THE INVISIBLE LOVE PART 3 ON PAGE 11

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in this forum i gave my first lovestrory and i couldnt believe everyone give me this much support.. and after FOR YOU ONLY this is my 2nd story which is quite big.. i dont know how much big this is. last time i thought for you only will be a os only then that become ss and finally now ff.. so cant give guranty of it. lets see its journey how much. hope like before you all will shower love through your comments.. here my 2nD FF the invisible love.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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THE INVISIBLE LOVE

definitely yash and aarti main characters still some more characters needed here..


Character sketch


Yash scindhiya : a simple guy 26 years old, lives with his mother and younger sister.. loves them specially his sister.. he working in a multinational company. they are well established.. love to stay simply with his small family

Aarti sen: 22 years old.. loved to live happily and always smiling. But she is not as everyone, others natural girls.. her mental condition is not like 22 years old girl. she don't speak much but when speak then like 10 year old girl.but sometime she behave so maturely and understand many things.. Love her niece palak so much, her one and only friend.

Gayetri scindhiya: yash's mother and a dependent lady. after her husband's death she controlled her both son and daughter with so much love and care and tried to give everything.

Paridhi scindhiya: 21 years old a bubbly girl. Her life in her brother. Always love to tease him and pulling his leg but in answer of his brother's.

Vidhi dasgupta: aarti's elder sister, she is 9 year elder than aarti. Love aarti like she is her daughter. Lives with her husband, mother in law, only daughter palak and her sister aarti

Sobha and satyendra sen: vidhi and aarti's parents but now they no more.

Palak dasgupta: a 8 year old li'l girl.. shadow of her masi. only she can understand what aarti want to say if she is silent also.


Prologue: scroll down..


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Prologue

Yash: she is simple.. so simple.. there was no special thing in her.. long hair, beautiful eyes, first time I saw her she is in simple jeans and top.. sometime I think I didn't notice her then just saw her but now when I close me eyes then find her in that get up, then understand if then I didn't notice her then how I remember so well our first meeting?? I don't know how she set in my mind from then, and when I last time I saw her cant forget that moment also.. a strange feeling, don't know why so??

Paridhi: you love her so much.. hai na bhaiya??

Yash looked at her: no pari, I don't think I love her, I just saying you how is she, but that also not total.

Pari: then what all this? What all this feelings if you not love her?

Yash: I don't know re, we just good... yash stopped in middle, "actually we not even good friends, I don't think we become friends also,, but.."


this was the Prologue.. if all will like this then i'll star this story,, want to know views of everyone..then i can start exctly.. thank you..😊


PART 1

PART 2

PART 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very interesting prologue Jhil!! Please update soon dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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intresting prolouge... waiting for the story.. update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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different plot and different title... very interesting jhil
would love to be a part of it 😃
awesome prologue jhil...

FOR U ONLY. ... always will remain as the one of the best stories so far me
congrats for the New story jhi ⭐️ 😃

Will be waiting for the update 😃
happy Holi dear 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Will be an interesting journey Jhil...am ready for the experience...interesting 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The prologue sounds interesting...congo for ur 2nd FF jhil👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ANOTHER LOVEY PIECE😳
INTERESTING PROLOGUE😆😆😆
THE GIRL IS FOR SURE AARTHI😳😳😳
THE CHARM CHER SKETCH GIVES A GREAT PLAN IF THE STORY😳😳😳
COME ON WITH ANOTHER BAN😆
I'm Waiting😳😡😡
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Originally posted by: caller123

Very interesting prologue Jhil!! Please update soon dear..

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thanx kate di.. first comment was yours..
will try to update soon..

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