Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133)

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Zetter

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wonderful update Pal 👏 👏 👏...haha Aarti is very stubborn and I guess that by now knows that it won't be easy to get through her and he is loving the challenge 😉 😳 😳 but then again Aarti is very innocent despite her being an adult I love that Yash's closeness is affecting her 😃

Awww Payal is such a cutie pie she helped her father put all the pieces together and she is gonna let her pari go that's a given 😛...I so love the bond between Payal and Aarti ❤️

I think I've got a pretty good idea what Yash is going to ask Aarti but I won't say cause it might spoil it for the others 😉 😎

Another great job my friend 🤗 🤗

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rutu83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#802

where are you getting these poems and thoughts for aarti's journal? i'd buy that book. and if they're yours, please publish them...

you know, everytime you describe a place there's such...calmness surrounding it. tells me much about you 😊 at the lake scene, i literally took a deep breath and relaxed. fantastic writing👏

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MelodiousDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Samarpan: Part 23

Preliminary Note: Hadn't realized that I had missed some of the earlier parts in this thread (no idea how that happened!) so I just read through 6 parts in a row, and now I'm very, very happily caught up. Such beautiful writing, Indu! ❤️

I have fallen short of words to describe your updates every single time...and Part 23 left me in a daze at multiple points. So once again, I shall repeat myself until I come back and write down more of my thoughts: this story is breathtakingly beautiful! Love it...each and every word.

*Yay! Reserved!*

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smileymj10

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Just finish editing my reserved post @page101 😊

Oopss, i didn't make it, chapter 23??
reserved at this time (work mode)..😳

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palbhar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#805

As Kratika would say...Waow!!!!! Loved it that the jigsaw pieces are falling into place for Yash and he is recognizing Aarti as his destiny!!!! I wonder if you will make Aarti too realize this...

Maybe as in our PV, the kids will be the one to bring them together...loved the little Payal!!!!

Love your writing style so much...your words emote in such a way that there is an ache in my heart...looking forward for next chapter!!!