'My Hate Story' Part 4 A+B - Page 27 - Page 9

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

😆😆.. Oh my! This AarYa is so damn cute and hilarious together!! ☺️ Really love the fight romance and they fought about touching ass and licking lips LOL! 😆☺️

I know the story will be interesting.. Gonna wait for more! Update soon, guyz! Good Job! 👏👏

Originally posted by: Prasadini

Awesome work dear👏bless you

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

You three musketeers, I don't know what to say and how to say, as I'm laughing like crazy reading this 🤣

I've read so many different types of stories here in PV forum, but never something like this. It's really very funny. Loved Prashant's password 😆. The whole chapter was like crazy funny 👏

Originally posted by: pvejani

Wow...very intresting .👏 👏 .liked very much.
Plz add me to your pm list. 😊

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

So I have to write you three an essay, here's my best shot. I normally don't write essay responses to fanfictions, but you three are special, so... let's begin.

Yup...you had to and you did a pretty great job at it😉

So Yash and Aarti are criminal masterminds. Interesting. That is something different in itself. I love the background of this! The whole storyline is gripping. I'm loving the love/hate relationship between these two too! The way they swear at each other and claim to hate each other, but at the end of the day, something is attracting them towards each other!

Yeah, that's the chemistry between them. They hate each other a lot but their is a bit of physical attraction between them keeping them from killing each other.😉😆

Prashant and Arpita are married here, now that's something different. I guess Yash/Aarti are free from their clutches in this fanfiction. I won't complain! Ishita cracked me up, she's so superficial sounding. Yash leading her on like that made me laugh too, because he clearly wouldn't ever do anything like that unless he desperately needed something from her - which in this case, he does.

Yeah, they have 2 less devils to be away from...or do they? Just kidding. Yeah, Ishita is really easy going. If you want something from her, just sweet talk her.

Yash and Aarti's fights are adorable. I love the way they swear at each other, man. I don't think they'll ever be able to respect each other at this rate, they're both acting like angry young children... but clearly, they're attracted to each other at the same time, so it's all okay.

Aarya's nok-jhok is always fun to watch and their fighting here is really FIGHTING so let's see how they survive each other.

Their kiss - now that was one heck of a passionate kiss! In front of a guard too! Whoa! Bold move, children! They just didn't want to get off each other, and I can't blame them. For Yash and Aarti, it's hard to resist the other one.

Thank you thank you...yes the kiss was a surprise for even us...we were stuck on how to get them out and then we were like we need romance too so the kiss was yeah a real surprise...but wait for the next chapter.😉

After the kiss, they argued again... I don't think they'll ever drop this habit because they're probably very used to this by now! If they ever have kids though, poor children! I hope they don't end up teaching them the wrong things. Or am I thinking too far ahead right now?

Maybe you are...maybe not but they are really used to arguing. With the family enmity, it's really hard for them to respect each other especially when they both lost their family because of it.

I wonder what'll happen next. Update soon! I can't wait for more passionate scenes between the two, whether it's passionate kissing or passionate hating! I hope this was a good reply to your chapter, because like I said, I normally don't post these... sooo tell me what you think. Keep up the great work!

I was a really great reply. I loved it and I'm sure Kesh and Mini loved it too. Update coming in a bit...and the passion will stay there.😉

Part 2 -

Yash immediately drove off as the cops chased after them.

Aarti: drive faster you a**

Yash: do you think I am driving a plane, that I will press a button and the car will fly?

Aarti:I don't care cuz they are right on our a**es

Yash: we have to come up with a way to dodge them!

Aarti: don't you think I'm thinking of a plan now shut your pie hole and let me think!

There was silence for 5 minutes

Aarti: Got it! Just speed as fast as you can. Up ahead we can take a detour into the jungle if we see another Benz in our way.

Yash: Hey good idea b*tch when did u get so smart?

Aarti: shut your face and just do as I say

Yash groaned and followed Aarti's order just then he saw a car similar to his car and ducked in front of it as quickly as possible and swung into the jungle!!

Yash:"B*tch, they're off our tails but I swear if anything happens to my Benz in here, I will strangle you!"

Aarti:"You can't!"

Yash:""Why? Do you think I'm a weakling or were you just ignoring my muscles?"

Aarti:"No you motherf*cker! I think you're an idiot so you can't survive without me in here!"

Yash:"Oh please, who got us out of jail!"

Aarti:"Me!'

Yash:"Shut ya a*s! The only thing you know how to do is take credit!"

Aarti:"Are you damn serious? Your dad and you are the masters at that! My father made your company flourish and your father just stole every f*king thing!"

Yash:"You don't know about what your dad did?"

Aarti:"I don't care so shut your as*hole cause my dad didn't do one sh*ting thing!"

Yash:"If you feel so, you sl*t!"

Aarti:"Oh! So the woma**zer is telling me that!"

Yash:"Bi*ch!"

Aarti:"Dog!"

Suddenly it was getting really dark. Yash tried to come out of the jungle when his car got stuck in the mud and he realized he couldn't make a move.

Yash: b*tch now go and push the car

Aarti: who me? I'm sure you're not talking about me.

Yash: no, no I wasn't asking you. I was asking GOD!

Aarti: shut your face!!

Yash: B*tch, jokes apart, one of us has to come out and push in order for us to get out of here!

Aarti: So you get out! I'm the woman here!

Yash: Are you sure you're a woman?

Aarti: Shut it before I kick you in your balls

Yash: You can't do that here! You're in your seat and I'm in another if you didn't realize you a*s!

Aarti replied, "Oh yeah!" in a quite sensuous voice.

Soon she rested her hand on Yash's muscles feeling them ripple under her hand moving them towards the lever to push back his seat. Pulling it, Yash's seat tilted backwards and Aarti climbed out of hers and sat on Yash hovering over him. She then slid her foot down his leg until she got in the right position.

Having Aarti over him, Yash was feeling actually good. He was puzzled as he was supposed to be hating her but her position on him just made him feel really good. Just then his chain of thought was broken, by the feel of Aarti's foot hitting a very sensitive area.

Climbing off him,

Aarti: Do you now understand how to kick someone in their special area?

Yash: What was that for?

Aarti: You said I wasn't a woman, I just wanted to find out if you were a man?

Yash: F*** you, you piece of sh*t

Aarti: Thank you! How sweet!

Yash: Delusional bi*ch

Aarti: Now did you decide who's pushing?

Yash: Ugghh!

He said as he got out of the car as Aarti climbed in the driver's seat.

Yash: Ready?

Aarti: Push na?

Yash: Wait you h*e!

Aarti: the bas**rd calls me a hoe!

As Yash pushed and Aarti steared, the tires created a mess of mud on his clothes until the car was out. Aarti alighted.

Aarti: No way you're coming in with your clothes like this!

Yash: Fine then!

Yash slowly started to pull off his shirt until it was off revealing his six packs. Every bit he pulled off the shirt, Aarti was lost in staring but what she saw next was like a kick in the rear! Yash was about to pull off his jeans, already close by unbuttoning the button.

Aarti: Dude, keep your pants on!

Yash: Why? Weren't you getting all touchy with me in there?

Aarti: Come on as**ole! Just keep your pants on!

Yash: You don't need to tell me that! A bi*ch like you doesn't deserve to see a hunk like me! I just wanted to see if you were a sl*t or not?

Aarti: Fr*king piece of crap!

Yash: I must sat then. I am the sexiest piece of crap ever.

Aarti: Just''get''in!

They both climbed in and Yash still was shirtless.

Yash: Bi*ch!

Aarti: Stop calling me that!

Yash: Why shouldn't I call you what you are?

Aarti: Ugghhh, what did you want?

Yash: I think by now they probably figured out that it wasn't us and well they're on the road they chased us on and probably coming in the forest.

Aarti: Yeah, I never thought about that!

Yash: Of course you didn't!

Aarti: Shut it!

Yash had a huge piece of camouflage cloth in his trunk he quickly got out the car and got the piece of camouflage cloth. Then Aarti got out the car and helped him push the car.

Aarti: Push harder man!!

Yash: gosh Aarti do you have to say it like that?

Aarti: say... ewww disgusting a**hole

Finally they pushed the car under a big tree and Yash and Aarti spread the huge camoflage cloth on the car it blended very well with nature and looked like a huge rock below a tree. Unfortunately they would have to spend the whole night there since they couldn't be too sure if the police were searching for them.

Aarti: Idiot!

Yash: What! Do you have a problem with me not talking to you b**ch! Because apparently, it gives me peace and you don't want that.

Aarti: Of course I don't want you to have peace! But you bas***d, I'm feeling cold. Can't you at least turn on the heater?

Yash: No way!

Aarti" Why?

Yash: Are you kidding me? Do you want to get caught?

Aarti: What does that have to do with the heat you sh*t

Yash: You motherf**ker, if we turn on the heat, it'll waste gas and obviously, we need gas to drive the car away from the f*king cops!

Aarti: I didn't think about that!

Yash: Yeah! I realized how stupid you are a long time ago.

Aarti:Shut your as**ole!

Yash : erm.. Why should I? your the one who opened your fat gob first

Aarti : I have a fat gob? you motherf*ker!! .. cant you just turn it up for a bit?

Yash : hell no, you call me motherf*ker and then ask me to turn it up for a bit, are you fu*king serious?

Aarti : Yes i am freezing my a*ss off over here!! TURN THE HEATER ON YOU F*KER

Yash : tell me why i should waste MY fuel on you?

Aarti : because i am worth it

Yash : b*tch please.. your worth it?

Aarti: You pig!

Yash:If I'm a pig, then you're definitely a b**ch!

Aarti: You know what! GO TO HELL!

Yash: I'm too awesome for hell.

Aarti: You di*k!

Yash: I have one, I aren't one.. get your facts right

Aarti:Ugghh!

Then Aarti saw the jacket which Yash had on earlier on the back of his chair but his back was pressed on it.

Immediately Aarti went up to yash getting closer and closer. Yash moved back a bit getting creeped out by her actions. Aarti slowly was close to yash. Aarti sat on yash once again who was in the front seat of the car. She crossed her legs around Yash and put her arms around his neck .. making it easier for her to get the jacket..aarti thought this was the only thing to do to try to get warm...Yash, afraid to get kicked in his ba**s again, said

Yash: Aarti, look I'm not gonna say bi*ch again once you don't kick me in my ba**s and get off me.

Aarti: Yash, I 'm not gonna kick, I get your point. We need to save the gas.

Yash: So then why are you on top of me?

Aarti: This is our only way to stay warm.

Yash: There is no way I'm gonna do this.

Aarti: I know you piece of sh*t. I don't wanna do this either but we'll freeze to death if we don't.

Yash: Even though you're over-exaggerating, I agree but please let's don't tell anyone about this

Aarti felt as if her plan was working but there was no way she was going to get the jacket if he was still in the seat. Aarti's self thought- Come on, seduce him into the back seat Aarti.

Aarti clutched Yash's broad shoulders, she pulled him towards her.. Yash's nose touched Aarti's, Yash nuzzled his nose with hers. Aarti bit her lip, she looked at Yash and went for it.. Aarti kissed Yash.. she kissed him passionately forgetting that is was freezing. Yash was not in his senses, he thought he was going to loose control.. Aarti's nails sunk into Yash's broad shoulder's Yash moaned in pain with a mixture of pleasure then he grabbed Aarti's waist more tightly and squeezed her. Slowly he turned her around gently by her shoulders and slipped her t-shirt off her shoulders. Slowly, he planted a deep kiss on Aarti's shoulder making her quiver.

Yash: Aarti, what body wash do you use?

Aarti: Why as**ole?

Yash: Just because you taste like vanilla.

Aarti: How would you know? It's only my shoulder.

Yash: Let's see then.

Aarti: Yash wait, I just want to make it clear that I still hate you really much for what your dad did but this is my last option so please don't misunderstand me.

Yash: Same here bi*ch

He then continued kissing her from her shoulder to her neck making Aarti's knees weak. Yash continued kissing her following to her back. Aarti self thought: He may be worth seducing to get his jacket. Immediately she snapped herself out of it and focused on her plan. Aarti self thought: Come on Aarti! Get him in the back seat!

Aarti: Yash we have no space here. Let's go to the back!

Yash: Let's go.

Yash went to the back of the car, thank god Aarti thought, she could now get the jacket but now what was Yash going to do?

Yaarti.mini/guruandkratz/swaggerchick16 😳

Originally posted by: -BlushaLicious-

Man I'm Lovin This !! 😎 !!

Especially The Bitch - bas***d - Motha Fuka - Stuff !! 😎 !! 😆 !!

Nice One !!