FF PV.Jindegi ki Talash -- Pt 10 Updated on page 136 - Page 92

Originally posted by: Surish

Originally posted by: Abie10

Mukti good to hear that your Dad is much better now!🤗

This update make me speechless dear. Its so lonngg and you wrote it so well through out.👏👏

Yash out of anger said all those harsh words to Aarti which she dint take lightly at the end. He did everything to make her open the door with Ansh but it flooped.😆 Love how both lost into each other's eyes when yash jumped in her room to talk to her. finally she went for shopping with them and it was fun for Ansh. Aww like the song yash sang for her .

Oh my..yash went through so much in MU😭 just like Aarti me too felt so bad for him. He went through hell and was starving for days. He mistakenly said about Aman but later tried to make for it. Hmm at the end Aarti is now wondering why yash never sing again since that day.😕

Nice part Mukti continue soon.😃

Originally posted by: ng_cooltools

just mind blowing! your FF and creative writing is an inspiration to me. Please do check out my FF "Heart will go on".

Excellent update. Loved every part of it.

Originally posted by: Alamelu

First of all thank you for such a long update. Loved every part of it. Omg why all yash had to bear for the sake of armpits. Wish arti trusted him enough before. ... Wonder what yash heard about arti which shattered him. Also how he got the health problem... Will they ever get to get her at all to be a family ... Will he ever get to be Nash's dad. Waiting eagerly

Originally posted by: poonamgarg

Lovely Update Mukku⭐️

Originally posted by: bmeenuu111

really awesome 👏

Originally posted by: chitsri65

An impression of good writing ( impression ...stressing the word) is to write correctly, with punctuation, spelling, grammar etc..etc.. but what draws a good writer is the response of readers and taking care of the needs and interest of readers - which you do so well Nusrat...this is to the response of yours 'boring writing skills' which you feel - many may have left you but what you forgot is - it is not your loss dear - it is the loss of readers. The major plus point - I have observed is - 'Your strength is your weakness and your weakness is equally your strength' Keep going dear - I love what you are doing.

Coming to your update ( 2) - Enjoyed Arti's anger towards Yash - for we got to see numerous attempts to win her smile back. Beautiful loving moments shown between Arti-Yash, tips from Ansh and a promise from Yash - to agree to her demands which led to the touching past of Yash. The past of Yash and the explanation done was extremely painful and what a shayari that touches you...Kindly accept⭐️ which is worth thousands for my words fail to do so. You are indeed moving to a higher scale of thoughts and let not these words affect you from flow.

Overall Nusrat - beautifully written and appreciate your effort to include us in your thoughts to otherwise stressful days which has taken a peaceful result. May Allah always be with you and surround you and family with peace, health and happiness. Thank you for the update - loved it 🤗

Originally posted by: pvejani

ch.9 a & b

Originally posted by: VincyAnne

Glad that your dad is better now ... 😉

Btw I am juz sooo in love with your FF ... Also juz loved your long updates and that too 2 at the same time juz great ... Looking forward for the next chapter and also I am curious of how Aarti will react once she found the truth bout Arpita and Yash's sickness ...

And of course love that Aarya are bonding now ... Keep up the good work coz I'm loving it and will be waiting excitingly for each of your updates ... 😊

Originally posted by: Leevi05

awesome update...

cant wait for promo scene