Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 83

Wow..I'm speechless

Wonderful update👏
Hoping yash tells her about aarpita
WISHING YASH ASK AARTI TO MARRY HIM

Indu,

Aha Indu! Such a beautiful update. I like your path to the soulmate connection better than the way the show tried to force it upon us! It's a gradual realization on his part that somehow their lives have always been intertwined. It was beautifully done too- the ganeshji drawing in an earlier part tied into one in the journal- I didn't see that coming until it was actually staring me in the face!

Parts 22 & 23.. very nice..!!

Wow! Fabulous update. Aarti was hell adamant that Yash should marry. She was trying hard to convince him that he had to marry for Payal, as she is craved for a mother. But she also thought that he needs someone to take care of him, take care of his needs and see that he keeps smiling always.

Yash told her that it's impossible to find somebody who is interested in him and Payal and not his money. And what Aarti said that is what Yash want to hear, "Look at me Yash. I am there right in front of you. I adore Payal…and I like you for who you are….so there will be someone who…"

She given the answer to his question, but she didn't realized what she said.

Yash got to know that the journal is written by Aarti and that's why he felt so connected to her the first day they met. The poem was excellent.

Yash agreed to get married on one condition, but what's that condition will be, is he going to propose her for marriage. Can he tell her due to this journal and its stories and writings, he got ready to marry Arpita? Will he tell her that Arpita cheated him for wealth and he never loved her?

Another fabulous update, while reading I can see the scenery in my mind, I am just loving this story awaiting your next update
these beautiful poems if they are your creations you should have them publish you are a gifted writer
sorry I forgot to say thanks for the PM(s)

Dear friends,

This was the first part I had posted after our PV ended. Honestly, I didn't expect such an overwhelming response. I had imagined everyone would kind of drift away and take their own time to check the content. However, you all have pleasantly surprised me by giving me such wonderful comments and pressing the Like button so soon after I put the chapter up. I feel loved, and I feel blessed. Thank you so much. This gives me enough impetus to continue in the same pace.

I love you all.🤗

Love
Indu


PS: Please give me some time to respond to all.😊

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Yupiee me first

Beautiful update dear👏👏 👏..Loved the full update😳

Aarti is so stubborn to make yash to marry again.Where as yash focusing on aarti's different expression😉

Wow...What a lovely scene between Aarya😛😳.. superb..Aarti is totally affected by yash proximity..😳

Wow.Liked the way Payal gives clue to yash about journal👏...and also yash came to know about it..Amazing poem👍🏼..Great and heart touching lines⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Yash monolugue superb..👏

Prathik-aarti convo nice⭐️

Last part interesting..What is his condition?

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next part

Thanks for pm😊

Hey Radha...Yup, you first this time. Thank you so much. I find your way of commenting so cutely endearing. You touch each turn in the part in your uniquely colorful way.😃

You know with each passing minute with Yash, the real aarti is emerging...just like that. No extra efforts...no unnecessary speculations. Aarti is enjoying being herself for the first time in her life...She is able to be so because Yash provides her the space, trust, and security.😳

Originally posted by: sara1990

wonderful update

Is he going to ask Aarti to marry him??????

I hope he tells Aarti the truth about Arpita ...

waiting for the next update

Thanks Sara. Hmm! What's Yash going to ask? He definitely has something up his sleeve that he thinks will make Aarti realize her feelings.😊