My version of 'PV'- part 6-10, page 10. - Page 4

Episode 5

episode 5 is a light episode..paridhi is really a stupid😡..

Episode - 3
All i could say i was grinning at the dining table scene , ansh talking with his mouthful yash telling him not to talk, and SP asking his grandkids about their mom joining the dinner making them happy. yash chokes while eating all of them get worried ansh reminds how his mom use to pat, OMG buaji worried for yash and tells aarti to rub yashji back 😆 this is what i like buaji most, aww nikki thats brilliant write up 🤗 aarya feeling embarrassed then ansh pulling his pratiek chachu leg and pradhi turn to feel embarrassed 😛
pankaj handling ansh. SP and G3 part was too good.

Episode - 4
Sp tells yash and aarti to talk to G3 and signals other to leave away from there makes aarti feeling awkward and her yashji comforts her so cute.
shoba ma concerned about aarti. when aarti tries to tell her problem to her yashji again kids disturb them.🤣

Episode - 5
Kids sleeping with aarya palak cries and mumbles during her sleep and aarti hugs and comforts her.❤️👍🏼👏😊

Really awesome update on PV Nikki so I read 5 chapters at time leaving all my important work aside. I am speechless and have no words to comment. Every sentence ...sorry every word written by you is so fantastic and accurate s no way I can find any mistake but below are my sincere feelings:

While reading your episodes I felt I am watching Punar vivaah as
you have re-written the story so beautifully.
Every conversation and connection between the personalities are woven so carefully one after another and nothing left out.
I wish this was there in earlier Punar Vivaah but they have left so many tracks half without giving much importance
I am extremely happy that the PV written by you will be exactly what we wished and to every ones satisfaction.
I thank you for sacrificing your valuable time for giving such as nice update with your hilarious writing skills and I am quite confident that forthcoming chapters will be more than great.
Finally, Hats off to your simple , natural & beautiful but extraordinary imagination 🤗
LOVE YOU NIKKI and eagerly waiting for next...

Congratulations on 15000 posts Nikki!!! 🥳

1st episode- I like how Yashji has changed and it is catching Aarti by surprise yet she's still reluctant to really believe that he has changed. You can really take advantage of that for some masala since it's quite hard to change overnight, and since at this point Yashji isn't really in love with Aarti but just cares for her, it's okay for him to still feel a bit guilty but change slowly.

2nd Episode- I loved the kids in that scene very innocent and clearly affected by their parents behavior and decision, proving that parents too our human and make errors, so it's normal that they have committed mistakes in judgement but I look forward to seeing how they help themselves and the children overcome this insecurities in the future. I loved the balance of the episode with vithi-pankaj and pari-prateeik scenes. Their all showing their natural characteristics, so thank you for keeping in mind the foundation of their Individual characteristics.

3rd Episode- I loved the whole family scene with Ansh helping out by bringing about flashbacks to the early days of Aarya's PV and it made me very nostalgic!

4th Episode- Gayatri was very homily and I loved how protective Yashji is, he understands that he has a lot to do to earn Aarti's trust so he will work hard for it. Aarti is still very much in love with Yashji, she doesn't have to say it, it shows with the way that she was willing to spend her entire life loving him and expecting none in return, but the change in behavior is catching her by surprise! Love it! Shoba is right to scold Aarti for running away and also still not telling Yashji about her pregnancy complications.

5th Episode- The Aarya and the Kids scene was amazing as usual!!! Palak is again insecure since she clearly remembers what life was like once when she was motherless then she struggled to accept Aarti as her mother, only to experience Aarti leaving her as well, so Aarti has to make it up to the girls.
Paridhi as usual seems to be digging her own grave, I wander where exactly this story is going to end up.

Well done Nikki! Thank you for all the hard work you have put into this!