understanding what she and Yash were going through living under the same roof but he still didn't stop advising Aarti to go back to her kids and Yash.

He took care of her in every way and helped her start life afresh.

OMG and Aman again did it by uniting Yash and Aarti. What did these two soulmates feel after seeing each other after months! Aarti was so shock and happy that her abdomen started paining. It was a perfect timing for the baby to come when his dad was finally by Aarti's side giving all support. And finally their bundle of joy arrived, Aayu. As Yash said their symbol of love. ❤️ That

was a very beautiful and emotional moment and the baby feeding part added more cuteness to it. Thanks to the naughty nurse. 😛

OMG Yash was about to confess their itself but uff Aarti's rapid heartbeats spoil the fun. How she wish she could control that heart from beating crazily. 😆

So glad that the little family are back to their home enjoying each moment together. Oh Aarti and her trip and fall how won't Ansh suspect his Mamma? 😆

Now Yash is about to pour his heart in Aarti's diary before confession. It will an delightful read reading Yash's POV on that night. 😳

Stupendous story Nikki. 👏👏

Charmi...beautiful creations! <3<3

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Posted: 11 years ago

On this beautiful day, I would like to wish one of my fav writers for one of my fav FF a Very Happy Anniversary to MTB, to Nikki di and to all its Followers...

Nikki di, you know very well.. MTB is not only your Jaan but mine too. This 13 months journey till now has been so so beautiful.. There might be ups and downs during the journey.. But I felt that there were only ups in this journey..

I was always amazed by the way you get ideas for different stories (you know that very well) or the twist that you always bring in MTB.

I know how much hardwork and time you put in all your stories. I feel honored to be your editor. Because you are always open for honest opinions ant not only that, you put those opinions as your number one priority and work on it... And this is why your..oppss our MTB finished a year already and maybe more years to come..

Thank you for giving us a beautiful story of Aarya to cherish and to make new memories of Aarya.. I remember telling you that I have always imagined every single scene you write. I can imagine each character. Maybe its nikki's magic in it that always does that to me..

I thank you once again for giving us beautiul story-ies of Aarya..

Wishing you once again a very Happy Anniversary to MTB and all readers..

And to every readers, Thank you for supporting my Nikki di until now. You dont know but i know how much your all involvement and encourgement and opinions enchourges Di and makes her happy..And I hope you will keep supporting her forever..

One More Gift for you di...

Congratulations to everyone for One Successful Year of MTB

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roserosey

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Posted: 11 years ago

oh nikki di...🤗 a very happy anniversary to our MTB...us... 🥳🥳

it was really a splendid journey with u and MTB 🤗❤️🤗...so far...and feeling very happy to be a part of it as a reader ...and had an oppurtunity to enjoy ur lovely way of writing and feeling our aarya ...thank u so much for giving us such a lovely and wonderful memories of aarya to cherish forever...and i m looking forward wholeheartedly for many more memories to cherish from u in the future...🤗

charmi...wonderful creations...which obviously played a role in carrying the feel of the situation aarya r ...👏.⭐️...amazing job charmi...aaww...such a lovely editor nikki di had got...😃🤗

hmmm... abie...thank u so much for pestering nikki di always 😉🤗... appreciating ur role in this special surprise gift nikki di had planned for all of us...👏.⭐️...

coming to the surprise......:

absolutely amazing ...who wouldnt like to know how aarthi and yash would have felt abt their USS RAATH...thats really amazing to read in ur write up...👏👏...

they become one forever cause that was what was meant to be... this almost first line clicked me di...⭐️...

aarya r allways meant to be ...and its like we r meant to admire aarya

the part where aarthi is writing her feeling abt that night...was really made me to recollect all the scenes of that night in the show...😳...scenes played infront of my minds eyes... i couldnt stop myself drowing into that...

and the note that was the hero of this surprise update...

that contains lot of emotions which aarthi wanted to convey to yash ...

atlast when she told that she is a strong woman and can raise her child on her own...made me too emotional and i fell for her strength...1..never give in life even if u r pushed to death...

2.and in pasion of our loved ones we r ready to sacrifice our happiness even our life...

aman palyed a role of true friend ...and all he did was a true friend can do...⭐️admirable personality...

my another fav line was...

the only thing he didnt trust was i will never take advantage of him in any state much less in a drunken state...

it shows the disappointment she felt that her trust was not reciprocated...

my happiness knew no bounds when yash met aarthi finally after passing all that long seperation...😭😭( tears of happiness)...

dreamy moment was he is holding baby in his arms and came near aarthi and telling her that he named him as aayu... after aarthi+yash...aayu...their pyaar...❤️

and enjoyed their togetherness though confession is yet to happen...

a perfect day for the confession to happen... eagerly waiting di...

amazing fantasticdi...👏

🤗❤️🤗

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caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nikki, I will first wish Happy Anniversary to your MTB. Which we all loved. I'm so happy that it completed 1 year, Because f your wonderful writing we never felt how days passed so fast.

Thanks Abie and Charmi for helping Nikki with this wonderful OS. Like you all I too have fallen in love with this OS already.❤️

Coming to the update

It is the most wonderful Os you have written Nikki..

I have no words to express it.😳😳

A year has passed from the night that changed everything...

I love the way how YAsh felt uneasy when he could not find Aarthi and Ayu in the room...I didn't understand why till I read Aarthi's diary along with Yash. I too had done a sin of reading someone's diary...😉😆. yh I joined Yash to read Aarthi's diary.

May be Aarthi is stupid to leave all like that but when I see form her POV it's not. She's also a human. There's a limit she can bear.. but I felt so bad when I read how much she longed for Yash's care and love. This is what any pregnant woman needs and she did not get it both her pregnancy times. But I'm happy when she was delivering ayu Yash was there to support her. Thanks to Aman. He's a great friend.

When Aarthi said

When I started crying, he put his arms around me and joined me in to crying.

I really felt how these two longed for each others company and love. They were both not completed with out each other. Their stubbornness blind and they didn't see how much they need each other. Really Ayu showed them their hidden love. He was the one who bound them in love and the one who broke ice of their hearts.

What doctors said about Aarthi??

I too want to know.. I have to wait till you update the next part . I feel it 's in Yash's POV.

I really love the scene you describe that how Yash's protective arms around her when all came to see her. Great no one blamed her and no lectures from SP as happened in real PV. I love the fact that all welcomed her with opened arms.

Aman- He took a great care of Aarthi. I love the fact that he didn't take sides but he also thought from the side of Yash too. I don't blame Aarthi for not going back because her fear is stronger that time. At last Aman made them meet each other. Good... that meeting too changed everything just like the night that changed everything.

If it is not for that meeting Yash and Aarthi would have stayed in their own worlds and must have led miserable lives with out their better halves.

Nikki when I read this OS I really felt each of those emotions.. the loneliness of Aarthi.. how she yearned for Yash..how she yearned for her kids...her fear to go back to Yash as she thought Yash will reject her baby and happiness when Yash called her Aarthi( I too felt happy when I read it.) .

Yes, Yash will never leave her as time told him how important Aarthi is to him and that he is incomplete without him.

Baby feed - hmmm...They both want to be with each other but Yash got up to go coz of aarthi but Aarthi stopped and naughty nurse😉😆

Nikki thank you so much for this wonderful OS and like others I too waiting for the next chapter eagerly.

Waiting to see how Yash unfold his story.

Congratulations and best of luck Nikki dear!

P.S

Nikki hope you will like this.

Uss rath 1

Uss Rath 2

Uss Rath 3

Uss Rath 4

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Abie10
Oh la la..finally the update is here! Happy Anniversary to MTB. You are very right in calling it your jaan because its an incredible which and you always give in your 100% in each update. 🥳

Coming to this OS, need I say more about it because you know how I've fallen in love with it from your first hint itself. 😳😳 The beginning of Aarti's monologue itself is dreamy. How beautiful is it that when Aarti entered the room recalling that night, the first thing she laid her eyes on was Aayu. The same Aayu who came to their world because of that same night. He is their precious gift. And the same thunder and rain came back on that same date again refreshing memories of that night where they cross all barriers and become one. 😳

Yash knew what he was doing. He just forget the world and everything and give in to his desires which is why he went all crazy the next day. 😛 Poor Aarti woke up from her lovely dream seeing Yash all angry. Thanks to Aman's recordings she came to know of Yash's anger. How more painful could it be for Aarti to know Yash regretted. And then she got to know she's pregnant on that same night Yash terms as sin. She was right in her ways to leave because Yash was torturing himself and kids were witnessing all his madness which wasn't good.

Yash must have gotten a blow knowing Aarti left and a double blow knowing that she was pregnant with his child. Maybe the blow of Aarti leaving was the only way to bring him back to his senses.

Aman was not like only a friend but was a brother figure to Aarti. He helped her after understanding what she and Yash were going through living under the same roof but he still didn't stop advising Aarti to go back to her kids and Yash.
He took care of her in every way and helped her start life afresh.

OMG and Aman again did it by uniting Yash and Aarti. What did these two soulmates feel after seeing each other after months! Aarti was so shock and happy that her abdomen started paining. It was a perfect timing for the baby to come when his dad was finally by Aarti's side giving all support. And finally their bundle of joy arrived, Aayu. As Yash said their symbol of love. ❤️ That
was a very beautiful and emotional moment and the baby feeding part added more cuteness to it. Thanks to the naughty nurse. 😛

OMG Yash was about to confess their itself but uff Aarti's rapid heartbeats spoil the fun. How she wish she could control that heart from beating crazily. 😆

So glad that the little family are back to their home enjoying each moment together. Oh Aarti and her trip and fall how won't Ansh suspect his Mamma? 😆

Now Yash is about to pour his heart in Aarti's diary before confession. It will an delightful read reading Yash's POV on that night. 😳

Stupendous story Nikki. 👏👏

Charmi...beautiful creations! <3<3

Such a Long comment from you 😲. Yay I'm so HAPPY 🥳

Abie my Twinee 🤗

How should I thank you for always been there for me along with our Bacchha Charmi? Love you sweetie for everything that you have done for me and still keep on doing it ❤️

You both know what I go through before and after working MTB update or any other update. You guys make MTB all the more special for me. I remember due to MTB we started PM chatting and immediately became best friends.

Abie because of you I'm falling in love with this OS Again And Again And Again.

You know very well had I not posted it today also, I would've kept on writing, changing and adding scenes after scenes in this one chapter and would've ended up making it two chapters.

So if I start replying to your comment I might end up writing one whole chapter here only 😆

Ah! But I love this OS so much

And next part is Yashu's part

Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess121993
On this beautiful day, I would like to wish one of my fav writers for one of my fav FF a Very Happy Anniversary to MTB, to Nikki di and to all its Followers...

Nikki di, you know very well.. MTB is not only your Jaan but mine too. This 13 months journey till now has been so so beautiful.. There might be ups and downs during the journey.. But I felt that there were only ups in this journey..
I was always amazed by the way you get ideas for different stories (you know that very well) or the twist that you always bring in MTB.
I know how much hardwork and time you put in all your stories. I feel honored to be your editor. Because you are always open for honest opinions ant not only that, you put those opinions as your number one priority and work on it... And this is why your..oppss our MTB finished a year already and maybe more years to come..
Thank you for giving us a beautiful story of Aarya to cherish and to make new memories of Aarya.. I remember telling you that I have always imagined every single scene you write. I can imagine each character. Maybe its nikki's magic in it that always does that to me..
I thank you once again for giving us beautiul story-ies of Aarya..

Wishing you once again a very Happy Anniversary to MTB and all readers..

And to every readers, Thank you for supporting my Nikki di until now. You dont know but i know how much your all involvement and encourgement and opinions enchourges Di and makes her happy..And I hope you will keep supporting her forever..

One More Gift for you di...

Congratulations to everyone for One Successful Year of MTB

Charmi you've made me so emotional with your comment. I've no words left to reply to you on this sweet gesture and heart touching words of yours. I feel so blessed to have you as my little sis. And Abie as my twinee ❤️ 🤗

You help me with everything that I do around here. One word from me and you do it in seconds, no matter how busy you are. I won't be able to do anything without you. 🤗

Don't want MTB to continue for years or else the remaining readers will also leave 😆

Love love love your creations for the OS as well as the ones that you've made for your comment. ⭐️

LOVE YOU, ❤️

Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Res For Charmi's comment

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Originally posted by: roserosey
oh nikki di...🤗 a very happy anniversary to our MTB...us... 🥳🥳
it was really a splendid journey with u and MTB 🤗❤️🤗...so far...and feeling very happy to be a part of it as a reader ...and had an oppurtunity to enjoy ur lovely way of writing and feeling our aarya ...thank u so much for giving us such a lovely and wonderful memories of aarya to cherish forever...and i m looking forward wholeheartedly for many more memories to cherish from u in the future...🤗
charmi...wonderful creations...which obviously played a role in carrying the feel of the situation aarya r ...👏.⭐️...amazing job charmi...aaww...such a lovely editor nikki di had got...😃🤗

hmmm... abie...thank u so much for pestering nikki di always 😉🤗... appreciating ur role in this special surprise gift nikki di had planned for all of us...👏.⭐️...

coming to the surprise......:
absolutely amazing ...who wouldnt like to know how aarthi and yash would have felt abt their USS RAATH...thats really amazing to read in ur write up...👏👏...

they become one forever cause that was what was meant to be... this almost first line clicked me di...⭐️...
aarya r allways meant to be ...and its like we r meant to admire aarya
the part where aarthi is writing her feeling abt that night...was really made me to recollect all the scenes of that night in the show...😳...scenes played infront of my minds eyes... i couldnt stop myself drowing into that...

and the note that was the hero of this surprise update...
that contains lot of emotions which aarthi wanted to convey to yash ...
atlast when she told that she is a strong woman and can raise her child on her own...made me too emotional and i fell for her strength...1..never give in life even if u r pushed to death...
2.and in pasion of our loved ones we r ready to sacrifice our happiness even our life...

aman palyed a role of true friend ...and all he did was a true friend can do...⭐️admirable personality...

my another fav line was...
the only thing he didnt trust was i will never take advantage of him in any state much less in a drunken state...
it shows the disappointment she felt that her trust was not reciprocated...

my happiness knew no bounds when yash met aarthi finally after passing all that long seperation...😭😭( tears of happiness)...

dreamy moment was he is holding baby in his arms and came near aarthi and telling her that he named him as aayu... after aarthi+yash...aayu...their pyaar...❤️

and enjoyed their togetherness though confession is yet to happen...

a perfect day for the confession to happen... eagerly waiting di...

amazing fantasticdi...👏
🤗❤️🤗

Rosey 🤗

First of all @Bold Colored part in your comment 👏. Wow wow wow, that's so Beautiful Rosey. Wish I could've come up with such intense and deep meaningful words, that straightaway touches ones heart. ❤️

Now for the rest of the comment...

You have no idea how much I was waiting for your long comments, which you gave me after such a long time. Even before I posted the update, I knew that this time I'll get my long comment from you. And I got it 🥳

Rosey I still remember how you, Anu and Kate used to stalk MTB to see when I'll update and then you fought for the first place. You guys are the reason today we are celebrating MTB's first anniversary. Thank You My Number One Stalker. ❤️

Rosey I can go on and on and on about this OS. I still don't understand how and why I fell in love with it the moment it came into my mind. And then as I kept on getting feedback from Abie and Charmi, I started falling in love with it more and more.

I can't pick up which line or part I love the most, as I love it from first word to the very last word. ❤️

And Charmi's creations ⭐️ Along with Abie's pestering ⭐️

Rosey this is for you ❤️ 🤗

Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago