FF PV.Jindegi ki Talash -- Pt 10 Updated on page 136 - Page 91

Originally posted by: caller123

Mukthi,I'm speechless. I felt like I watched an Aarya movie. only thing some hindi parts i didn't understand. Other than that I got completely lost in the story.
Awww Ket now you have left me speechless with your complements dear...I m just overwhelmed.I never though anyone could think such things about my writing and you have just made me feel so special dear...🤗🤗Sorry for the disturbance coz of my using Hindi.Next time I will give the translation also dear...😃😃

When Yash and Aarthi had the argument I thought these two have again started but later when YAsh was going after Aarthi asking forgiveness I was like

I felt the same thing I felt when I was watching Aarya moments in PV.

It was marvelous.👏
Thanks a lot dear.I am so happy that finally my writing has made someone to miss PV...😳😳

Simply amazing.⭐️

So Aarthi likes to see the bond of Ansh and Yash. Even I love their bond.

Yash and Ansh bond is my fav also and in future this bonding will get more strong.In fact Ansh will be the reason for Arya to come close...😉😉

Part B

I felt so sad for Yash's condition. Aarthi is also wrong but in a way her anger is right as she doesn't know the truth but only knew Yash is going with Aarpitha her own sister.They both are ina ad state. They both had bitter past but one good thing is they both still love each other.

I love your dialog delivery dear. It really helped to imagine all the things and I thought I'm watching whole thing.
Yes dear...both are in love and both are giving pain to each other.Arti's fault was not trust Yash enough though she loves him and Yash's fault is hiding the biggest truth of his life from that person whom he loves the most.But both have their own pov but ultimately it gave them nothing but pain...😕😕😕

Mukthi there is nothing wrong in your writings. Don't count the likes and judge yourself. As many are inactive in the forum it sometimes get reduces.Some may be in the start and they are gone later. Even I noticed in my stories but I'm writing for my loyal readers who always stayed with me from the beginning and encouraged me and I have noticed now some new ones are joining in my stories which made me really happy.. So keep on writing as we are with you always.🤗❤️🤗
Thanks a lot kate for such encouraging words dear.It really helped me a lot and made me realize that no matter what but you will be with me alz and for this I just cant say that love you dear...in fact love to love you..🤗❤️🤗

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

Replies are in blue...😳

Poor Aarti waiting for Yash...😭

And Yash being so angry with her??? Now he has to do something to make her happy...

Ansh is the best bet he found to win her over...that's great...👏

Yash is back with his pranks now...jumping in through the window?😛

Sorry...she did not accept the word..she is not forgiving him so easily?

Yash's challenge is hard to resist dear...so she had to accept it...interesting...😳

Wow Yash is such a sweet heart...the song was so good dear my very favourite one...😊

The shart of Aarti finally...😉

Amazing update...loved it to the core...⭐️

Will get back after reading 9 B

Excellent Mukti...⭐️👏

Don't say sorry dear...We understood dear...I hope now uncle is doing well..Take care of your self and also uncle

We will continue our prayers...

Coming to the updates

Superb and amazing updates.👏 👏..Loved every part of it😳

Part-A:Loved aarya confrontation😳

Poor aarti hurt ed with yash words when he scolded😭..Poor yash didn't do intentionally...Liked the way soon he realized what he did to aarti and regret..👏.

I loved his efforts to manofy her...😳

Loved yash and ansh bonding.😛..the way he gaving ideas to yash for manofy aarti so Cute😳...Poor ansh that he longing for father love..So happy that now he got that love from yash...👏

Felt sad for aarti when she said to yash tat viraj also used to talk rudely like this...I think she also suffered before...😭😭

Prashant.😡😡..He was one of the worst and disgusting man...Still he planning to trouble aarya..I hope soon he deserve a punishment what and all he did...

Loved aarya Shopping mall scene and restaurant scene.😳..Aarti couldn't able to angry on yash after his manofying session...😃

Part-B was superb and emotional update👏👏😭

Aarya terrace scene was beautiful❤️...Glad that she got shart from yash and got to know about his past life.👏..

So heart paining past yash was suffered more and still suffering..Poor of him first he lost his love ,identity...how much a person suffered.💔..Aarti get completely hurt after she comes to know about his past😭😭

Don't know what will be her reaction after hearing full past🤔...I hope she won't be behave rudely to yash after this😊

Aarya pov was written wonderfully...Loved it..Each and every line of poem simply superb...👍🏼

Loved their cute nok-jhok.😳.Loved they spent together some time and confronted...😃

Once again Fantastic updates dear👏👏

Thanks for pm🤗

Eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: Zetter

Happy to hear that your dad is doing much better Dear 🤗

Thank you for the wonderful updates 👏 👏 👏...I loved how Yash went out of his way to make things up to Aarti for his rude behavior towards her 😃

Aww both Aarti and Yash has suffered over the years, I love that Yash told her part of his past even though he left out some major parts like Arpita being married to Aman and his illness <_<

I'm happy that Aarti caught on to that little tibit about Yash not singing for the past five years 👍🏼 😉

Can't wait for more! 😊