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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

@nusratjahan505

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Posted: 12 years ago

#801

Originally posted by: deepu59
plzzz update sooon

Updated dear..😃

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

@nusratjahan505

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Posted: 12 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: Folla
waiting the next part update soon

Updated dear..😳

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Chitra_11

@Chitra_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#803

Part 1 - The journey was well written taking viewers alongwith the protagonist. Ansh questions and Yash responding with a smile gave a good feeling to the otherwise silent atmosphere created by ARYA. Loved the Dhaba scene a lot with Arti having a hearty laugh over white moustache and she wiping the remaining part romantically was well done.

I do have an equal liking towards Radio and so no doubt that scene was the best alongwith the shayari. Nusrat - Shayari - your zone - no words - musical.👏

Part 2 - Very emotional and moving. Yash-Arpita talk and the words that simply flowed later when 'Nihaan' was mentioned - truly was felt as a reader - touching ...again good job here.

Waiting impatiently for Arti-Yash confrontation scene - ARYA moments and the most awaited Yash revealation of his past.

Overall Nusrat - Parts that parted with humour, emotion, nok-jhok, bonding and a spoiler that kills patience. Once again - good job and appreciate for the longest update.

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#804

MUKKU DEAR😳😳

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Abie10

@Abie10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#805

Foboulous lonngg update.👏👏 This yash na still confused on why Aarti agreed to go with him when she also hates being with him. Only because he dint want to go with her told he will go early and if she's not on time he's going..but Aarti gave him shock by getting there on time.😆

Loved their journey with Ansh together! Liked yash's shayari..and Aarti was super shock to hear him.😳😳

Oh that scene where Yash went to the grave was so touching with Arpita and crying for their child!😭

Now Aarti is mad cos Yash failed to take them for shopping..waiting for the next update and the bit romance you mentioned in precap. You going great with this story Mukti!👍🏼

Edited by Abie10 - 12 years ago

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#806

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sara1990

@sara1990

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#807

well written
waiting for the next update

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Tanvi Narula

@Tanvi.narula

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#808

Superbly written update mukti.. 👏. 👏
Poor arpita.. 😭 yash is suffering so much.. 😭
Good that aarti vll come to know the truth..
Eagerly waiting for the next update.. 😃