FF PV.Jindegi ki Talash -- Pt 10 Updated on page 136 - Page 82

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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited my comment on pg-108😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update for the both part...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Mukti
Part 2
So emotional yaar ,,but loved it
Poor Arpita,,, feel so sorry for her she lost her first child n still could not get over it😭
Yash ,,Aarpita phone convo ,,so heartbreaking dear,,poor Aman 😭

Aarti shopping plan with Yash ,,,but spoiled
Glad that Aarti can senced that Yash is hiding something Big from her
Precape is so interesting Dear ,,wow,,wow wow
PLs update soon with some more Shayries ,,,If possible yaar

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kmfan_2

Read both the parts though I haven't read the earlier parts of this story...

I loved it completely...will catch up with the earlier ones when free to understand the story better...Please send me PMs from now on so that I am up to date!!!

Excellent shayari ---I love poetry both English and Hindi so I loved it a lot...

There were a lot of emotions especially with I think Arpita having lost her son...

Beautifully written

Loved the AarYa scenes too...

Waiting for the next part...


Shanti I am very very happy to have you here in my FF coz I admire you as a writer and like your writing from the core of my heart.And when a writer like you read my FF it is something very special for me dear.Thanks again..🤗
I have also weakness on poetry.SO sometimes make lil efforts to make some line and glad that you liked it...😳😳
Hope you will soon read the story and give me your feedback😃😃
And whenever I'll update definitely PM you dear.😳😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Fantastic updates mukti dear👏👏
Part1-Superb👏
Loved aarya conversation😳...Yash confronts aarti why she want to come along with him mumbai...⭐️
Liked yash attitude😎,his plan to avoid aarti going Mumbai along with him..😆
Loved yash-Palak scene...So cute bonding😛

Yash angry with god...He didn't want to believe..Poor yash because of his suffer,he lost faith in god😭😭

Loved aarti made his plan failed..😎.
Aarya moment and their eyelock scene amazing

Hate bua😡😡

Gayatri and aarti scene awesome.👏..Loved the way gayatri told aarti not to hurt yash and also not to hurt herself⭐️..So glad that aarti also assures gayatri she will take care of yash😃

Yash and ansh scene so lovely❤️...Aarti was surprised and happy with their bonding😃

Aarya restaurant scene relaxing moment😳...Loved the way aarti took concern of yash and shared her food with yash👏
Lassi scene cute😛...Yash again lost in aarti😳

Lovely shayari mukti dear👏...Superb...I loved the way and surprised yash recited shayari to aarti...so beautifully written👍🏼
Felt sad for yash😭...he didn't care of his health and still working ..

Part-2 Awesome 👏and emotional part😭
Aman-Arpitha scene was emotional...😭😭
Yash mourning for nihaan...Ariptha-Nihaan-yash scene so heartbreaking scene💔
Poor arpitha-Aman and yash how much they suffering😭😭

Last part interesting...Aarti want to go shopping with yash..But yash spoiled her excitment😆
Aarti realization was superb👏..Glad that she sensed that yash hiding some big truth👏👏

Precap sound interesting and wonderful.😳..Yash revelation in front of aarti..Eagerly waiting how aarti going to react with revelation
Wow ...Aarya romantic eve😛...Looking forward for next part😉

Continue soon
Thanks for pm🤗


Thanks a lot Radha dear for such beautiful comments.You know what after updating every time I wait for some of my friends' comments so eagerly as they alz inspire me and you are one of them sweetheart.I am so overwhelmed after reading your comments.😳🤗

I took much time to write the conv part as I found it very difficult and tried my best also.SO happy that yo have liked it.And you are right Yash has become a man of attitude.But very soon Arti will gt to know the reason behind this and will search for the old Yash also...😳😳
G3 and Arti part was one of the seq which I liked also.G3's love and care are equally for Yash and Arti and she will do he best to bring happiness in their life.😊😊
I am so happy dear that you have like the Thaba scene.When I wrote those part I thought I a lot.In fact I took few days to write that part and when you mention about the scene my heart was hust filled with joy dear...😃😃.
WOnt say anything about Shayeri scene as I am feeling shy.Actually I tried to make some lines.But I am not very good in all these.Happy that you have loved it.😳😳
Arpita and Yash scene was something that made me emotional also.I wanna share a secret with you. While writing that part I cried.In fact when tears were flowing from my eyes even I was amazed to see them.May be at that time I was also lost in the pain of Arpita...😭😭
Once again thanks a lot sweetheart for making feel that what I am doing is something that you are liking..But I want criticism too coz it will help me to be better.😳😳😳
Love you dear...❤️🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: poonamgarg

Beautiful mukku dear👏

very well written⭐️

loved it😃


Thank you so much Poo for being with me in this journey.😳😳😳😳
Love you jaanu...❤️🤗❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

Mukthi thank you so much for these lovely updates. I love both of it to the core.

I love how Aarthi made Yash eat. Still they both love each other. Ansh will be another bridge for thie love I think as he made peace between them.
Kate I am thankful to you dear for being with me in the journey of JKT as it was a very tough decision for me to write something and post them in the open forum.But your love and support has made the journey easy for me.And trust me I will alz be grateful to all of you for this.Whatever I have achieved as a writer it's only coz of my friends like you.😳😳😳

Love the way Yash took care of them. I wonder when will aarthi finds out Yash's health. But I know there must be good reason for you to keep it hidden till now. I know you will surprise us once again.
Yash took care of Arti and Ansh coz he loves them so much.Even after what he suffered in his life but he never stopped loving Yash and the same thing happened to Arti also.She demands that she hate Yash.but the fact is all these years she only loved him.But dark reality is not letting her accept it.But now time has come to feel that love crossing all the limits and it will happen also..😃😃😳😳

I really felt sorry for Arpitha. She has lost her first child and she still cannot get over that. Poor Aman he doesn't know what to do for the both of them whom he loves most.
He wants to save Yash and Aarpitha. both. But things are out of control.
This part was also very difficult for me.Coz I wanted to put the emotion there fully.But it was not easy to write coz I needed to feel the pain of Yash,Arpita and Aman.I tried my best dear and after writing that part I found my eyes wet... now feeling very happy that the emotion touched you too.😊😊
Aarthi is still in dark but in next chapter she will find out according to the spoiler. Wonder what she will do after that.
Waiting for Aarya's romantic evening as I know my friend is very good in writing that. I'm ready to read and dream it.
I will try my best to give my best dear...😳

Sorry for the late reply as I wanted to absorb every word of your story I wanted to read it without any disturbances. I love this story that much.
Thank you so much again Mukthi for this wonderful story indeed you are a great writer that's why we always await for your updates so eagerly.
DOnt say sorry for anything Kate if you really consider me your friends.We share a very pure bonding and trust me it doesn't need these words.And I will hope that whenever you will find something wrong in my writing you will immediately let me know it without thinking anything else... 😳😳love you dear..❤️🤗
This is for your brilliant work Mukthi👏


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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW 2 updates this is awesome
Well just love the little part where they were eating and yash getting the milk on his upper lip aarti having to wipe off
now with that teaser i can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

loved the updates
last part was emotional...


Thanks a lot dear.😳😳
So happy to have you alz in this journey...😃😃

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