Aarya SS - Little Cupid Angel Part 4 pg 12

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jayshu17

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Posted: 12 years ago

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Shashi1984
It's superb. Loved attitude of Yash and deal of Aarti for marrying for seven months. Curious to know the answer of Aarti.

Thanks for your comments on this story! Haha...I thought no one would read this story since the characters are not the typical types or even likeable...especially Aarti's character since everyone prefers a nice gal...But I feel that this a role I would like to see Kratika in and decided to just pen down my thoughts! So thank you for reading this story!

You will find out the answer in the next update!

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: roserosey
omg great job sabrina👏👏

fantastic descriptionn of yash andaarthis characters👏👏⭐️
they r indeed different very different from what we saw in pv😉⭐️

is being an orphan andlacking of love was the reason behind aarthis cold behaviour??
and yash why he is hating sp??

want to see how this hatred cum deal relation turns into love...⭐️⭐️

awesome job sabrina⭐️

Hey, thanks so much for your continual support even for this story!

Yes, I hope from the updates the readers get an idea how Yash and Aarti are like! Anyway, the setting and tone of this story is very different from the typical FFs and PV and the characters are not even likeable so thank you for still reading this story!

Hmmm..I cant ans your qn abt why Aarti behaves the way she does cause that will be revealed when the story unfolds...but it will take some time before love will come to them...

Thank you for reading!

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@ksfan2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

wow...love the update..it is really nice..loving the attitude..

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Chitra_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Mindblowing brainy episode...two headstrong personalities ...try to one up each other...the meet and the deal...fantastic...and the last parting shot 'Payal'...'You can keep her...that is your problem'...very businesslike...but poor Arti...let's see whether she will be able to part 'Payal and Yash' after the seven months deal...generally these kind of personalities are very weak and emotional...lets see...

Am loving this story and waiting to see how these two are going to melt and hope Payal will play this cupid part of connecting these two. Will be looking forward for your next update.

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AntaresVega

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Sabrina,

this is such a beautiful story. You've made two really unlikable characters. I love their current personality. I'm waiting to see how their personalities grow as love blooms. They're going to deny it at first but Payal, she'll be the one. Yash and Aarti have 7 months to fall in love. Or what if Yash miserably breaks her heart at the end of 7 months and they really get divorced but soon realizes it and goes to find Aarti. And voila, they marry again but this time, not for business but for true love and for Payal.

Too much speculation but you've made yourself a very nice setting and the story can progress beautifully in a multitude of ways.

Keep Posting

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Folla
awesome update super wow yash and aarti meetingso nice and the deal wow i cant wait the next part update soon pls

Thank you so much for your interest in the story...I am glad you like the meeting and did not find it boring or the characters too irritating...I do not think that the characters are likeable at all and most ppl may be put off by them...I will try to update soon! 😊

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Zetter
Dayunnn Aarti and Yash are two cold people...I guess losing her adoptive parents was very hard on her
I can't wait for Aarti to meet Payal and for the wee one to melt the former's heart 😛 😉

Great update 👏 👏 👏...Awaiting the next chapter 😃

Thank you very much for being supportive and reading this story too! Yup, both Yash and Aarti are cold and their characters are not appealing so I am glad you are still interested to read!

Hmm...the story will reveal why Aarti behaves the way she does but it wont be too soon...

Ya, Aarti will meet Payal in the next update so you will see how that goes!

Thanks for reading...

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sb1410
Awesome update dear! Aarti the business woman who gets to the point no beating around the bush, Yash who claim he has no interest in his father's business is planning to give this business marriage a chance he is attracted to aarti in their first meeting.Two people who are not parent material are going to be parents this is so interesting can't wait to read about aarya and payal journey to becoming a family.

Hey thank you so much for your interest in this story too! I am surprised and appreciative of the support as I do not think most pepole would like the story as the characters are just not easy to identify with or likeable! And most people would probably at least want a nice character to root for but for this story both of them are not even appealing!

So thanks for the interest...

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Zetter

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: akui1984
Thank you very much for being supportive and reading this story too! Yup, both Yash and Aarti are cold and their characters are not appealing so I am glad you are still interested to read!

Hmm...the story will reveal why Aarti behaves the way she does but it wont be too soon...

Ya, Aarti will meet Payal in the next update so you will see how that goes!

Thanks for reading...

My pleasure Dear 😊...Yeah they are very different from how we've known them so this intrigues me more 😉

I can't wait for the first meeting between Aarti and Payal , it should be fun haha and you take your time revealing why Aarti is the way she is 😃

Until next time...Keep rocking 🤗