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scorpiodreams

@scorpiodreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1001

Wonderful update, so one more truth to be confronted by arthi. you have penned their emotions excellently, i want to clap and say 'good job' (like how i appreciate my kids.)

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1002

aww!!! lovely update indu di❤️

first of all love naanimansi's advice to yash😊.jst like yash i though i will see them in a doom mood bt the atmosphere was jovial😃. oh aarti is an angel to comfort her baby like this😊

is this naina crazy or something telling aarti about her feelings nd yash fancy her LOL!😊in her dreamz😆

poor payal she had a great fall😭, luckily her pari is there for her, always and forever😊

love the two hugs and d kiss😳 and then another one with payal was framing them in my mind😉

i knew it naina never like payal she is only after yash. Thank God yash clear he is unavailable😆

so she was jealous of aarti that why she left d scene where payal fell into d ditch.

d last part did aarti heard their conversation?😲 waiting dear update soon.

thanx for the pm😳

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@kratzyfan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1003

INDU..another fantabulous update👏..loved each n every part of it...❤️

i so wish to have all the qualities of our dear aarti...she is an angel and yash too...made for each other...

at the end,again a shock😲

will it lead to aarti's 🥺

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1004

Indu I've missed you many chapters so I had to start almost from the beginning, that's why it took me such a long time to comment. ( I won't say sorry as it has become repetitive on my part *holding both ears*). But now I'll try to read 2-3 chapters together and comment on it together 😳

I'll start from chapter -17

OMG I just loved the way Yash and Aarti found out that they'd met years back, Aarti was the same girl whom Yash has saved and for Aarti Yash was her savior. But they still don't know that they had also met when they were kids.

It was so heartbreaking to see Aarti's condition when she found out that her Baba had died few years back.

OMG her nightmare made me so emotional. The way Yash came to her rescue (once again) and consoled and comforted her 👏

And OMG OMG OMG Payal's entry and meeting with her mountain angel, Uff I had started dreaming the whole scene, Aarti interacting with Payal, Yash standing on the side and enjoying and savoring this moment

Chapter 18

Indu I'm dead dead dead 🤢, the way you've described Yash's realization and acceptance that he's in love with Aarti 🤢 " irrevocably and unconditionally in Love with Aarti" ☺️

Oh my darling cutie Payal, the way she stunned Yash and Aarti with her sweet innocent questions, Uff I'm in love with this angel 🤗

But the second part left me speechless Indu. I don't know how to express what I felt when Aarti made that announcement that she'll marry Sameer and then the way she blamed herself for everything. 😭

She thinks that she's a curse, but little does she know that she's really a PARI who'll bring only happiness in Yash's and Payal's life. ❤️

And now that Yash knows the whole truth that he knew Aarti since she was one day old, he won't let her marry any Sameer and Prashant type of guy. 👏

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dell30

@dell30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1005

beauty lies in your storytelling

😊indu you outdo yourself everytime . at a loss for words

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ns1970

@ns1970

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1006

WOW WOW WOW AMAZING update👏 the way aarti took care of payal and not herself ignoring her injuries is amazing🤗.Good god indu you had to do this to the end with aarti listening to yash and naina confrontation now i can't imagine what will happen next

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1007

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1008

Not fair. Stopping at that point was cruel. Please update the next part soon. I am anxious to know about what's going to happen next.

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doratalk

@doratalk

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1009

As always- great update to the story-- not enough!! Hahaha! Lovely work Indu!

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tleshni

@tleshni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1010

Great update indu!👏👏

Ahh,Im absolutely loving the pace and development of the story in the past few updates.A few things I noticed is that although Aarti consciously encouraged Naina to pursue Yash and Payal,subconsciously,she is possessive and protective of them... How she kept an eye on them when she left the 3 of them alone...How she instinctively rushed towards Payal when she fell down...And with Yash,if im not mistaken,she placed her hand on his cheeks..the hug although initiated by Yash and finally moving close towards him and realising something have changed between them...

Also loving Naina's presence in the story..She is indirectly making Aarti coming out of shell and be more proactive and aware of Yash..😳... Hoping to see more of Naina so that she can spicen up Yash and Aarti's silent love..😆

I'm wondering now whether Aarti listened to Naina Yash's whole Convo or only about Payal🤔

Looking foward for the next update Indu,since the show ended,only fanfictions are still helping me to keep going😭..Hopefully the next update will not take too long...thanks again for the pm..!

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