Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 33

You did an Amazing job on this update Indu. It was a tough task . You accomplished the task and we got to read the best of human emotions.

Right now I can't seem to focus on anything besides the sinking feeling that I had as I read the last line of Part 3...A ten-year-old girl, writing such a thing...again...Dear God, what did Aarti have to endure during those years...?

*Reserved - for the time when I can revisit this part in more detail...*

Eagerly awaiting the next part...I am so, so curious about the painful past. Beautiful job, my friend.

aww shuks - i dindn't mean it as such. the reaction wasn't to scare you or anything. and please don't let it influence the story. i think the beginning chapters prepared but it was the age that caught me by surprise. and i think you should know why. i volunteer at children's hospital- in pediatric ICU. and unfortunately, we see one too many cases of abuse. be it emotional or physical abuse, it has grave consequences. it's heartbreaking for each of us when we're working with that patient. so i think this will hit me harder than if aarti were a little older. shameful of me as abuse is one and the same regardless of the age but there you go...

But it looks like the past of Arati is really heart- wrenching 😭 But looks at the brighter side, Arati si now happy with her family with Yash on her side who took away her pain and made her live again 😃.

Wow words can't explain but Aarti is really a wonderful mother to her children and a wonderful wife a a loving husband Yash

Waing on next update

I know this story will make me cry for hours, but I certainly don't mind! 😭 😭

It's just so...beautiful! 👏 👏

I loved the way the mood of the night lighten up! Kids are such a delight!

And the added RD bit was hilarious!!! 🤣 I can picture it! 😆

And AarYa...my lovely AarYa! Oh God! 😭 😭 Aarti's pain and suffering is hurting poor Yashu equally! 😭 😭

Love this Di! It was awesome!!!! 👏