My version of 'PV'- part 6-10, page 10.

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My Version of Our Beloved PV

Hi PVians, as promised I'm here with my version of PV, ( you can take it as an weekly OS also). I'll try to write at least five parts ( episodes) at a time. 😊
I'll start it from the day Yash brings Aarti and Ansh back from lalithpur. Yash and Aarti doesn't know that it was Prashant who helped and saved Aarti and Ansh in lalithpur and helped Yash to meet his wife and son.
Prashant won't make an entry till later, and Yash will realize his love for Aarti on his own, without anyone's help.
I'll try to write Ansh, Palak, Payal's scenes as much as possible.

And I'll try to add Pankaj-Vidhi, Prateek-Paridhi, and others also.

So here's my first installment. I've numbered them as episode no.1, episode no.2 and so on.
I'll call Bauji- SP
Buaji - MB( for Maya Bua)
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1- Whoever reads it will hit the Like Button ( and that's an order ) or else 😡 ( you won't get PM for the next installment) 😆
2 - Whoever reads it will comment on all episodes individually and not combined ( it took me so much effort to write these, so I can expect this much from my friends) 🤗

3 - If you don't like any part, please feel free to tell me and point it out to me what you didn't liked, as this'll only help me to improve my writing. 😊

4 - If you want any specific scene related to any character, please PM me, so that I can use it later. Don't mention it in the thread as I want it to be a surprise and when I write that scene, that time I'll reveal your name. 😉

So what are you waiting for start reading and commenting.

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My (Our) PV starts.

Here Gayatri is still in hospital in Delhi for her knee surgery.

Part - 1


SP gives them permission to enter in SM after Yash and Aarti promised that they'll work on their marriage together.
Yash tells Aarti to go in their room and he'll be there soon. Aarti enters the room and is overwhelmed and over comes with emotions. She looks around the room and places her hand on her tummy " don't worry baby, you, your mumma and your brother are home with your father and sisters, we are home where we belong. Yes it'll take some time for your father to completely accept me, but I know he'll accept me and my love for him. "
A small smile comes on her face. Aarti turns around and sees Yash standing behind her with a glass of juice.
Yash " Aartiji why are you still standing here? You are still weak and need your rest. So finish this juice and go and freshen up and then go and take rest. We have to take care of our baby and we will do it together."
Before Aarti could say anything, Yash's phone rings. It was Shobha Ma.

Shobha " Yashji have you reached home and did you find Aarti and Ansh?"

Yash " Yes Shobha Ma we are home. I've found your runaway daughter. "

Shobha " Thank god that you found them and brought them home. Now I'll give Aarti a piece of my mind. How could she do something so stupid like this?"

Yash " Well Shobha Ma, you yourself will have to ask your daughter that, as it is she won't tell me anything. And who better than you to pull your beloved daughters ears. But to do that you and Bauji will have to come here for dinner. Bauji (SP) has ordered that today in dinner every dish will be Ansh's favorite and as per his wosh. So I'm sure you won't want to miss the feast. Besides, I won't allow Aartiji to go out as she's still very weak and needs complete rest."

Shobha " I understand Yashji and I'm so happy to see you taking care of Aarti like this. We'd love to join you all for dinner in the evening. So see you then."

Yash disconnects the phone. Aarti is looking at him with wide eyes. She's still in a shocked state to see such a huge change in Yash.

Yash " Ok Aartiji finish your juice and take some rest."

Aarti finishes the juice and goes to,the bathroom to change. In the bathroom she's thinking how she'll tell Yash about the complications in her pregnancy?

Aarti comes out of the bathroom. Yash is standing by his wardrobe looking for his clothes. Just then Aarti gets a dizzy spell and is about to fall when Yash catches her.
Yash " Aartiji you are still very weak, that's why you need complete rest"
He bends down and picks up Aarti in his arms and carries her towards the bed and makes her sit on the bed. Then places some pillows behind her back for support.
( AarYa eyelock andYeh Dil Hai - YDH playing in the back ground).
Just then kids barge in and breaks their eye lock.
Palak and Payal goes to Aarti and Ansh goes and hugs Yash.
Palak " Mumma we both missed you so much. We love you so much. Please don't ever leave us again and go" she starts to cry and hugs Aarti. Payal also starts to cry and joins in the hug. "
Aarti kisses them each and hugs them back with tears rolling down her eyes" I promise you my angels that I'll never ever leave you again like this. Mumma also loves you both a lot and she also can't leave without you."

Ansh looks at Yash" Even I missed Papa and you both so much. I was all alone on that road, when that Dost ( Friend) Uncle came and he helped mumma. That uncle was so good, but you are The Best, Papa. And I missed you so much"

Yash looks at Ansh and goes and sits on the bed and hugs his three kids. " And now we all will stay together with each other. No one will leave anyone"
Aarti looks at Yash, who looks back at her and they share another intense eye lock. ( Again YDH playing in the BG).

Part 1 Ends
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Part - 2

Scene continues.

Yash " Ok kids your mumma needs her rest now. So lets go and let her rest. Plus I've to go and bring Ansh's favorite dessert ' Garam Garam Jalebi's'" and he winks at Ansh. Palak and Payal giggles and Aarti also smiles.
Payal " Mumma do you know that Ansh has allowed us also to ask for our favorite dish, so I've asked Vidhi Taiji to make my favorite Matar Paneer and Palak Didi's favorite Aloo Gobhi along with Ansh's and Papa's favorite Samosas" and all three starts dancing on the bed.
Aarti laughs " But what about your fathers favorite Karele ki Subzi?"

Ansh " Eww mumma. Only Papa can eat that Subzi and remember how he made you to eat karele ki Subzi in Mumbai?"
Aarti made a face which increases the trio's laughter. Yash also laughs and picks up Palak and Payal in his arms " Ok that's it, now lets get out of here and let your mumma rest".
They all leave the room laughing and dancing leaving Aarti alone who has tears of happiness rolling down her eyes.

In The Kitchen

Vidhi is busy cooking and Paridhi is helping her.
Vidhi " I wish Mummyji was also here today. She'd be so happy to hear that Aarti is pregnant. Mummyji's dream will soon be fulfilled by Aarti."
Paridhi " Yes bhabhi, today the whole family would've enjoyed the dinner so much along with Shobha Aunty and Dubeyji"
"Vidhi" Pankaj calls Vidhi and she leaves.
Just then Bua enters " MBKK, I'm telling you, now that Aarti has come back and she's pregnant, she'll rest and make the two of you dance on her fingers. Even Gayatri Bhabhi will support her, when she returns, after all Aarti is going to fulfill her dream, MBKK"

Paridhi " Buaji, Aarti bhabhi is not at all like this, she can never sit in one place. Just wait and see, she'll be in the kitchen the moment she freshens up. After all we are having this special dinner for her kids"
Bua " MBKK Paridhi, if that was the case then why she's still not here? It has been more than an 2-3 hours, since they've returned and she hasn't even left her room yet. You are so naive, anyone can fool you with sweet talks, especially that Aarti" Bua scoffs and leaves, leaving Paridhi deep in thoughts and a little angry.

Vidhi's and Pankaj's room.

Vidhi " what is it? Why did you called me? I've got so much work to do for the special dinner in the evening"
Pankaj " Vidhi now that Aarti is here, she and Paridhi are also there to do household chores. You don't have to worry alone regarding the household matters". Pankaj goes near Vidhi and places his hands on her shoulders. " Don't you think that you must pay some attention to your husband also?"
Vidhi removed his hands and moved from there " I know that Aarti and Paridhi are there, but Aarti is still weak and needs rest, else Aarti is not the type to sit and relax. And Paridhi is too young to take responsibility of any kind. It'll take her time to adjust to all this. So I better go and finish my work before Buaji starts with her MBKK" and Vidhi leaves without even asking Pankaj why he had called her.
Which makes Pankaj more angry " Vidhi when will you realize that even your husband needs your time and craves for your company"

In Prateek's and Paridhi's room.

Prateek comes and hugs Paridhi from the behind " Pari, Pari, Pari, I'm so happy today. Yash Bahiya found Aarti Bhabhi and Ansh and brought them home and even accepted their baby. Now I'm sure that soon he'll fall in love with Aarti Bhabhi and then everything will be alright"
Paridhi jerks his hands from her shoulders " Aarti bhabhi, Aarti bhabhi, Aarti bhabhi, that's all you think about. Why can't you think about your wife and her happiness, for once in your life.?"
Prateek is surprised by her outburst and gets angry " I don't understand what problem you have with Yash Bahiya and Aarti bhabhi? How can we be happy when our own family members are fighting to salvage their marriage and their relationship? But how would you understand all this? You care only about yourself and no one else" and Prateek storms out of the room angrily. Leaving a fumed Paridhi behind.

( In this episode I've added Pankaj-Vidhi, Prateek -Paridhi scenes also, as CVs didn't showed us much about their marital relationship)
Part 2 Ends
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Next three episodes in the next post...
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Part - 3

At the Dining Table at dinner that night...

SP" So Ansh are you happy that today everything is your favorite?"
An excited Ansh replies with a mouthful" Yes Dadaji I'm so happy today. I'm having dinner with you and Badi Mummy, Bade Papa ( The Dubey's). Tauji, Chachu, Palak, Payal and Papa"
Yash " Ansh how many times I've told you not to talk when your mouth is full?"
Ansh holds his ears " Sorry Papa, I Forgot" and Yash smiles. And continues to eat.
SP " Ansh will it make you more happy if your Mumma also joins us today for dinner?"
Hearing this all kids starts to jump excitedly. Yash is about to tell them not to jump, when he suddenly chokes on his food. Everyone gets worried.
Ansh " Uff oh! What is there to worry about, all Mumma have to do is pat Papa's back and he'll be al right. Remember when we had dinner after Papa-Mumma's marriage, that time also the same thing had happened and Dadi told mumma to rub Papa's back?"
Yash is still coughing when he looks at Aarti and they both blush with embarrassment.
Bauji " MBKK, Aarti bahu, will you keep on standing there or go and rub Yash's back, look how he's coughing and how his face has turned red"
Aarti goes behind Yash and starts to rub his back. Yash lowers his head and smiles.
Ansh " Palak now even Prateek Chachu will cough just like last time, so that Paridhi Chachi will also rub his back"
Everyone starts laughing at Ansh's comment, while Aarti glares at him and signals him to keep quite. While now it's Prateek's and Paridhi's turn to blush with embarrassment.
Pankaj handles the situation " Ok Chote Nawab, if you want your favorite Jalebi's, then I suggest that you finish your dinner fast" and Ansh happily obliges.
SP" Vidhi, Aarti and Paridhi bahu, today I want you three to come and join us all for dinner. Today I want to see my whole family sitting and enjoying together. It's really a joyous occasion for our family today. Yash has brought his wife and his son, the daughter-in-law, and grandson of this family, back home to where they belong."
Vidhi and Aarti were a little hesitant at first but after Pankaj's and Prateek's and kids insisting they went and sat opposite their respective spouses.
Aarti and Yash look at each other ( YDH music playing in the BG).

SP looks at his family and continues "I'm so happy today. Wish Gayatri was also here with us, she'd have been so happy to see the whole family together and so happy after such a long time".
Dubeyji " seriously Samdhiji, it's really so nice to see your whole family together and thanks for making us a part of this joyous occasion. Today we can proudly say that we took a right decision of this PV."
Yash and Aarti once again looks at each other (YDH music in the BG)

Scene changes.

Everyone is sitting in the living room.

SP receives a call from Gayatri. But before answering he tells everyone" Your Ma doesn't know anything about that has happened in the past one week and I don't want to tell her on the phone. I'll tell her when she comes back home after a week. So I want to tell everyone not to tell her anything"
SP then answers the phone " How are you feeling now Gayatri?"
Gayatri" I'm feeling fine, Ji. Now I just want to come home and see my family, my sons, my bahus and my three little grand kids.
SP " Well in that case Gayatri, you'll have to come home soon as you've to make preparations to welcome another grandchild of ours in our home"
Gayatri was surprised to hear this " what are you saying? We are going to become grandparents soon? Do you mean to say that Aarti bahu is pregnant?"
SP laughed " How can you be so sure that it's Aarti bahu? It can be Paridhi also"
Gayatri " yes it can be Paridhi also, but my heart is saying its Aarti bahu who's going to fulfill me dream. Am I right Aarti bahu?"
Yash looks at Aarti who blushes and lowers her eyes. Yash is mesmerized at Aarti's image standing right in front of him ( once again YDH playing in the BG)

Part 3 Ends
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Part - 4

Gayatri says that she wants to talk with Aarti and Yash together, on the phone. (Just like after the boxing match )
Yash looks at Aarti questioningly. SPLoks at him and laughs " why are you ,looking at her? It's your Ma's wish and you can't refuse to her, so you both better sit and talk with her together"
Yash and Aarti moves towards the sofa and sit on it. SP gives then the phone and signals everyone to leave them alone. Dubeyji goes with SP, and Shobha Ma tells Aarti that she'll wait for her in her room.
Everyone leaves. Aarti is feeling a little awkward, but Yash assuringly puts his hand on her, which surprises Aarti and she looks at him.
Yash smiles and puts the phone on speaker mode, then they both say in unison " Pranam Ma"
Gayatri laughs " Bless you both. And Aarti bahu special blessings to you for giving me such a wonderful news. You have no idea how happy you've made me. I wish I was there right now"
Aarti smiles " How are you feeling Mummyji? And how is your knee? And when are you coming home we all miss you so much"
Gayatri " Arey Aarti bahu, slow down. One question at a time. I'm doing fine and after hearing such wonderful, do you think I'll stay here for long? I'll force your Bauji to bring me home as I want to see you. And Yash what about you? Are you happy with this news or not?"
Yash and Aarti looks at each other" Yes Ma I'm very happy. Now you better take care of yourself, so you can return home soon."
Gayatri " ok I'm keeping the phone now, and I promise that I'll take proper care of myself. But you also promise me that you'll take proper care of Aarti bahu."
Yash promises her and disconnects the phone. Then he turns towards Aarti " Aartiji I think you should go and take some rest now"
Aarti is about to protest, but Yash stops her " Don't worry about the kitchen work, I'm sure Vidhi bhabhi and Paridhi will manage that. And besides Shobha Ma is waiting for you. She'd like to spend some time with you before leaving. By that time I'll go and talk with Dubeyji"
Yash leaves and Aarti also goes to her room, where Shobha is waiting for her. Aarti goes to her and hugs her. She starts to cry and Shobha lets her cry for a while. Then she takes Aarti towards her bed and sits with her.
Shobha " What were you thinking Aarti? Running away like that. Do,you have any idea what we went through? What Yashji went through?
Aarti" I'm sorry Ma for giving all of you so much tension. Because of me you all had to go through so much, specially Ansh and Yashji"
Shobha wipes Aarti's tears " But why did you run like this Aarti?"
Aarti" Ma I got scared. The way Yashji reacted and behaved after what happened between us in Mumbai, it still scares me. I didn't want him to go through the same guilt and harm himself, after he found out that I'm pregnant and the baby the result of what happens that night between us. The thought of him going through the same phase he went through that time, scared me so much that I had to leave"
Shobha surprisingly looks at her " I understand Aarti but you should've given him a chance. The man who accepted Ansh as his own son, why wouldn't have he accepted this child, who is Yashji's own flesh and blood?"
Aarti " I know Ma I doubted him. My trust on him was not strong enough to hold me back here. And I'm really sorry about that. I'll ask him to forgive me for putting him and everyone in the family to through all this misery and pain because of my mistake. I'm sure he'll forgive. He's got a big heart "
Shobha nods " Yes Aarti Yashji is a very nice and understanding person. He'll definitely forgive you. But have you told him yet about your pregnancy complications?"
Aarti " No Ma I didn't got the chance to talk to him"
Shobha " But when are you planning to tell him? You know very well that you shouldn't delay it anymore. So please tell Yashji as soon as possible"
" Aartiji what is it that you have to tell me as soon as possible? Is everything ok?". Shobha and Aarti notices Yash standing at the door. They both looks at each other as little scared.
Shobha Ma " Ok Aarti and Yashji, it's quite late at night, we should get going now, as it's time for your bauji's medicine, which I forgot to bring with me"
Yash says ok and touches her feet. Shobha blesses him and leaves.
Yash walks towards Aarti " Tell me Aartiji what is it that you want to tell me urgently?"
Aarti thinks for a second " Yashji, actually I want to say sorry for running away like this with Ansh, without thinking about you and Palak and Payal. Please forgive me for my stupidity"
Yash goes near her and is about to say something, when suddenly " Mummy-Papa, Mummy-Papa" and the kids come running in and goes and sits beside Aarti.
Palak hugs Aarti " Mumma can we sleep with you tonight? Payal and I missed you and Ansh so much." Yash and Aarti looks at each other.
Yash " No kids not today, your mumma is tired and needs rest"
Kids (in unison) " please Papa just for today. Please please please"
Aarti looks at Yash, and then at kids " Ok we will all sleep together today, but only if you all go and brush your teeth"
Kids starts shouting and dancing "Yay " and runs towards their room to brush their teeth. Yash and Aarti looks at each other (YDH plays in the BG)

Part 4 Ends

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Part - 5

Sorry guys I've only 156 episodes of PV on YT, so I don't remember exactly what happened when after that. So I've kept the producer alive and Paridhi's USS RAAT will happen next week. SP forbade her from working, but Paridhi will still lie and make excuses and will go to work for one more week.

AarYa's room.

Yash "Ok kids so you've all brushed your teeth, so now lets all get into bed and go to sleep. So who wants to sleep where.?"
Ansh says he wants to sleep with Yash. Palak says she wants to sleep with Aarti.
Payal " I want to sleep with both Mumma and Papa"
AarYa looks at each other puzzled. Aarti then looks at Payal " But beta how is that possible?"
Ansh thinks for a minute " Yes it's possible, Payal will sleep in the middle, then on one side of her Papa will sleep and I'll sleep next to him. On the other side of Payal, Mumman will sleep and Palak will sleep in the end"
AarYa in unison " But what if you fall in your sleep"
Palak innocently replies " Don't worry Mumma, we will hold you and Papa tightly, and we won't fall "
AarYa looks at each other (again). They know that kids won't listen to them so they signal each other ( through their eyes ) that after kids fall asleep, they'll move them in the centre and then they both will sleep on the edge.
So they all finally settles down in bed.


Prateek Paridhi Room.

Paridhi's phone rings it's the producer. Pari answers it " Yes sir, tell me, what is it?"
Producer " I know that you've for only few more days left, before you leave us, so I've decided to throw a Farewell Party for you next week. So I'd love it if you and your Husband can make it "
Paridhi " That's so sweet and thoughtful of you. We will definitely come."
Producer ( with a mysterious smile on his face )" Ok we will wait for you. Btw I hope that you are coming tomorrow for regular shoot? You still have one week with us"
Just then Prateek walks in, and questioningly looks at her. Pari ignores his look " Yes sir I remember very well, and I'll definitely come tomorrow at the usual time. See you then. Bye."
Prateek gets angry " Pari you know very well that Bauji is still angry with you and your working, and you are still planning to go?"
Now Paridhi gets angry and shouts" You're always and only concerned about your family. You never cared for me and my feelings. I know I'm on my own, so I'll go come what may. And don't worry I'll make some excuse like always. And I don't want to talk anymore on this" and she storms in the bathroom. Prateek is very angry.

AarYa Room

All are sleeping, except Yash. He checks on everyone to see wether they are sleeping comfortably or not.
Just then his gaze falls on Aarti. And he's mesmerized (once again) with her beauty ( YDH music plays in BG) A strand of hair is lying on her face. He remembers the morning in Mumbai when he so wanted to move that strand of hair from her face. He starts to move towards her to remove it.
Just then Palak gets a nightmare and mumbles " Mumma please don't go" she starts to cry in her sleep.
Aarti immediately wakes up and hugs her tightly " Shhh.. It's ok Palak, Mumma is with you. She's not going anywhere"
Aarti hugs Palak tightly to her and lulls her to sleep. After few minutes Palak clams down and goes back to sleep holding Aarti tightly.
Aarti has tears in her eyes, which Yash notices, he reaches out to her and takes her hand in his.
Aarti looks at him" I'm so sorry Yashji. For running away like this. Vidhi bhabhi was right, I never once thought about Palak-Payal, and the impact of my running away will have on them"
Yash " Aartiji why do you always take the whole blame on yourself? Whatever happened even I was responsible for it, more than you"
Aarti crying " No Yashji. It was my fault, I ran away leaving my daughters like this. I'm responsible for their condition"
Just then Payal stirs in her sleep. Yash gently caresses her hair and she goes back to sleep.
Yash then wipes Aarti's tears" Aartiji we can keep on blaming ourselves like this the whole night. But the truth won't change that we both are responsible for whatever happened. And I think that we shouldn't talk about this anymore, or else we will wake them up (pointing at kids ). So I suggest we go back to sleep and talk about this later, ok?"
Aarti lovingly looks at him and nods and then closes her eyes. (YDH plays in the BG)

Part 5 ends


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So how was it? Hope you all liked it.

And sorry I won't comment on any reply, I'll just hit the Like Button ( hope you don't mind, cause instead of replying I'll write future episodes )
And next installment next week.

Love

NIKKI.
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Edited by lovely_nikki - 12 years ago
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firstly congo on ur 15000th post...OMG its just so awesome...🥳party time...

i know di..with this speed one day u will surely finish one lakh post...very soon

n yay..first to comment






episode 1 review😊


awesome...mindblowing...fantastic...😆...

just loved the way yash was caring for aarti...😊

n loved the way he called aarti "runaway daugther"...hehhehe😆😃

aww..poor aarti...she is still scared to share his pregnancy complicatios..poor she😭😊

aww...palak payal and aarti scene was so touchy...so emotional.much needed and wanted scene..i always wanted to see such scenes in PV...but our Mahan CVS never gave us...😡

a big hug from me to u for this...🤗

OMG...yeh dil hain yeh dil hain yeh dil hain...sab is dil ki toh muskil hain...

thank u for sharing ur wonderful writing😃
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episode 2 review...

di..i first want to hug u...🤗🤗

the family scene was just so awesome...mindblowing...👏👏especially the karele ki sabji...hehheheheh...too good😉

the kitchen scene...bua😡😡😡and paridhi😡😡😡

omg..paridhi is so weird...she just cant stand by herself..just like to flow in other people boat of thoughts...😡😡😡
n this bua is no less...she cannot rest unti she does something weird against aarti😡😡..

coming to other couples...glad that atleast u thought to have some focus on them...wich again the great cvs never did...

poor pankaj😕...n dutiful vidhi😕
i hope vidhi soon realizes she needs to focus on her marraige life too..i know u will surely show that😉😉😉

pratiek and paridhi scene was also good...paridhi is so damn selfish.😡😡😡...n pratiek is definetly right here...pari never cares abt other...😡😡😡hope she soon gets a piece of mind...n i know u will defo show that😃😃

overall...awesome epi 2...👏👏👏


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episode 3 review..

firstly...

omg...loved the family moment...... it is the most wanted scene on Pv...thank u di...for giving us di...

coming to the scene...OMG...ansh is so very naughty... ...

poor yash and aarti were so embarrased...n pratiek and pari were actually blushing and emarrased...awesome moment di......

love the way...SP ask his three DIL to join them on the dinner table...the most and ever wanted scene......

OMG...yeh dil hain yeh dil hain yeh dil hain...sab is dil ki toh muskil hain...

just so awesome feeling...

aww..SP missing Gayu...

yay...finally gayu knows that her aarti bahu is pregnant...awesome scene shown here di👏...she knew it was aarti...she could feel it...wow awesome awesome⭐️

di..u simply rock...⭐️
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episode 4 review...


again an awesome update...


OMG...ahahhahah...SP to yash "" why are you ,looking at her? It's your Ma's wish and you can't refuse to her, so you both better sit and talk with her together"...awesome one

awww...yash gayu aarti phone convo was so cute...emo...and again awesome ..

how cute...gayu ask yash to promise her that now he will take proper care of aarti..n yash obliges...this scene was so much wanted...di...u just rock


love the way he puts his hands on aarti's to ensure her...

awesome shobha-aarti scene...

Aarti is right from her side...obviously the hulk side of yash was indeed scary

anyone could have got scared...poor aarti...i pity her so much ,,

but still she does apologize for running away...like this...n thats what i like about her...she never hesitates to accept her mistake ..

again kids came in between...😆

aww..poor palak payal...they wanted to sleep with aarti...aww...one can understand...they must have missed aarti so much wen she was not home......

awww..look at kids joy again...they are so happy to sleep with their mom and dad...awesome and much needed scene ..

again... OMG...yeh dil hain yeh dil hain yeh dil hain...sab is dil ki toh muskil hain... ..

u r awesomest di...


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episode 5 review...

u made me fall in love with kids...even more...

aww...ansh wanted to be with his yash papa...palak with aarti mumma...n payal with both...smart kids i must say..the way they figured out a lan to sleep so that all their wishes are fulfilled ...a much needed scene di...

i am again so annoyed with paridhi omg...she only cares for herself..... i know pratiek should support her for her ambition..but still if she seriously wants to work..she shouldnt walk on a lie path which will end up putting her in a problem..selfish unmatured girl

the last scene is so emotional

poor palak...she got a nightmares abt aarti leaving her again...OMG..this was so much needed di...i mean this is so much important message for all the parents...i dont know y the cvs didnot have brains to show this important thing...

aarti felt so bad for palak...

yash is right...they both were responsible for whatever happened..but my POV says yash more was responisble coz he havnt have behaved in such a manner...aarti would never taked such step..but i m glad that he is now admitting his mistakes..which again cvs never showed😡

OMG...yeh dil hain yeh dil hain yeh dil hain...sab is dil ki toh muskil hain...

u r the best,,,,keep writing...n sharing ur wonderful work..its a treat to read ur wrk


Edited by princess121993 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow nikki
Awesome post👏 👏
EPi-1:
Superb.👍🏼.Well written...👏 👏
Wow...Loved the way yash taking care of aarti😳
Yash-shoba convo nice...⭐️
Liked Aarti monologue and shocked that huge change of yash😲😉
Loved their eyelock and YDH moments..😳
PAYPAL-Aarti convo nice...❤️


Edited by Sri_Radha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very well written nikkii dear👏
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1st a big sorry as m breaking ur rule of pressing like
as my net is super slow so like is not working...
read it later when my net will be fine..
thanx for the pm...

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