So I have to write you three an essay, here's my best shot. I normally don't write essay responses to fanfictions, but you three are special, so... let's begin.
So Yash and Aarti are criminal masterminds. Interesting. That is something different in itself. I love the background of this! The whole storyline is gripping. I'm loving the love/hate relationship between these two too! The way they swear at each other and claim to hate each other, but at the end of the day, something is attracting them towards each other!
Prashant and Arpita are married here, now that's something different. I guess Yash/Aarti are free from their clutches in this fanfiction. I won't complain! Ishita cracked me up, she's so superficial sounding. Yash leading her on like that made me laugh too, because he clearly wouldn't ever do anything like that unless he desperately needed something from her - which in this case, he does.
Yash and Aarti's fights are adorable. I love the way they swear at each other, man. I don't think they'll ever be able to respect each other at this rate, they're both acting like angry young children... but clearly, they're attracted to each other at the same time, so it's all okay.
Their kiss - now that was one heck of a passionate kiss! In front of a guard too! Whoa! Bold move, children! They just didn't want to get off each other, and I can't blame them. For Yash and Aarti, it's hard to resist the other one.
After the kiss, they argued again... I don't think they'll ever drop this habit because they're probably very used to this by now! If they ever have kids though, poor children! I hope they don't end up teaching them the wrong things. Or am I thinking too far ahead right now?
I wonder what'll happen next. Update soon! I can't wait for more passionate scenes between the two, whether it's passionate kissing or passionate hating! I hope this was a good reply to your chapter, because like I said, I normally don't post these... sooo tell me what you think. Keep up the great work!
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