FF PV.Jindegi ki Talash -- Pt 10 Updated on page 136 - Page 94

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tanvi.narula

Awsome update dear.. πŸ‘
really well written..
I literally cried while reading this update..
Emotions described so well..
I m literally speechless dear..
Just a big Kudos to u.. πŸ‘


Thank you so much Tanvi dear.Your comments were so inspiring for me.When you said that you felt cry while reading my update I was so happy coz it make me believe that something of my writing touched your heart...😳😳😳.
Thanks a lot for all the support...πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maha9

Thank you sooo much sweetu for this chweet update πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
whatever it may be a fight or fun or prank everything is beautiful with arya πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ simply superb at every touch dear
Thank you so much sweetu for your sweet comments as you know it means a lot to me...😳😳

so coming to the update πŸ˜‰

i guessed with the stormy arthi marching to yash a fight will arise but poor arthi got hurt by yash 😭 and even yash also felt guilty for hurting her...

but its so true we blurt out the truth in our angered mode and arthi did it many times and would have expresses her personal interest to accompany yash in this MU trip πŸ˜† but thank God she stopped at the right time... both yash and arthi love each other madly but hiding their feelings inside their heart 😳
but little ansh also got sad when yash scolded arthi 😭
Yes Sweetu Arti said many things in her anger which was so hurting for Yash and now Yash did the same.But the fact is they are so helpless before their destiny.They have lost everything in their life and just burst out their frustration on each other.But they do it coz they know it very well no matter how they hurt each other but they will pacify their pain also...😳😳


wow yash tries all his tricks to convince arthi ...great going yashu πŸ‘ with little ansh's plan πŸ˜‰

and even if his brain is small it is working smart dear as his mother πŸ˜† great arthi threw the shirt swiftly before anyone could enter ...
but yash jumping from the window is superb πŸ˜ƒ and his challenge OMG !!! 😲 what a challenge maan !!! definitely any lady wont be ready to fail infront of her love when it comes to challenge πŸ˜‰

and so is my arthi to cleverly join yash and ansh without expressing her interest πŸ˜†

so here comes cute gifts from yash to ansh and arthi ... great dear πŸ‘πŸΌ
but i wish arthi soon finds about yash before his condition gets worse 😭 yet his love makes him get over all pain
Yash applied so many tips only to pacify Arti coz he cant see her sad ..specially not for him.But when he realized that Arti was hurt for his rude behavior then Yash also felt bad and tried everything that he could do to bring back her smile.
...and I hope Arti will get to know about Yash's sickness before it's too late.

and here comes the great dinner for arthi.. each and every dish coming with a sweet note in it is great idea sweetu πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ and finally the sweet touch of apology in public with a song from yash is awesome simply beautiful... arthi would have fallen for his arms if he had been near her ...
I tried to give you all an Arya evening with full of love and care and all these things that Yash did for Arti is enough to express how much he loves her...how much he cares for her...and the same thing is also about Arti.She also wanna lose herself in Yashu's arm ...and hope one day it will happen also.

i am loving this ansh-yashu bonding so much sweetu 😳
Ansh and Yash's bonding is my fev also Maha...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›


the silent conversation of arya and yash's brilliant mind reading made me laugh like our yash used to do in real PV especially during that flashback memories scene πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

finally the choice has come for yash to win over his challenge and arthi ...😳 how can she make her yash lose ... and both her demands were so sharp and cute with a intention in it...
You are very much right maha.Arti's demands are very much sharp and she asked for them intentionally coz she wanted to know about Yash...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰


arthi in windy climate with loose hair.. maan even a girl will drool and loose her control then why dont our yash will loose control to take her in his arm
Ha ha ha..you are absolutely right sweetu.Any body will fall for Arti as she has an irresistible beauty and Yash is just lost in his Arti's charm...😳😳


so sweet of yash and arthi's prank with that coffee and slowly she tried to get his past from him and that base is his business but was n't she trying to get info about arpita also πŸ˜•

and really yash has suffered a lot alone till he established a business with akash 😭 and so sad he sold his dadi maa's last gift and his dreamy designs 😭 but he got a famous recognition even after sp declared him dead..

uff its a mtter of second he blurted of aman and poor arthi believed it... but will soon come to know of him haina πŸ˜‰
Yash had suffered immensely and each and everyone is responsible for his sufferings..his pain..even Arti also.But now Arti is also feeling that somehow she was wrong...and that's why she wanted to know about him more and after knowing the truth now Arti will start thinking differently about Yash for sure...😊😊

a particular thing that mad arthi sure that still she alone lives in his heart is.. he sang after their snageet ceremnoy for the first time that too for his ARTHI πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ with perfect details of the time passed ...
Yes finally Arti realised that after their Sangeet Yash never sang and today he sang only for her and hope very soon Arti will come to know many things about him...😳😳


simply this is superb update sweetu.. all the arya moments gave a refreshing treat... you deserves a big applause mukku πŸ‘

keep going the great update sweetu πŸ€—
Thank you so much dear for such long and lovely comments.I just loved it coz it made me feel how deeply you have connected with my update ...thanks a lot sweetu...πŸ€—β€οΈπŸ€—


Comments are in blue sweetu...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KrantiGuru_JKR

ah Mukti finally I m here reading a wonderful story written by u...
I m extremely sorry that I didn't ever commented on this story before..
but finally I managed to read all parts till now and I discovered another wonderful writer in thus forum...
OMg OMG OMG Miti I was so shocked to see your comments on my thread as I was keep sending you pm of update and never got any reply.I thought may be you are not liking my story but today when I have read your comments I was just stunned to know that you have read all the parts together and liked my story also...😳😳😳😳...yaapppeee I am so happy......and plz dear dont say sorry for anything.You can read whenever you get time.I wont mind dear..but just dont say sorry...😳😳


I m loving this story..
sad that AarYa loves eachother so much still they r separated...but still happy that years of separation hasn't decrease the love...
really feel so bad for yash...he has gone through so much and now his health betraying him...

aarti has suffered a lot too ...to some extent her anger is justified as yash left her but only if she knew the reason she would have supported yash...
but yeah I did feel angry as because of aarti yash had to left his family his name everything...but still can't blame her too because she is totally unaware of the truth...
Yes you are right dear..Yash and Arti both have suffered a lot in love but even after that they never stopped loving each other...and what to say about Yash...after loving crossing all limits...after doing everything for their happiness what Yash got was nothing but pain.But it's true that all the persons whom Yash loved and stilll loves are responsible for his pain...his suffering either it intentionally or unintentionally...And Arti is also the same.But she was not aware of Yash's truth and in future update her pov will given also in a detailed way...😳😳

loved some of the flashback scenes of AarYa...
hope this Mumbai trip will bring the change...hope aarti will come to know abt the truth why yash went away on the day of marriage and soon they both will again together...


I m so eagerly waiting for the next part...
MU trip will bring lots of changes in Arya's life and the starting of this change has been started already...hope a blissful future is waiting for them...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


once again sorry I m so so late to comment and couldn't comment on each part individually
And plz no more sorry dear.It's ok.I know how busy you are in your study.So dont need to feel sorry at all...πŸ€—



Comments are in blue dear...😳😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

Answers in pink dear!



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kmfan_2


Poor Aarti waiting for Yash...😭

And Yash being so angry with her??? Now he has to do something to make her happy...

Ansh is the best bet he found to win her over...that's great...πŸ‘

Yash is back with his pranks now...jumping in through the window?πŸ˜›

Sorry...she did not accept the word..she is not forgiving him so easily?

Yash's challenge is hard to resist dear...so she had to accept it...interesting...😳

Wow Yash is such a sweet heart...the song was so good dear my very favourite one...😊

The shart of Aarti finally...πŸ˜‰

Amazing update...loved it to the core...⭐️


Will get back after reading 9 B

Excellent Mukti...β­οΈπŸ‘


Thank you so much Shanti dear for your lovely comments.I am so happy that you have my updates as for me you are a great writer and when you praise about my work it really makes my day dear...πŸ€—
PS : And that song is my fav also...😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you so much Shanti dear for your lovely comments.I am so happy that you have my updates as for me you are a great writer and when you praise about my work it really makes my day dear...πŸ€—
PS : And that song is my fav also...😳😳

I still have to read the second part but will read it properly so that I can comment well...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Omg ,,mukti I have no words to tell u how much I liked this chapter...just awesome
Just loved the rothna-manna session ...aarya wall pinning part was ...wow
Yash n aarti both are hiding their feeling for each other
Yash will take aarti to a horror movie,,,hahaha
Loved the bond between yash n ansh
Yash sang. For her...wow
Mukti while reading I felt that I m watchin pv episode ...I enjoyed it so much..thank u so much for giving us this story


Rachna sweetheart for your such lovely and encouraging comments.😳
Arya ruthna manana was my fav scene also as I first tried to such things... and I am so happy that you liked it.πŸ˜‰
Yash and Ansh bond is a very imp part of my FF and it will have a very important impact on Arya's relation..😳

And whatever yo have said at the end of your comment was much enough to make my heart filled with joy...πŸ˜ƒ
Thank you so much dear...πŸ€—

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini28

Mukti both the parts are just mindblowing.

while reading I felt like that I am watching Arya again
just awesome yaar.
waiting for the next part dear.
and one thing can u make Yash to beat that Python😳😑


Thank you so much Shalini for loving my work this much...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
DOnt worry That kamina Prashat will get the worst for his sin.😑😑
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sb1410

Beautiful story telling dear πŸ‘πŸΌ love it this get more interesting with every update ❀️ so sad that yash went through so much 😭 now that aarti is learning the truth I hope it works out for them before yash dies

hate the evil that is prashanth 😑🀬
good job dear this is better than a tv soap opera


Sharlene dear thank you very much for your continuous love and support for JKT...it is really something very special for me...😳😳.
As I told you many times that MU trip will change Arya;s life and the process has already been started...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
And what to say about that Kamina Prashant...I have just brought him on JKT and now you will see how low he can stoop..but he will rot in hell..I just wish this...😑😑
OMG ..I just cant believe what you said...that my update was better than tv soap..really dear one of the best complement that I have got on my thread and thanks goes to you...πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago

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