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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovey dovey writings Nikki darling... ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ I'm loving it.. โค๏ธ

1st Episode

Oh ji.. Loved the way Yash took care of his Aartiji.. โค๏ธ And his idea as well for inviting Dubey's for the dinner.. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ The lift and Yeh Dil Hai... And as usual, the kids coming in between! ๐Ÿ˜† So cute! ๐Ÿ˜ณ


2nd Episode

LOL.. ๐Ÿ˜† karela.. Yucks! Bua with her MBKK (๐Ÿ˜†) and stupid words! ๐Ÿ˜ก Why are Vidhi-Pankaj and PraDhi are fighting?


3rd Episode

Haan... I loved the scene whereby Aarti rubs Yash's back and now the kids were pulling Pratik's legs! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ And haila.. many YDH moments! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Yay.. Gayathri already knew about Aarti's pregnancy ! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


4th Episode

Nice conversation of Gay3-AarYa! ๐Ÿ˜Š And oh.. Loved the conversation of Shobha and Aarti which I think is very important after her runaway! ๐Ÿ˜› It seems Aarti will have to reveal her pregnancy complications issue!

5th Episode


Cute moments of AarYa and kids! ๐Ÿ˜Š PraDhi's arguing again! AarYa moment once again was adorable ! ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Awesome work Nikki.. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Loved it so much ! โค๏ธ

Thanks a lot for coming up with such beautiful scenes ! ๐Ÿค—



Edited by IsYaRoCHeR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Firstly... CONGRATSSS for your 15000 post dear... โญ๏ธ ๐Ÿ‘
First Episode...,,
So yash and aarti r back...
Luved yashji's care for his aarti ji..โค๏ธ โค๏ธ
luved the sweet talk between aarti and aayu..๐Ÿ˜ณ..โค๏ธ
palak payal scene was cute... ๐Ÿ˜›
n the thing which I luved the most was "ye dil hai-ye dil hai"...I was actually lost in it....
overall fantastic episode... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Second episode...
so our ansh is getting his favourite jalebees...mmm my mouth is watering..๐Ÿ˜†
nice sceen between vidhi n paridhi..๐Ÿ˜Š
mbkm this Maya bua...๐Ÿ˜ก..๐Ÿ˜ก
Spoiling paridhis mind with her talks...๐Ÿ˜ก..๐Ÿ˜ก
liked the fact that u gave us a pankaj and vidhi scene..๐Ÿ˜Š
cv's never showed this... So m luking forward to more such scenes..๐Ÿ˜ƒ
prateek n paridhi's scene was also very well written...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
a well written episode I wud say..๐Ÿ˜Š..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ..๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by Tanvi.narula - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Third episode...
luved family bonding on dinner table..๐Ÿ˜Š
so gayatri already knew dat it's aarti who's pregnant..
A gud episode with good hearty moments...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
luvd it..โค๏ธ

Fourth episode...
luvd yashji's assurance to his aarti ji..โค๏ธ
so sweet of Aarti worrying about gaayatri, even when she herself is
not well...๐Ÿ˜ณ
yashji's care for his Aaarti ji is sumthing... Which I found really luving..โค๏ธ..โค๏ธ
aarti hiding about her complications is sumthing m scared of:(
luvd this episode...โค๏ธ..โค๏ธ

Fifth episode..,...
Awww.. I jus luv these 3 cutiesss..โค๏ธ..โค๏ธ
again my fav. was "ye dil hai" scene.....
paridhi is hell bent on her shooting.. ๐Ÿฅฑ
a very luvable episode with beautifull scenes ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Very well written episodes with good discription of emotions..๐Ÿ‘ well done..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ luking forward for next installment.. N thanx for pm..๐Ÿ˜ณ..๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by Tanvi.narula - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nikki fantastic job really enjoyed reading it. Imagined the characters visually as i was reading love you dear.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿค—i loved each and every character feeling like i am watching our PV again.

Episode - 1
Aarti keeping her hands on her tummy and talking to aayu was so cute, yash taking care of aarti,
shoba ma calling yashji and inquiring about her run away daughter and yash in turn inviting the Dubey's to dinner, that too ansh favorite meals.

Aartiji faints yashji carries her in his arms and makes her sit on the bed so dreamy , YDH playing and sharing eye locks, kids barge into the room he he aarya kids trade mark entry as always.๐Ÿ˜† Finally aarti hugs payal and palak , ansh hugs yash so cute.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Episode - 2
Yash ordered ansh favorite dessert jalebi (oh its my fav too) payal has asked vidhi to make her and fav food, aarti asking ansh about yashji karela ki subzi and ansh remembering her about how did her yashji make her have KKS in mumbai, and aarti making face and kids laughing to it , aww so nice nikki.
vidhi cooking in kitchen pari helping her, pankaj calls vidhi , buaji with her slogan entering the kitchen and poisons pari mind ,pankaj same as buaji thinking that aarti and pari are there to do the household cores,but vidhi being a kind hearted person says that aarti is still weak and she needs rest and off she goes to kitchen without taking care of pankaj again he feels so upset by vidhis action. Paridhi and pratiek part was too good. I want many scenes between VP,and PP which our cvs did not show their part of story more in the show. I just loved how the character are balanced in your PV OS.
Edited by lulujjjj - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww Nikki I love the way you have added other aarya scenes into this !!! can't wait for the next installement !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love it...waiting more from you...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice..i love it,,can't wait for the next episode..reading your story is just like watching the story on tv..simply fantastic..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliantly written .. Nikki .. Love it a lot ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nikki,i'll start with ur rules๐Ÿ˜†..they are so๐Ÿคฃ..
okay, coming to the first episode..i'm really happy that there is no prashant๐Ÿ˜ƒ..i don't know why..but i'm stupidly smiling to myself when u say BG(yeh dil hai)๐Ÿ˜‰..actually aarya are infront of me when i am reading...

aarya and children scene is so touchingโค๏ธ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
hello nikki

omg i m back to aaryaland๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
coming to ur first episode really i like it
for the first time he talks in that way even i m suprised when i saw it in real pv๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
i m glad u added that
liked shobama and yash conversation and how yash is taking care of aarthi

coming to ur second episode
i loved it when u write that kareli ki sabzi wala scene๐Ÿ˜‰
i dont mind if yash teases her more i love to see that๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
pankaj alwaystry to seek some attention from vidhi but poor guy๐Ÿ˜•
and pari she is so insecure and jeolous๐Ÿ˜ก
hope in future u will show how vidhi-pankaj andpari-prateik relation goes ahead

coming to ur third episode
my favourite
i can imagine how aarthi is blushing and yash mesmerized to see her๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

coming to ur fourth episode
liked the aarthi-yash-gayathris talk and aarthi-shobamas talk๐Ÿ˜ญ
hope aarthi soon tell about her pregnancy complications

coming to fifth episode
emotional part loved family scene


but i would love to see little romance๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ and cute fights(nok-jhok)
and yash trying to seek aarthis attention๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† and some cute open talks๐Ÿ˜Š

u have done a great job๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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