AarYa OS ' First Karva Chauth'

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caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Unres my comment on page 1

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mick89

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Im silent reader...

Nice update😊

Wow!!!!!!😉

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Ash

@melodica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

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its beautiful Nikki di...👏👏

all those promises...OMG...

continue wid MTB nd dont loose ur interest coz ur readers r only 2 increase...u r a wonderful writer indeed !!⭐️🤗

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Sri_Radha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Great update nikki di...👏👏👏

Awesome os...

Even i expected in the serial that yash heard from their talk...So happy after reading this os.

Liked the way yash heard the aarti confrontation and her confession to shoba..Liked the way he didn't get angry to aarti and understood her..

Yash-Dubey conversation nice..The way he told to them its their first karva chauth and also he wants ansh also to be their home...So wonderfully written...

Loved aarya Vrath breaking scene...

Aarti was surprised yash nature and yash assured her to say full truth..That was lovely part

Aarya promises scene so amazing and cute...Liked yash naughty..and loved their moment

Fantastic ending

Once again superb os

Thanks for pm🤗

Edited by Sri_Radha - 11 years ago

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saf24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Nikki this was simply fantastic. I was glad you wrote this scene in a different light with Yash actually overhearing Shobha and Aarti's conversation so that he could realise how much she loves him and the fact that hiding the truth was not really something she wanted to do. Beautifully written as always. Loved every bit of it.

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tleshni

@tleshni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

hey there Nikki..

Liked this OS of yours alot👏...since it's an alternate version of what the Cvs gave us..sans all the drama😆... I liked how Yash wasnt all Hulk mode after getting to know the truth and he truly redeemed himself by accepting Aarti's flaws as well...

it gave me a warm feeling to know that Aarya didnt do the deed that day itself..but decided to get to know each other..I can already imagine hw cute they will b if they go for dates etc..😉..Anyway thanks again for this OS...😃..hope to see similar stuff...

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Anuja

@anu93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Hey Nikki Thats such a Awesomeee part yaar😳

I like this understanding matured Yash who is ready to listen Aarti's side and accept her with that👍🏼

Best part was that confession part 😳 So sweet of Yashuu😳

Naughty Yashu want 50 to 100 kisses each day as Aarti's punishment!!☺️

Nikki dear plzz continue with this OS soon

Edited by anu93 - 11 years ago

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Ken309

@Ken309

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Omg, this was really a good one.
Really wish something like this did happen in the show..
and really hope u do continue on your other stories soon, u are really a talented writer *hugs*