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Dishaini

@disha_rajdev

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

What can I say???😕

One word...Its beautiful,Indu sis👏

A beautiful update and it makes me more eager for ur next update.😉

Thank u for the PM sis😃

Take care always🤗

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Mahalakshmi

@maha9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

wow so sweet of arthi. I feel sad and at the same time happy for her character.

Uff here also prashant is bad ah !!!

Great work dear...

continue sooon

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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

This was another fantastic update Indu. Loved the continuation to Aarti's life as it helps explain her actions in the present. Beautiful descriptions throughout the update. You really are gifted with words. Curious to see what happens next.

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Jaggy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

Thanks for link dear

Amazing update ..loved the way you describe the beauty of house

and aarti relation and her fear

so dubey died what destiny whom they consider curse is bless for them

prashant damit

ooops hows in end line person

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

Wow! it was such a long nd beautiful update. hope Aarti won't fall for prashant I can't see that please Yash is waiting for her don't let d devil catch u(aarti) update soon dear me loved it so much.

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@ksfan2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#676

happy to have a lively aarthi back..was that yash in the end

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lulujjjj

@lulujjjj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#677

Amazing work Indu dear loved it .superb part description about the characters was outstanding, i was totally in some other world till i finished reading this chapter. Prashant such a cheapo he made aarti scared.waiting for the next part.

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scorpiodreams

@scorpiodreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#678

thankyou so much for an awesome update. though i wanted arthi's dad to repent alive for his deeds, but i am satisfied with the end he&his family got. hate that prashant guy ... arthi should be strong and handle that fellow but not get back to her shell. wonder who is this at the bakery...pls cont soon.

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Leevi05

@Leevi05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#679

awesome update

wow wow wow

where is yash? he is missing?

who is the man at the end?

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Abie10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#680

Indu trust me I lost myself when you write ⭐️ that was a beautiful continuation of Aarti's story. Love it that she's away that hell. Ohh so Dubey died thank god Aarti was not there she would have heard some more curse.

Love the build up of her relation with naani maasi.. continue soon

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