Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 84

Originally posted by: Zetter

Wonderful update Pal 👏 👏 👏...haha Aarti is very stubborn and I guess that by now knows that it won't be easy to get through her and he is loving the challenge 😉 😳 😳 but then again Aarti is very innocent despite her being an adult I love that Yash's closeness is affecting her 😃

Awww Payal is such a cutie pie she helped her father put all the pieces together and she is gonna let her pari go that's a given 😛...I so love the bond between Payal and Aarti ❤️

I think I've got a pretty good idea what Yash is going to ask Aarti but I won't say cause it might spoil it for the others 😉 😎

Another great job my friend 🤗 🤗

Thanks Zet...Aarti is stubborn alright. Her inherent nature is blossoming in Yash's company. He is so naturally drawing her out of her shell.

Payal is definitely the binder. That's why even after she had grown up, in their private moments, Aarti referred to her as her savior angel. More than Yash, Payal has provided Aarti a reason to right the wrong that life meted out to her. Payal has given a purpose to Aarti's life.😊 ...Of course, most everyone in this thread will have an idea what Yash is going to ask. That's how well you know these two by now.

Thanks love...just be there for me till a few more chapters. I won't drag this...Love you.🤗

Originally posted by: rutu83

where are you getting these poems and thoughts for aarti's journal? i'd buy that book. and if they're yours, please publish them...

you know, everytime you describe a place there's such...calmness surrounding it. tells me much about you 😊 at the lake scene, i literally took a deep breath and relaxed. fantastic writing👏

Rutu...thanks for even thinking the poems are worthy enough. But I am happy this way pal...just sharing something with you all gives me peace and satisfaction...Don't need more. Love you.🤗

Aarti is the child of nature in many ways, isn't she? Whenever she faced a trauma, it's to that garden and mangrove (in H'bad) that she went to...like a child turns to her mother when in grief.😳

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

Samarpan: Part 23

Preliminary Note: Hadn't realized that I had missed some of the earlier parts in this thread (no idea how that happened!) so I just read through 6 parts in a row, and now I'm very, very happily caught up. Such beautiful writing, Indu! ❤️

I have fallen short of words to describe your updates every single time...and Part 23 left me in a daze at multiple points. So once again, I shall repeat myself until I come back and write down more of my thoughts: this story is breathtakingly beautiful! Love it...each and every word.

*Yay! Reserved!*

Borna...just a few words from you makes me grin like a fool...so you can imagine my condition when you decide to write more.😳

Thanks...Love you for loving Samarpan and continuing to support me. Love you.🤗

Originally posted by: InduG64

Thanks Zet...Aarti is stubborn alright. Her inherent nature is blossoming in Yash's company. He is so naturally drawing her out of her shell.

Payal is definitely the binder. That's why even after she had grown up, in their private moments, Aarti referred to her as her savior angel. More than Yash, Payal has provided Aarti a reason to right the wrong that life meted put to her. Payal has given a purpose to Aarti's life.😊 ...Of course, most everyone in this thread will have an idea what Yash is going to ask. That's how well you know these two by now.

Thanks love...just be there for me till a few more chapters. I won't drag this...Love you.🤗

Originally posted by: smileymj10

Just finish editing my reserved post @page101 😊


Oopss, i didn't make it, chapter 23??
reserved at this time (work mode)..😳

Thanks for the wonderful feedback to Part 22. I loved reading about your reactions to Yash/aarti interaction.😃

Hmm! What'll come first? Yash's confession or Payal's true identity revelation? That's a good question Barbie. I am still wrapping my head around that part.😳

Awaiting your reactions to Part 23.

Originally posted by: palbhar

As Kratika would say...Waow!!!!! Loved it that the jigsaw pieces are falling into place for Yash and he is recognizing Aarti as his destiny!!!! I wonder if you will make Aarti too realize this...

Maybe as in our PV, the kids will be the one to bring them together...loved the little Payal!!!!

Love your writing style so much...your words emote in such a way that there is an ache in my heart...looking forward for next chapter!!!

Aww Bharthi...that's so sweet of you to say that. Fact is I have no clue about technicalities of writing. I just write what I feel...rest the characters guide me. For instance, that hill-top interaction between Yash and Aarti...When I came to the point when they had reached Naukuchiatal, I had intended to have Yash meet Aarti after dinner, but then he decided to drop in on her as she stood lost in the beauty of the environs. What could I do?😳

In any relationship, if there are kids involved, they automatically become the binders. Payal's presence has already lessened their distance.

Originally posted by: LoveViShalini

reser

indu di, i think ur ma saviour of the day..

finally i found a way to drfit from my office tension mode ...

thank you...

I do the same thing Shalini. I take refuge in writing when my workload gets heavy.
I await your comments.😳

Originally posted by: 123mitul

i loved it😳

Thanks Mitul.😊

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr

Wonderful Update...love it...

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: billieberry

i couldn't wait for the pm dear😛, u made my saturday morning with a "muah" writing🤗.

so lovely superb indu di❤️

i so much loved it, the lake, the whole scenery was captative so beautiful,

if it's for real i would love to visit them😊

the journal oh God why didn't aarti made the mistake of checking it out(i know it would have spoiled everything)😆.

payal the little princess, she is patching up everthing, now yash has realised the journal was for aarti.

Aarti got feelings for yash, which she doesn't understand or jst enjoying his company?😉

and prateek so kind of him to take them around😳.

hmmm... well yash's condition no idea, me eagerly waiting jst like aarti😛

continue soon and am getting a message alert i guess it's ur pm, thanx😃.

Thanks for the lovely feedback Billie. 🤗

Oh yes, Aarti has definitely got feelings for Yash. It's just that she is not experienced enough to recognize and give a name to those feelings. Yash's main aim will now be to make her aware of those emotions.😊