Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 100

I didn't read this when you first posted this, then it got very popular making me want to read it.

Then i completely forgot about it and had no time to read it because of my stupid french exams

Finally i get the time to read it all from the beginning because i had lots of spare time in Canada!So this maybe long! its pretty short for me! but i made it short so i dont bore you! (i might have missed out a few parts !! i am sorry in advance)

- First of all the title is very meaningful i have to say!! You described it so! what can i say? meaningful! pahaha you described it perfectly

- WHATT Aarti quiet PFFFT! I can be like her! everyone thinks i am really quiet but i really am not quiet i am a freaking retard Ayu was shocked! aww But the reason for being quiet must have a reason! i can see already there is a LOOONG story behind it!

- For me its so weird that Yash saw Aarti the day she was born! Unusual! but there must be a reason behind all that too right?

- Yash,Payal and Ayu are just sooo cute!! i realized that there is no Ansh here?

- How did YOU figure out the puzzles! jeez! i am like the worst at finding clues! they are doing a really good job finding mummas cluesi am no way as good as the trio!!

- MOUSSE!! that made me hungry ahahahha i havent even eaten yet

- Already romance between Yash and Aarti! I like it! love it actually! aww i just ADORE Yash in this he is my favorite character right now

- Its a shame that we didnt get to see a scene like that though on PV it would have been nice but its cool we can dream right?

-Aw thats really cute!! how Aarti gifted her first book 'Samarpan' to Yash!!! i really dont know how you come up with all this! its amazing!

-Payal!! she is so attatched to her mother!! aww its really cute!! oh gosh !! i keep writing SWEET/CUTE/AWW!! dont mind me! i will say a lot of that in here ! back to Payal! they both bringf a tear to my eye ! they are sooo cutee! Aarti and Payal have such a cute relationship!

-Ayu and Payal - MASTERS IN ACTING!!! awww !! ahahahah Aarti and RD pahahahaha!! i cant stop laughing all my cousins are like .. erm is she ok? (true dat) this was such a funny part omg !! it was like my favourite scene!

- Aarti has deffo got something on her mind and its deffo about Payal.. just from the way she acts towards her!!

- Yash is SOOO SWEET !! he is sooo caring to his Aarti!! so wish he could have fallen in love with her just a bit sooner!! oh gosh PV has finished and i am dreaming on!

- Loving Aarya so much in this!! like OMG!! BLUSH!! Aarya Romance = BUTTERFLIES IN MY TUMMY!!! STRINGS!! omg TEETH omg BREATH MINI!!! is this what you want your readers to do? not breath? hmm? it is like he is stripping her!! pahaha

-I think the scar is symbolic.. for some reason i do? maybe? i dont know? i feel i am wrong maybe? its like HP scar for life? i dont know.. please correct me!!! it seems Aarti has really gone through her life with lots of obstacles and i mean a lot! i need like 4521358 boxes of tissues because it is making me sooo emotional right now.. ! i needed tissues badly at that point!

- Aartis father!! omg he is just so disgraceful i gotta tell ya! just YUCK at his behaviour towards Aarti! how can he just do that? disowning your own daughter? your flesh? what the hell? that ain love i tell you! i would hate my father for disowning me! seriously its just awful!

-SP and Gayatri are the best!! got to say they are!! i love the support coming from SP!

- At this point! i was feeling really sorry for Aarti mayn! she had a really rough life! I just love how Yash is always there for Aarti but not actually knowing it!

- Yash/Aarti have both had really tough lives already!! Yash got left with Arpitas baby which is nothing to do with Yash!! i just knew it from the moment she fainted that she was pregnant with someone else!! and how awful is it that she just leaves the baby with Yash? WHAT your own baby? are you stupid? and to say people actually do this! its awful! she is such a stupid bitch.. sorry!

- Yash is not the same in this FF he is WAAYY SWEET!! compared to other FF he is sooo different and i mean different!

- Sorry but i just dont like Aman at all.. i dont know why.. it makes me feel uncomfortable for some reason!

- Yash and Aarti WAAAY!! they are always this cute!

- Payal is just aww!!!! she is sooo cute! she is such a cutie!! QT! from the meeting she has a great connection with Aarti! which makes it even sweeter!

- Sameer and Aman please get lost? sorry InduDI!!! i just dont like em! and PRASHANT can die in a hole! pahaha

- Again Yash is always there!! awww

- NaaniMasi and Yash have a wonderful connection ! cuties! they are just great ! it reminds me a bit of Arpita! as in from actual PV! i know i am really strange yes?

- coming over to your FF to punch Prashant in the face!! going to slap him till his face bleeds!

- NaaniMasi handles everything by herself.. can i help her? shes like my idol! shes such a strong lady! reminds me of my grandma!! shes a tough cookie!

- my 8th box of tissues now ahahaha.. no NAANIMASI NO!!! Aarya SQUEEL!! i dont understand what Aarti is doing.. i am really confused?

- Aaw!! when Aarti falls into Yash's arms!!! SQUEEL! its only aarya when that happens! i can imagine YDH playing in the bg.! Yash and Aarti really getting to know each other! great!!!

- emotional conversation between Yash and Aarti!! making me teary now! aww ! i love emotional conversations! it builds me up with tears! another tissue box gone!!

-Aarti and Payal! way cute! This was such a sweet part!

- OH DAMN YASH ,, your gone! STRIKE ! hope nothing will happen to Aarya.. i hope Aarti understands! i wonder how Aarti will respond?

- Naanimasi is just TOP!

-AWW AARTI!! i have lost count of my tissue boxes..!!! Yash finally convinced Aarti thats awesome!

- Naughty boy Yash calling NaaniMasi his so called erm.. 'girlfriend' aw thats sweet!

- well we all know that Yash can deffo console Aarti!! oh wow what a change! Aarti basically asked Yash to marry her!? or is it just me? He wants to marry her!!!

-YASH DONT MESS UP JEEZ! he does love her? right?

- Bonding between Aarti and Payal again ! so sweet! its just so wonderful they way you have written it!

- Aarti doesn't understand its HER!! OMG HER !! isnt it? OMG like crying now! loving Aarti so much in this!!

- OMG OMG AARTI WHAT !! just Payal and Aarti just make me wanna.. I don't know I just wanna hug them sooo bad!!! OMG … Aarti drenched in blood..haii!!! wow .. I am kinda speechless right now

- Yash you go girl! Oh wait.. oops ! .. naina can just.. GRR

Eagerly waiting for more!!!! I love you

Indu this one was one of your masterpieces. There were lots to love in this update.

• The sight Yash was greeted with when he first walked into Aarti's room and saw her and Payal all happy
• Yash and Aarti's hug in her room that calmed both of them down
• Aarti calming him down when Payal fell in the ditch and offering to stay with her while he got help,along with Yash's quick hug and kiss before she joined Payal.
• The Aarti and Payal moments when they were waiting for Yash to come with help
• Yash's hug for both of them when he got to them and then his concern when Aarti winced due to her injury
• The look Yash and Aarti shared when they were back in her room with Aarti realising that she feels something different for him.
• Aarti overhearing Yash and Naina's conversation. (Curious to know her reaction)

Fantastic job as always. Looking forward to what is in store for these two as their journey continues