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kmfan_2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: vinnas
wow wow you just fabolus ..beyond our expectations..so smart ...
revelations ..how beautifully smartly justified tht title ..
earlier thinking aarthi playing game but never thought yash also not behind ..he too played very well to choose his love ...

Thank you so much Chandu dear...I wanted you all to keep guessing that's why ---- so that I could end my OS based on your guesses each time thinking of a different one!😳

so the other chart who cupid btn them is aaurishi the one actully married..wink emos...
Got this idea from a film...😛

aftre revleations aarya moving game wow cherry on cake ..romantic..

Life without romance ---no no for me...😳

like yash we too want soo many like this stories frm you...keep do whenver possible..
truly thrilled so much...

have a happy time...
love u dear..

Thank you so much!!!!!🤗

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

That was super read the last two parts what and amazing twist both were single and had a cover story to avoid unwanted relationships/ attention!! Enjoyed a lot you really do have great ideas for stories and excute them brilliantly!!

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Sweetu

@SwtuAryan_Ishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Awesome update di..😊
Read entire OS just now..
So many twists and turns..so many tests..😲
Thats why your stories are always different from others..👏
Superrbbb OS..loved it 😛

Edited by SweetyAaryan - 11 years ago

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jhil

@jhillyarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

wow, ths was a wodrfull story with awsm cncpt.👏. kp surprissing us like this..

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roserosey

@roserosey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

the story is started in an unexpected way and ended in a very unexpected manner...lot of revelations for aarya and lot of suspenses for us⭐️...

i found it to be entirely different and very interesting one from what u have written so far...👏👏

so aarya sailed in same boat till the very end...😉

i enjoyed reading it 😃😃...

thank u so much for the suspenseful OS shanthi😃...

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: pvejani

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: chitsri65
With the twist that continued - must say that suspense and the thrill continued till the tests reached its climax --- both were single ⭐️⭐️⭐️...and the last bit of romance...I feel this is just outstanding...it stands apart👏 SIMPLY for the unique thought..but then most of your work fall on those lines. Loved and waiting for many more...Thank U.

Thanks dear...and this has really distracted me from my SS...😳

I am finding it difficult to get serious now...😆

Thanks for enjoying...actually I myself did not know how I would end it yesterday..kept waiting for responses to make it different every time...😊

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: disha_rajdev
😆😃 such a wonderful twist.
I just guessed may be Aarthi was unmarried and no idea about Yash's marital status.
Was fifty fifty about it.😆
After it was revealed. Haha,it was an unexpected twist ever !!!
Good job,Shanthi sis.👍🏼
Really love the twists and turns👏

Thank you so much my dear Disha...I too decided to keep Yash...that way right at the end...a sudden idea...😛

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Shashi1984
Hey! Read all parts in one go. It's superb! Filled with so much suspense but in the end It's all revealed. Loved the way they both tested each other.

Thanks for giving such a beautiful OS. Waiting for many more to come...

Thank you so much Shashi dear...and I will always write when an idea comes...😛