Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 66

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

******Reserved******

It seems even I am developing this bad habit of reserving and not commenting immediately.😳

But I will get back. I have to read it again at leisure to be able to form any thoughts about it. Your writing always has that effect on me.

🤗

Take your time...you already made me feel good .😊

Originally posted by: maha9

wow i have no words to expresss the beauty of the story revealation.

The idea arthi still remembered from yash to safeguard herself is superb and arthi is so intelligent.

I am happy atlast that her naanimaasi came to save from this hell.

Thanks Maha.

That home-made spray was just an example of how innovative and self-reliant Aarti was. Now you know where Aayu gets his imaginative prowess from.😊

Originally posted by: freya123

awesome update

Thanks Freya.😊

nice update

omggg aarti was such a good student and don't understand why arpi took her writings😕😕😕
poor aarti has to suffer sooo much😭😭
omggg this bhua is sooo bad and they almost forced her to marry😡😡😡😡😡

love the way yash talked to aarti and then made her to stood up

hopefully nanimassi is nice

now waiting for next part

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Thank goodness... Finally Aarti spoke up against all those who treated her like dirt and told them that she wouldn't marry. I honestly felt so disgusted with her family members who wanted to marry her off to a middle age man. It is so degrading and insulting to aarti and it would have crushed her to think that her own family thinks of her as such a burden that they're willing to get her married off to anyone. Such low life but yeah people like this do exist. It even happened to my grandma but those were the olden days when people were less educated but to think it still happens, it's just way beyond appalling.

I just loved the way Yash was the one who gave her the courage to live life the way she wants. to be the master of her own life. without him, I'm pretty sure that she'd end up marrying that man and her life would have been doomed. Thank goodness she has people like Malti and the principle around were the reason she was able to further her studies. What made me feel really sad was Aarti feeling the guilt when her pandit dadu died and it went worse with that Maya adding salt to her wound. These people should be shot dead. I really wanted to break that woman's hand when she slapped aarti multiple times for going against their wishes of getting her married off. I didn't get what she meant by "this is how you repay us". Oh my, I was like "no this is how I should repay you... *slap and punch and kick*"..I really felt like slapping all of them who think aarti owes them anything.

Naanimaasi finally made her appearance and was the one to bring aarti out of that hell hole. Though she's physically out of it, mentally she'd be haunted and scared for life. It's such a pity to see her go through so much of pain during the years which you're supposed to experience the best years of your life. That father of her's is just hopeless I tell you. Man like him don't deserve to be called fathers. I do understand he's angry, upset but when so much injustice is happening to your own child, he should have done something but instead remained silent. Disgusting man.

Indu again another masterpiece. This updates made me really sad and I nearly teared up upon the death of pandit dadu but most of all I was so damn angry with those people she calls her family. I really wanted to slap everyone so hard especially maya. she's useless. Loved your updates and finally we will probably get to see some happy moments but I know it will definitely come with a lot of sadness as aarti is still haunted by the past. So now for such a brilliant update i'll not only give you a jhappi but also a pappi.. 🤗 You're amazing Indu..

Whoa! Hold it my angry young friend...Why hurt your palm touching the disgusting women? 😛...Gosh your anger is palpable. It hit me as I read your words. Thank God Naanimaasi came in when she did...otherwise I'd have had to create another angel called Sheema and make her stand as Aarti's shield against the terrible trio.😃

Seriously, let them be Sheema...they have managed to injure her psyche much more than they would with a few slaps. How Aarti reacts to a strange human contact in close proximity is the big question now...what it'll take naanimaasi to get through to her. She is safe now...yes...but only externally. Don't forget she is still a prisoner of her very low self-esteem.
It remains to be seen how much damage has been done.

Thank you so much once again for such a wonderful review. You spoil me rotten. I am already addicted to the jhappis...and now pappis too...Thanks you so much.🤗🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: InduG64

Thanks Disha...Welcome to the thread!🤗

I am so glad I could pull you in with me on this journey. Hope you continue to stay till the end.😳

Sure I'll pm you...Better still, send me a buddy request.😊

Originally posted by: jasraj123

nice update

omggg aarti was such a good student and don't understand why arpi took her writings😕😕😕
poor aarti has to suffer sooo much😭😭
omggg this bhua is sooo bad and they almost forced her to marry😡

love the way yash talked to aarti and then made her to stood up

hopefully nanimassi is nice

now waiting for next part

Thanks Jasraj.😊

Arpita is basically a spiteful, arrogant girl who is insecure about her boyfriend. Since she doesn't want to ask Rahul whether he is interested in Aarti, she is ensuring Aarti stays away from Rahul by keeping her diary as sort of a hostage with her.

Originally posted by: disha_rajdev

🤗Ur welcome Indu sis..Haha,😆am so happy and glad that I got a chance to join this awesome journey with you.And I just send the buddy request and do accept it,sis.🤗

Thank you Disha...entirely my pleasure.🤗
PS: I accepted your request.

wow great story.👏

Absolutely amazing update. So poignant and beautiful. The conversation between Yash and Arthie stole my breath. He gave her courage without ever having met her and changed the course of both the lives. Cannot wait to read what happens next...