Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 99

Originally posted by: guruandkratz

Arpita you friking bi*ch! What is it with Yash's luck for women? I agree with him! He just attracts the bad ones! I knew Payal was Arpita's child! Give me credit for thinking it! I hardly get predictions right!

And Aman too! These two friends huh!

Well I love this update! You answered most questions playing in my mind and gave me another feel to Samarpan!😳

Please do continue soon as I want to see how Yash and Aarti's journey unfolds!!

Hi Carissa...Calm down sweetheart. There are money-minded, ambitious people like Arpita all over the world. She is pretty single minded in her goals, and she can go to any lengths to achieve them.

Oh yes...I have to credit you for guessing rightly about Payal. This background of Payal is what Yash and Aarti were discussing in one of the earlier chapters about letting her know about the reality when she turns seventeen.

Yash and Aarti saga begins now...and I have no clue how those two will carry it forward.😳

Originally posted by: luv_lvndr

Wow...superb update...finally Yash meet her...I hope she was Aarti...

Thanks.

Yeah that's Aarti...It's kind of continuation from Part 7. In that part, the scene was from Aarti's eyes...and now we have the same scene perceived through Yash's eyes.

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Ah - that explains a lot Indu. I am glad Yash did not turn into Devdas, but Aman 😭. What was it with these two friends huh? Pathetic luck when it came to women.

The best part Indu - you tied up the loose ends neatly before making Yash and Arti meet again. So now they can start on a clean-slate with their journey. They carry their own baggage - but that's part of the journey too.

Really looking forward to it...

Thanks Kat.

Yash and Aman...what can I say? They did have bad experiences.

That's that pal...their common past began in that hospital ward and after taking different routes and near misses finally converges in Brownies. Let's see how it goes from here...

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Oh Indu... I'm so so so sorry for not commenting for chapter 9. I was so caught up with uni that when I finally came to reply I saw part 10 up... 😭
Anyways both parts were just beautiful. the moment I read the poem, I immediately remembered the part where you say the diary will bring yash and aarti together (that it served a bigger purpose) and that arpita will indirectly lead them to each other. OMG Indu what brilliance. I absolutely love the way you connect one incident (like the stealing of the diary) to something so beautiful. You truly are a maestro in writing and I can't stop enjoying every bit of your work.

Arpita's attitude was just shocking. I don't get how a woman can just give up her child in exchange for money (sadly there are woman like this in our world).. I actually thought Yash would fall for Arpita, then when she left I thought maybe the child will be killed (that's why he's like devdas)..😆 but even in my weirdest thought, I never predicted it was just for fun (just to relive the journey he and Aman planned). that just goes to say how depressing my mind is.. LOL.

Oh ho indu.. I was so excited and was bursting in joy when Yash said the only one I could have in mind is lost out there.. OMG he loves Aarti for so long. A love so deep that just made me smile like I've lost my mind and when they met oh goodness, what a reunion.. (not romantic) but again it's better than the cliche of how a first meeting should be. Aarti's compassion will reinforce yash's love/feelings and also will remove whatever pretense he has on woman getting attracted to him coz of his money. Absolutely lovely indu and you're just wonderful for connecting one scene to another that everything falls into place like pieces to a puzzle. Love love love it.. Now jhappi and pappis wont be enough but i'll give it with love and joy..🤗

Sheema...there you are. I missed you. But I understand the issue...so no problem. You take care of your studies first.These chapters can always be followed up later.

Hey, you remembered when I had mentioned earlier that this journal was not merely a prop, but has an important role to play. After all, Arpita is the only person who has met both Aarti and Yash.😃

Well...I kept telling everybody that appearances can be deceptive when most everyone thought Yash had gone Devdas. If you remember, when Aarti offered him the free burger, he looked offended and indignant...That should have been a clue that till he set eyes on her, he didn't like anyone taking him for a tramp.😛


Well...so, here we go...beginning at another beginning. At the moment Yash is in love with the idea of Aarti. When will his mental and visual imageries blend?

Aha my jhappis...I had missed them...Her's one right back for ya...🤗

Originally posted by: Abie10

Beautiful update Indu 👏 ahh arpita how could she not even glance at her own baby.
Ohh Aman passed away 😭 Deepa is another Arpita..

Yay yash finally met Aarti..continue soon cant wait for their convo

Abie...thank you pal. Stay with me.😊

Originally posted by: ksfan2

really beautiful di..it was so emotional..waiting for yash to meet his soulmate

Thanks Rashee. Yash has met his soul mate...it's a matter of recognition now.😊

Originally posted by: shalini28

wow di the update is really beautiful😳.

loved it so much.

feeling so bad for yash 😭

waiting for next part di😳

Thanks Shalini.

Don't worry about Yash. He'll be fine. He has Payal and he has his family...and now this mysterious girl with soulful eyes has entered his life.😊

Originally posted by: LoveViShalini

awesome..

Yash meet Aarthi ...

nice update re..

cant wait for ur next part...

Thanks Shalini. Stay with me.😊

Originally posted by: Zetter

Awesome update Pal 👏 👏 👏...OMG I can't believe that Arpita just signed away all her rights to her baby like that for money 😡 Oh well she never wanted the baby anyways

wow I loved the way SP came up with the cover story for why Arpita had to leave them Payal that's a beautiful name 😃 👍🏼

Aww poor Aman on his hospital bed, his wife wanted him to sign over everything to her poor guys they didn't had the best record with it came to those gold diggers...I truly loved Yash & Aman's bromance. Sorry he had to die I cried my heart out when I read he died 😭 😭 😭

So three years later they finally met, Yash found the one he has been looking for, the one whose writing captivated his heart at the first sentence in that journal 😳 😳 😳

You never cease to amaze me, wonderful job my Dear friend 👏 🤗 ❤️

Hey my dearest friend...you know I heaved a big sigh of relief when Yash went and met up with Aarti...I was like, 'Wow! I did it...I managed to wrap up the background.' The feeling was akin to passing an exam.

Thanks re...what'll I do without your words of support. BTW I loved the word "bromance"...good one!👍🏼

Just be there...Ok?🤗

di i finished reading all parts again 😊