My version of 'PV'- part 6-10, page 10. - Page 6

Fab job on all the episodes Nikkii. Beautifully written. Loving your version of the scenes.

Episode 1:

I like the care that Yash has started to show for Aarti from this point on and the fact that his interaction with her is not as formal as before as seen in his conversation with Shobha. Absolutely adored the scene with the kids where the girls hugged her and Ansh hugged Yash along with Yash's declaration that no one would be leaving anyone.

Episode 2:

Aarti, Yash and the kids' scene is adorable with the comraderie between them. Likes that you included scenes with the other couples so we could get an idea of what they really thought of the situation in also get their views on Aarti.

Episode 3:
Liked the dinning room scene with Aarti rubbing Yash's back as he chokes on the food. Also loved that SP asked his daughters in law to join them at the table so that they can all eat together.

Episode 4:
Loving the change in Yash as he is becoming more comfortable with Aarti by holding her hand and looking at her more openly for her opinion. Aarti's apology was nice even though she did not get to complete what she really wanted to tell him.

Episode 5:
The sleeping arrangement was too cute. Loved that you put in a scene where one of the girls cried out in her sleep so that Aarti can see the just how much her actions affected them. Also loved the fact that Yash did not blame her alone for what happend by also took responsibility as he too was a fault.