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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry dear for the late reply but what u gave here is a simple twist mysterious story
i had different assumptions at different point so this update sweety.. hihi here is list them out..

in the first chapter i thought arthi and yash are friends and felt good but as i read more.. arthi was developing some like for yash even after being married.. so i got an idea she is having love after marriage on yash 😆

then u revealed that there is a clone like her and she also came with married arthi going to her hubby... so at the time i was happy yash got a new hope in his life as he too lost his wife,,

after that another twist came old arthi is not arthi (arushi) and the new one is only arthi 😃 so i still was in idea she was a widow but u broke that also with another update and said she is acting to test yash and i was like this (OH god still this little girl has how many secrets !!!)

but this time it came from yash that he did not get married too and take care of the kids alone .. finally yash passed her test 😉 and i was like this 🤢 (uff finally suspense over !!! 🤣)

and her tests continued even after marriage great going arthi ⭐️
and a big applause to my princess Shanti for confusing me and our beloved fellow mates of forum superbly 😆

loved it so much dear 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

arre socha tha ki aise tanhaaiy hogi

gamm o sagaar hoga

kuch shikhwa shikayat hogi

kuch udassi bahut sari yaadien hongi

per ye kya yeh toh imtihaan nkilaa

jisme na koi haara no koi aanka

bas jeeta ek dusre ka saath

sangni saathi aur humsafar zindagi bhar ka

Hey Shanthi as you suggested read in one go hmm you never ever stop me ameze me saale dono draam e bazz nikle khoda kya nikla kya

really this is how im finding mind boggling dear loved your style

ek dam mast 😉👏👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Shanti 👏
Don't know how I missed this OS. I'm lucky that I saw it and read it in one go. You've left me speechless, Once Again 👏

Loved all the twists and suspense. In first part I felt that Aarti was a widow. Then in the second part, I somehow knew that she's Arpita.
But I had never expected the twist of twin sister and the test.

Loved loved loved it. I seriously don't have words to praise you and your writing. You are ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maha9

Sorry dear for the late reply but what u gave here is a simple twist mysterious story

i had different assumptions at different point so this update sweety.. hihi here is list them out..

in the first chapter i thought arthi and yash are friends and felt good but as i read more.. arthi was developing some like for yash even after being married.. so i got an idea she is having love after marriage on yash 😆

then u revealed that there is a clone like her and she also came with married arthi going to her hubby... so at the time i was happy yash got a new hope in his life as he too lost his wife,,

after that another twist came old arthi is not arthi (arushi) and the new one is only arthi 😃 so i still was in idea she was a widow but u broke that also with another update and said she is acting to test yash and i was like this (OH god still this little girl has how many secrets !!!)

but this time it came from yash that he did not get married too and take care of the kids alone .. finally yash passed her test 😉 and i was like this 🤢 (uff finally suspense over !!! 🤣)

and her tests continued even after marriage great going arthi ⭐️
and a big applause to my princess Shanti for confusing me and our beloved fellow mates of forum superbly 😆

loved it so much dear 🤗


Thank you so much Maha...I've been writing so many stories that many a time I forget to acknowledge your comments...thanks dear...

Lots of love...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

arre socha tha ki aise tanhaaiy hogi

gamm o sagaar hoga

kuch shikhwa shikayat hogi

kuch udassi bahut sari yaadien hongi

per ye kya yeh toh imtihaan nkilaa

jisme na koi haara no koi aanka

bas jeeta ek dusre ka saath

sangni saathi aur humsafar zindagi bhar ka


Wah...kya baat hai!!! Loved it dear...


Hey Shanthi as you suggested read in one go hmm you never ever stop me ameze me saale dono draam e bazz nikle khoda kya nikla kya

really this is how im finding mind boggling dear loved your style

ek dam mast 😉👏👏


Thank you my dear...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Wow Shanti 👏

Don't know how I missed this OS. I'm lucky that I saw it and read it in one go. You've left me speechless, Once Again 👏

Thanks Nikki...😊😳

Loved all the twists and suspense. In first part I felt that Aarti was a widow. Then in the second part, I somehow knew that she's Arpita.
But I had never expected the twist of twin sister and the test.

Loved loved loved it. I seriously don't have words to praise you and your writing. You are ⭐️


😳 🤗

Shukriya!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sweet dreams 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
😃👏
Last year woman s day special😃

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Edited by roserosey - 10 years ago

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