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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sb1410

Love this update it is brilliant, mind blowing everything was so descriptive while reading one can visualize the scene in every little detail👏. Aarti's emotional and physical state, yash's confused, frightened, not understanding what is happening wanting to comfort aarti but unable too,so he does the best thing he can reaching out to the one person who he knows can and will understand and help them, his mother who will take charge of the situation, she will not only be the source of comfort for aarti but in her motherly arms will find peace .Aarti description was that of a raped and battered woman in those few lines my heart went out for her her fear, pain came out beautifully done 👏 the family reaction of confusion, ammaji quick to blame 😡 there is a crisis and this person is behaving like an 🤬 happy both G3 and SP put a stop to her. Aman dear friend he knows Yash so well love and care for him the support yash needs.The ecene where aarti calls out to yash and allows him to come close and comfort her finally falling asleep in his arm shows that not only she trust him but still loves him also gives him hope that all will be well given time. What else can I say except that I enjoyed it hats off to you Nikki 👏 🤗❤️

So Akash is the cousin nice 😃

Hey Sharlene, so finally I made everyone to write bigger comments

Sharlene my biggest problem is that I can never explain anything in brief, I've to give detailed explanation / description on all major/ important things. And I don't like to post is until I'm at least 70-80% satisfied. (I can never be 100% satisfied while updating) and thus I end up writing everything in detail. The best example is this reply on your comment 🤔 😆
Yash was shocked and confused when he heard those pleading words from Aarti, he tried his best to console her but to no avail. He knew the only person who can help Aarti is Gayatri Ma, so in a subconscious state he runs to her for help. Poor fellow,didn't even knew what was coming his way 😭

Aarti was so brutally reminded of the incident that's why she was scared of Yash, as Yash was the reminder of her horrible past 😭
Ammaji will never miss a chance to taunt her 😡. But soon she'll also get her share of punishment.

Though Aarti at that moment saw Yash as a predator, but deep down she knows that Yash will be her savior. And that's why when she saw Yash comforting Palak, Aarti also reached out to him for that same comfort.

Yes Aakash is her cousin 😳

I'm honored Sharlene by such beautiful compliment for me ❤️





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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Abie10

Abie what python did to her is the most despicable thing a person could do to another one 😡.
First Gayatri's part of the story will come and then Aarti's. So I'm sure you'll need tons of tissue boxes 😭
Yes I agree with you that it was good that I made Aakash her cousin. Well that's the advantage of writing your own story, you can make chances as and when you want 😎
😆
And this is for you, once again 🤗



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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Shwty

Just caught from chapter 9. I had missed a lot. I was insulting Aarti throughout until I read the most recent chapter. Thought i would hat Aarushi when you introduced her but she gives good advice to Yash. Aman and Arpita a true friends. Now I am wondering if parshant forced himself on Aarti before or after marraige. If Palak was conceived when it happened that would mean after marraige but that wouldn't explain why she agreed to marry in the first place.

I remember you, you used to always Hit the Like Button, but then you suddenly stopped. (I completely understand and believe me I'm not at all offended with it )
So you can imagine my happiness when you not only came back but commented also.
Actually when I introduced Aarushi, I had sort of a different image for her (I wanted to use to make Aarti jealous). But as the story progressed, suddenly I felt that this will be a right and better way to show her character.
And your questions will be answered as the story progresses.

And once again welcome back to "Meant To Be" ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ns1970

Wow as I am sure everyone else must be saying this update was emotional so so sad for aarti 😭

She had to go through so much with that animal prashant for having Done that to any woman he must not have feeling for her.
Good job Nikki 👍🏼now eagerly waiting on next update

Thanks Ns. 🤗
I agree with you it was an very emotional update, it was for me also, more than anyone else, as I had to visualize the scene from so many angles before finally penning it down 😭

Prashant didn't had any feeling for anyone, except for himself 😡

Next update next week 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: ketki61

hey

very emotional and moving update
had tears reading the entire narration = it was perfect
very true to life and guilt / understanding each other and the mental trauma very well brought by u
waiting for an awesome update from u
all the best
k

Wow Ketki after a long time I got an comment from you, I'm so happy 🤗

Thanks sweety for you sweet and wonderful comment and compliment.

Yes it was a very emotional update. The upcoming updates will be more emotional than this one, specially Aarti's part 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Thanks Surish 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: kmfan_2

A brilliant update dear...


Loved every bit of it...

Thanks Shanti 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Awesome update Nikki!


And congratulations on the 3rd thread!

Thanks Nina 😊

I believe that this is the first time you are commenting 😊. (I know that you always Hit the Like Button) I'm so happy for that 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: princess121993

Firstly i want to congratulate



Firstly, a very hearty congratulation for ur 16000th post. party time di. This shows how much dedicated you are to this forum. In such a short time u made 16000 post. Its not at all a small thing... I am so happy and proud of u you rock and keep rocking di...keep smiling always...

Charmi you won't believe it, that the last 2000 comments are because of my FF/ OS only 😲. Cause I've literally stopped making posts in the MF, other than relying on others posts

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Coming to the promo

Firstly i just love the pic u used for the promo. U know what this was the pic i had guess u would use but i didnot mentionthis pic seems so real and so matchable for the current situation u mentioned in the promo..n the hug...its is so full of warmth, care, love and everything..


Yes that pic was perfect for this promo, as it depicts perfect emotions on AarYa's situation. Aarti is all shattered and heart broken. And an completely shattered Yash is consoling her 😭👏
and after reading the promo, i am and still shocked. OMG aarti went through hella lot of hell...and something more is about to come. OMG...what happened more? what more did that python did to her?omg...now i am scared...but i am still happy with the fact that aarti is now getting support from yash..which is the most important thing. Cant wait for this track to get unfold. Do try updating soon (as per your convinience)...

Charmi that python had done so many horrible things to the poor soul 😡

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Coming to the special note
di, the way you were spontaneously giving an update, i was so happy with u and proud about it. But you are right when u do some stuff this spontaneously u r bound to get tired. So its normal. DOnt worry...I agree writing emotional scenes are really very hard but the way u have written this update...i salute u for this...u just rock...omg i just cannot imagine if this update had the capacity to make me sit still the entire time i read the update, what will the other upcoming updates do to me..
I am loving ur x-large updates very much...and u dont need to be sorry for anything,,,,its your story...u can show it anyway u want...n i really agree with the fact that no one is born good or bad its the circumstances which make one bad/good/...a very well point u have pointed out here..di...awesome job...excellent job(u said u cannot write quotes, are u sure?)
Keep rocking di and i am going to follow you where ever u go...hehehehe...n i will always like to be ur support system...always (as u support me for eveything)
so keep rocking and keep updating...will be eagerly waiting for ur every update...

Charmi I admit that I was mentally exhausted. But my fear was that, if I write in such a state I won't be able to do justice to all scenes and emotions that were so important in this chapter, plus upcoming updates also. So I took my time to write it, and you can see the end result. I'm so happy with my decision. 😳

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Now finally coming to the update


As i mentioned earlier and also in the pm and i am also mentioning here...

This is the awesomest update di...very emotional...yet very strong

The way you have shown aartis emotions...from fear, to cry to shock..everything ...its just fantastic...i am literally out of words to describe how i felt reading it... i felt as if i was imagining all the scenes...i felt as if i was feeling very emotion u mentioned for aarti in this scene...I was sitting still throughout the update...(my friend was visiting me...she kept talking and i kept reading this update without paying attention to her..she saw my shock face and she got scared looking at my expression as i was so involved in the story..for once everyting stopped for me)

Charmi I've already told you what I went through before, during and after writing this update.
Writing on Aarti's and Yash's emotional reactions was literally very stressful for me also.
So is this the same friend who is doing the Cooking for you 😳


OMG...aarti really went through hell...due to this freaking prashantand the only reason he did this to aarti was to take revenge from yash...he spoiled her life...i just feel so pity for aarti and so angry and frustated towards that stupid urghh(u know who i am talking about)

She even got scared of yash when he came in for her...n this was bound to happen...as he had crossed his limits...(well it was his frustation but still..he did cross his limits)

The past two years Aarti was literally living a painful life, which was worse than Hell, that's why she had lost all the interest in living.
What Yash was about to do to her, brought out those memories to her, that's why she was so scared of him 😭. But Yash stopped on the right time, before he could do more damage.


i am so glad gayatri was there was aarti everytime...but i dont understand when gayatri was aware of the entire truth, y did she let aarti suffer? what was the point in that? (i know u will soon answer this question as the story progresses)

You'll get your answer pretty soon. 😳



Poor yash even he started feeling guilty for aarti...For a bit i was angry as he should not have forced himself on her...but on the other side i feel bad for him as he with many other family members were always in dark the entire time...finally the truth came out...the bitter truth..that aarti and prashant never had a happy life and prashant made her life hell...yash will now start feeling more guilty and even more as gayatru confronted him with those bitter words...n omg slapped him..

Yash deserved that slap as he was about to do such despicable act. But we can't blame him also, as he too went through so much in the past two and a half years. 😭

in a way i support gayatri a little as she cared for aarti very much...but i am also way too angry on her as she was the one who hid the truth from the family...if she had taken the step to tell the truth to yash atleast, this day would not have come...

Again this point will also be answered later 😳


i loved the way u showed angry, confused, full of guilty feeling yash...trying to find points and joinning them...his anger and frustations towards aman is also justified as he also hid from him...yash would have never expected aman to hide such things for him

At this point Yash is feeling angry and betrayed by everyone, from Gayatri, to Aarti to Aman 😭

i knew it...i knew it akash and aarti were cousins...i knew it..poor aarti...literally feel bad for her

Yes Aakash is Aarti's cousin and yes you guessed it right 😉

again loved yash and palak scene...it was so very very touchy and awesome...palak is seriously an angel...she could do the magic which no one could do...she could calm her yash papas anger...this is so adorable...

Palak is an ANGEL, that's why Aarti always calls her Angel and there's a reason for that too, which will come later 😉

the last scene was the awesomest...the way u showed aarti's changed emotion for yash seeinghim taking care of her daugther...this is jut brilliant...the way u described those two situations through dr kiran...brilliant...have no words di...this is just the best...i love iit...i love it...i love it...

Charmi believe it or not the last scene is my favorite in this chapter. I simply loved it and I loved writing it. 😳

thanks for giving us such a wonderful update di...i think this is again one of ur best work...u just simply rock...

keep giving us ur wonderful updates...i am greedy for more now...

please update soon coz i cannot wait for the promo scene...

Charmi you've no idea what this beautiful and heartfelt comment of yours means to me. It clearly shows how much you love and are so attached to "Meant To Be". ❤️ 🤗


Charmi my comments are in the highlighted part.

Love you so much sweety ❤️ 🤗

Charmi this is the 75th post/ comment on third thread AND that also on the TENTH PAGE 😲 🥳



Edited by lovely_nikki - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

OMG Kate my first Long Comment in this chapter
Your hate for Prashant will only keep on increasing by each update 😡
He didn't do it his bhabhi, but he did it to the woman that Yash finally fell in love with 😡

Gayatri was with her every step of the way and she'll always be there for her.

You are right Kate, it was really stressful for me to write this chapter as it was so emotional, and I dread to even think about the upcoming ones 😭 so you also get prepared for it.

@ Bold
And Kate I'm so touched with your words so all I'll do is ❤️ 🤗





I'm getting prepared to 😭😭😭 in the coming chapters.
Oh Nikki! This is for you.❤️🤗

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