Samarpan (An FF) Part 25 (Thread 2/Page 133) - Page 104

Originally posted by: princess4120

WOW! WOW! a beautiful part yet again..

the whole thing is amazing.. in the beginning how arti calms payal about the drawings and how she gets her so excited about the collage.. to the incident on the trek.. arti is truly so selfless and loving.. she didnt bother about herself.. only focused on payal..

ahh.. the end.. WOW!! arti will now ask about yash's past.. and know what naina meant about payal not being his daugther.. so well written..

btw.. yash knowing arti is lying.. amazing...

cant wait till she realizes that he loves her and that she also loves him..

i hope you update soon.. cant wiat to read more..

and alos.. thanks for the links to your other ffs.. i am planning to start reading soon..

take care

Thanks Princess.😊

Things are slowly unfolding before Aarti. Given her traumatic past, Yash is trying to take it easy with her, but then some things are out of his hands; for instance, he couldn't stop Naina from spilling out Payal's truth, which she would have come to know from her aunt who was the doctor when Payal was born.

Yash has understood Aarti very well. His reactions and response to her are very instinctive. That's why when she behaves out of character, it flummoxes him.

Originally posted by: padmavar

awesome update!!! I love your story. And I wait very eagerly for the updates. You have done a great job with the story. Please update very soon.

Thanks Padma. A lot of me goes into each part each time. I am forever nervous regarding whether the progress is logical or not...or whether I am missing something.😊

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Indu once again you have written one amazing update. Thank you. So loved the adventure and the way arti and yash communicated without speaking and their love for payal is just amazing. Glad yash cleared Naina's misconceptions about them. Waiting eagerly for arti to start accepting her feelings for yash as what they are love.

Thanks Alamelu.

You know I loved how you pointed out Yash and Aarti's love for Payal. The little girl is God's own child...that's why even when her own parents turned their backs on her so ruthlessly, she grew up in the warm cocoon of parents who may not have given birth to her but loved her as their own.

Originally posted by: saf24

Indu this one was one of your masterpieces. There were lots to love in this update.

• The sight Yash was greeted with when he first walked into Aarti's room and saw her and Payal all happy
• Yash and Aarti's hug in her room that calmed both of them down
• Aarti calming him down when Payal fell in the ditch and offering to stay with her while he got help,along with Yash's quick hug and kiss before she joined Payal.
• The Aarti and Payal moments when they were waiting for Yash to come with help
• Yash's hug for both of them when he got to them and then his concern when Aarti winced due to her injury
• The look Yash and Aarti shared when they were back in her room with Aarti realising that she feels something different for him.
• Aarti overhearing Yash and Naina's conversation. (Curious to know her reaction)

Fantastic job as always. Looking forward to what is in store for these two as their journey continues

Saf, my friend...thank you so much for such lovely words and for such a super review.

Aarti has realized the shift in her feelings for Yash...and is becoming conscious about them. However, her mind will battle it out with her heart. This is where her mental conflict will begin.

Aha...a lot depends on how much did Aarti actually hear.

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Fabulous updt,cnt soon.

Thanks alekhika.😊

Originally posted by: scorpiodreams

Wonderful update, so one more truth to be confronted by arthi. you have penned their emotions excellently, i want to clap and say 'good job' (like how i appreciate my kids.)

Thanks pal. I am touched. 😳

Originally posted by: billieberry

aww!!! lovely update indu di❤️

first of all love naanimansi's advice to yash😊.jst like yash i though i will see them in a doom mood bt the atmosphere was jovial😃. oh aarti is an angel to comfort her baby like this😊

is this naina crazy or something telling aarti about her feelings nd yash fancy her LOL!😊in her dreamz😆

poor payal she had a great fall😭, luckily her pari is there for her, always and forever😊

love the two hugs and d kiss😳 and then another one with payal was framing them in my mind😉

i knew it naina never like payal she is only after yash. Thank God yash clear he is unavailable😆

so she was jealous of aarti that why she left d scene where payal fell into d ditch.

d last part did aarti heard their conversation?😲 waiting dear update soon.

thanx for the pm😳

Thanks Billie.🤗

Aarti did for Payal what no one could do for her under similar circumstances all those years back. A positive attitude is the brightest beacon to come out of a trauma.

Well, Yash was onto Naina almost from the beginning. The man has had enough experiences with girls like her. Only difference with Naina is that she is not greedy...only opportunistic.

Originally posted by: kratzyfan

INDU..another fantabulous update👏..loved each n every part of it...❤️

i so wish to have all the qualities of our dear aarti...she is an angel and yash too...made for each other...

at the end,again a shock😲

will it lead to aarti's 🥺

Thank you.

Aarti is just a very selfless person, who only thinks of others and of the happiness of the people she loves.😊

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Indu I've missed you many chapters so I had to start almost from the beginning, that's why it took me such a long time to comment. ( I won't say sorry as it has become repetitive on my part *holding both ears*). But now I'll try to read 2-3 chapters together and comment on it together 😳

I'll start from chapter -17

OMG I just loved the way Yash and Aarti found out that they'd met years back, Aarti was the same girl whom Yash has saved and for Aarti Yash was her savior. But they still don't know that they had also met when they were kids.

It was so heartbreaking to see Aarti's condition when she found out that her Baba had died few years back.

OMG her nightmare made me so emotional. The way Yash came to her rescue (once again) and consoled and comforted her 👏

And OMG OMG OMG Payal's entry and meeting with her mountain angel, Uff I had started dreaming the whole scene, Aarti interacting with Payal, Yash standing on the side and enjoying and savoring this moment

Chapter 18

Indu I'm dead dead dead 🤢, the way you've described Yash's realization and acceptance that he's in love with Aarti 🤢 " irrevocably and unconditionally in Love with Aarti" ☺️

Oh my darling cutie Payal, the way she stunned Yash and Aarti with her sweet innocent questions, Uff I'm in love with this angel 🤗

But the second part left me speechless Indu. I don't know how to express what I felt when Aarti made that announcement that she'll marry Sameer and then the way she blamed herself for everything. 😭

She thinks that she's a curse, but little does she know that she's really a PARI who'll bring only happiness in Yash's and Payal's life. ❤️

And now that Yash knows the whole truth that he knew Aarti since she was one day old, he won't let her marry any Sameer and Prashant type of guy. 👏

Nikki...please do not apologize. I feel embarrassed if you do that. I have told you earlier also that take your time. Whenever you come in and put your comment, it'll make me happy. In fact I am enjoying reading your delayed comments.It's taking me back to the story and making me recall a few things.

Loved how you voiced Aarti's place as really a pari in Yash and Payal's life. 😊

Thank you so much my friend. It's always a great pleasure to read your thoughts.

Originally posted by: pvanatic

beauty lies in your storytelling

😊indu you outdo yourself everytime . at a loss for words

Oh ma..that's such a sweet compliment. Thank you so much.😳