Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 82

Indu you've done it yet again. Fantastic upate. Liking this stubborn side of Aarti who is unknowingly exercising some rights over Yash. The Payal-Aarti moments were adorable. I'm also loving how things are slowly unfolding and Yash is able to understand why he feels so much for her. I have a feeling I know what the condition is but I'll wait till the next update to see it I was right. Beautifully written as always.

Indu,I love you ❤️

Honestly I have no words to describe how I feel reading each and every part of your updates. Such beautiful poems 👏 👏

Whenever I read your updates,I make sure I put on cartoon for my daughter cos I don't want disturbance.

Love the update to the core. Aarti is so stubborn isn't she?

Ahh yash now knows Aarti wrote the journal. They were really meant to be.

Can't wait for continuation of where it ended.

Awesome update Indu 👏 👏

awesome update...

it is so beautiful di..that poetic lines are awesome..i really love the way u r taking it. eager to know the condition..waiting for ur next part..

Beautiful update. Especially the first part of the story, superb. Wish I could write like you.

Lvd the updt,cnt soon.
Waiting 2 know the condition.

Finally the waiting is ended. Yash is bidding his time for Aarti to realize that she loves him and will be the perfect wife for him and mother to Payal. He is patiently leading her to this end from their conversations on her insistence that he gets married for Payal's sake. His realizations on: who the owner and writer of the book of poems is, how protective and loving Aarti is towards Payal, how loyal she is with her loved ones, and her pure heart has further strengthened his resolve to love, cherish and protect her forever.

I loved the poem that Yash read and reiterating his promise that Aarti will never again suffer for her fears and no one will be allowed to inflict pain on her. I especially enjoyed her thoughts about the clouds reflection on the water. At this point of your narrative I couldn't separate you as the author of this story to Aarti's character who's suppose to be churning out these poetry lines. Will look forward to your poetry collection next time. Congratulations!

Am looking forward to the next part. Thanks again.

lovely update di.😳

Thankyou very much for the pm and undoubtedly wonderful update. I was dancing when yash found out the owner of the journal. though the story seems to have a calming effect, there is a rush of emotions underlying throughout.