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Wow...

Wow wow!Indu.. ⭐️ ⭐️ i so loved the update enjoyed it to the T.

I love that Aarya and payal bedroom convo.

What's wrong with this Naina or she's in her own delusional world 😆 how could she say such things about Aarti and Palak 😡

Am soo excited for the next update. Did Aarti hear them or what? It will be awesome if she listened to them

Thanks Indu for another Indulicious update ❤️

wow wow ,,indu,,wonderful update

Sorry Indu dear for late response to your FF very busy with my shifting schedule , the thought about my better half i would miss him made me undergo into depression mode for a while Alhamdhulillah praise be to the lord now i am out of it. Life has to move on my kids life is more important than anything else.

chapter 16
Sameer singhania meeting with aarti and apologizing to her for his foolhardiness attitude, and aarti being so generous and accepting his apology, like naanimaasi and aarti character a lot , prashant taking advantage of aarti selfless love that she has for naanimaasi brve girl uses chilli spray ha ha enjoyed a lot, yash and aarti part beautifully written *sigh* too lost in aarya world. payal sweet little princess.

chapter 17
Yash checking in aarti after power cut and taking her in his arms after the terrible nightmares , making her calm and taking good care of her.The jasmine tree surrounded with pile of flowers that scene i was totally lost , and its my favorite flower just lost in its fragrance, jasmine flowers from Madurai and Bangalore i like the most , its really difficult to see flowers in emirates nearly fifteen years back ,when ever i visit my Babhi who is my dearest friend even if its a single jasmine flower she would give it to me i would take it from her hands with a huge smile on my face, as i reach home i would take it carefully from the tissue and place that single flower in A/C grill and switch it on, after few minutes the whole room would be filled with its fragrance. payal entry meeting her pari was so nice. naanimaasi and aarti temple scene too emotional. Going to read next part for the third time every time i read i feel its more beautiful fresh like to enjoy each and every word and get attached to the character.


chapter 18
Naanimaasi and payal bonding was so cute , liked naanimaasi halwa mmm so tasty dear , ha ha
aarti trying to save naanimaasi house.

Really amazing chapter Indu filled with adventure, love, care, realization etc. You have pictured different emotions of all three (Yash, Aarti and Payal) so beautifully, I am speechless. Day by day the story line is getting more and more interesting and wish this was a novel where I could read at one stretch without keeping it down. Can't wait to know what happens in the next Chapter specially after hearing the conversation of Yash and Naina, what will be Aarti's reaction. Yash is already in love with her but Aarti is still not aware of it... will she find Yash's love and feelings for her or still have to wait for long? Getting very restless Indu and anxiously looking forward for the next chapter. Thank God Naina is already out of this story and thank you as well for not dragging this issue.
Hope you will get enough spare time to update it soon. Love your extrodinary imagination and awesome writing skills. Love you too Ind for giving us such a lovely story of AARYA which compensates for PV ZMD

chapter 19
lovely update Mr.balsara and pratiek convince aarti and naanimaasi with beautiful property deal , yash and aarti part was so nice ,payal is the one who is bringing them closer , gayathri and yash talk was deeply emotional loved it. Really puzzled about prashant what is he up to?!!! he is the one who doesnt give up that easy, but yash is there to protect aarti.

Beautiful Indu, I look forward to seeing how Aarti reacts to the revelation of Yashji's past, great update!

chapter 20

Maansi ogling yash and aarti giving that fiery glare to maansi awesome part just laughed out loud like yash, loved their picnic moments, last part the convo between yash and naanimaasi after prashanth came up with the photos of yash and his family just superbly written.

Wow! Fabulous update. Aarti consoled Payal and diverted her mind from the burning paintings to making a beautiful collage of her paintings. Yash ask her if he can hug her and she let him do that.

Naina confess her feelings in front of Aarti that she loves Yash, and Aarti side tracked herself from Yash. Aarti reminded of what Yash said, Someone who has been very close to me….someone I have known a long time... and she thought that Yash was speaking of Naina.

Aarti deliberately avoid Yash so Naina can talk with him about their relationship. Aarti excused from the trek to give chance to Naina so she can confess her feelings to Yash.

Aarti screamed seeing Payal fell into a ditch. She told Yash to bring rope or someone to help and she will take care of Payal. He hugged her and kissed her and told that they both are precious to him.

Aarti got hurt badly going into the ditch. Yash bring help and take out both of them. Aarti hurt badly but she wants that Payal should get the first-aid first. Aarti got stitches on her wound in back. Aarti can do anything to save Payal. I hope Yash made her realize that nobody is better than her for him and Payal.

Naina came to talk with Yash and tell him that she liked him and wanted to marry, but Yash said sorry he can't marry her. He is bound to somebody. Naina want Yash but she doesn't care for Payal. Naina told him why he was thinking so much about the kid who is not even his daughter. Aarti heard that and shocked.

Aarti definitely heard about Payal not being his daughter. When she will know about the truth, she will definitely admire Yash, as he is taking care of Payal as his own daughter, and her father never cared about her even though she was their own blood.