Samarpan (An FF) Epilogue (Thread 3/Page 103)

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Shalini barman roy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wow beautiful update di. loved it so much.

and congratss for new thread😳

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Abie10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Oh..la..la..thread 3 👏 👏 👏

Indu ❤️ brilliant update 👏 👏 am speechless. Absolutely I have no words to define what I felt reading this chapter. You never fail to amaze me in each and every installment of yours.

I so love how you captured all the emotions of both yash and Aarti. I wanted to laugh along yash seeing a jealous Aarti. I was surprise by her reaction cos I expected the way round but just like yash we have much more to learn about Aarti.

Am glad Yash finally told her all about his past. When Aarti asked him why did you agree to marry Arpita? I chuckled knowing where it was leading and you beautifully penned it.

Ah, I just love that cute voice in the end asking to be part of that hug.

Indu, my excitement is growing with every chapter as we getting closer to yash and Aarti's future together. Wherever u are know there's someone a very huge fan of your writings.. Stay blessed ⭐️

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jikky_84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awesome update Indu 👏 🤗

So finally now Arati knows about Yash's past and about Payal's parentage. Its so nice to see how more than anything Arati was angry at Nina for saying anything against Yash and Payal. Arati is the real Arati when she is with Yash, he very easily brings out her true self without doing anything specific. With all others she easily hides her true self by hiding her feelings and emotions.

Now, Arati is herself aware of the change in her. She knows that never used to become angry or aggressive but now she is when Yash is around. Its now only some time that Arati will understand what she feels for Yash is love and that will be a crucial point as she will try to withdraw herself but our Yash babu is all up for the challenge, so no worries 😳

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Leevi05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Congrats awesome work😉

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Zetter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

On the new thread Pal 👏 🤗

Woohoo you did it again Bud, you left me in awe...what an awesome update 👏 👏 👏...I love how Yash told Aarti everything and without even seeing the book she knew it was hers and the way she got mad at the Naina talked to Yash was such a delight 😳 😳 Plus Yash loved seeing and angry and jealous Aarti as well 😉

Magnificent job Pal 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Sri_Radha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

For new thread dear👏

Mind blowing update dear👏 👏 👏

Aarya confrontation was emotional and superb👍🏼.Beautifully written👏 👏.Loved it😳

Me also surprised with Aarti's reaction towards the truth😛 and her anger for naina and also herself that She misunderstood yash feelings...⭐️

Glad that yash shared his past to aarti⭐️.

Last part was beautiful..Loved the way yash reveals about the journal and aarya's hug,Aarti realizing Maltidi's word and so cute when payal asking to join their hug😳 ❤️

Waiting for how aarti going to figures out yash love and her feeling towards yash

Continue soon

Thanks for pm😊

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PADMA VARANASI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Beautifully written update. I just love the way Yash and Aarti getting closer and closer and becoming soul mates.
Your writing style is just excellent.

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Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

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palbhar

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Love the way Yash is slowly bringing awareness to Aarti about their soulmate connection and how he's leading her out of her past!!!

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AntaresVega

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Posted: 12 years ago

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So, has Aarti reached an closer to realising her feeling?

I definitely think yes!! She's on her way and when she realises it, she might initially back out in fear but subsequently feel wonderful about it. She'll feel wonderful about being in love and being loved!!

Di, I wonder at times, does true love really happen in the real world or is it just confined to fiction? Can anyone have the depth in their relationships that you've described Yash and Aarti to have in Samarpan?

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