new thread and update 🥳
beautiful updateyash's reaction was...amazingly written- should have been arpita...ah really felt for him there😭aarti - is amazing! really- i have so much respect and admiration for your aartibeneath that sensitivity and delicate lady is steely determination and strength!👏umm just one note- when i first read about that bird- i imagined a bird of paradise. what you described in this chapter is a phoenix- though they are usually imagined in reddish hue not brown...but the thornbird is the one that impales itself when it finds the perfect thorn and sings beautifully while it dies...😕. not sure this is what you wanted. thornbirds are not seen as a symbol of uplifting, positive feeling. really, it's almost the oppositeanyway- fantastic chapter⭐️
Rutu - thank you, thank you!! I corrected the bird name in the update too. I meant the phoenix, at least for the painting Arti made - thank you for catching and correcting it. See why i love you guys??? 🤗