Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 32

Originally posted by: rutu83

umm i'm not sure how to say it but i'm...hesitant with this fic.

you have this amazing way of getting my emotions involved. and i have a feeling this one will make me cry. in a heartwrenching sorta way i guess i'm feeling a little like your yash in the attic

and eventhough i know there's light at the end of the tunnel- the darkness faced during the journey through the tunnel is making me hesitant.

...yet despite it all, i know i'm going to be involved so could you be a sweetheart and not completely break my heart?

*Sigh* Rutu...this kind of reaction is what was scaring me to bits. I thought the prologue and first three chapters would prepare for the upcoming angst. The love story can only begin when I have introduced you to the darkness of their pasts. I'll try to not be cruel and finish this quick so that we can move forward faster.😳

Wow! Indu lovely update 👏 👏 enjoyed the kids imitating Aarti and RD.
Hmm what are they hesitant to tell payal until her seventh year and Aarti's past . This story is so much getting into me can't wait for the next update.

Awww what an emotional update Pal 👏 👏 😭 😭...Poor Aarti, I love how she stays positive and that she didn't let her past stopped her from trusting love that last sentence just broke my heart 😭

Beautiful update indu di, it heart wrenching, lov d RD scene, can wait to know what they re hiding for payal nd dat dairy too. update soon dear:).

Hello Indu dear, another brilliant update with a lot of emotional turmoil ahead for us all especially you as I know that you said this would be the toughest part for you. As much as we wish we could avoid the pain, anguish and scars of life they are vitally important in helping build us up into strong individuals and such is the case even in a story. Characters are more loved for the survival rather than those who always get what they want because this is the similarity between reality and a fan fiction that life is'nt without its share of problems. Aarthis past is clearly smeared with pain but her resolution to overcome that is going to make her character stand out. The admiration from Yash is already an indicator of the survivor she is. I loved how beautifully she explained to Payal that love should not be confined and that there are many expansions of love. I also gathered that the bond between Pari n Aarthi is very strong cause when Prateek questioned her reaction she said to ask Pari which could mean that she has shared a part of her past with her...I could be wrong. I am totally loving this family unity. They have such a serene understanding of each other that even the kids knew how to make Aarthi smile. You also got me thinking that the revelation about whatever it is, is really an important part of her identity. I feel that its something deep and can't wait to see how you bring this about. Aryas moment in the bedroom was something so pure ad special and you sent a brilliant message through this scene that physical interaction is not everything in a relationship. I loved how Yash set aside his needs to be there for Aarthi...for me it was a beautiful moment. Just being in the comfort of each other was more than enough. Again I have rambled buddy but you just give me s much to think about ...lol. Until my next read keep being inspired Indu...you never fail to impress:)

Indu- I am intrigued by this story. It promises a lot of darkness in Aarti's past. I love the sensitivity and depth of knowledge that your writing portrays though- love and security can help people deal with their past demons- but to truly overcome them takes longer. Some defenses that you build up are hard to let go of.

thanks for the pm and a lovely update. yash is so caring and knows arthi in and out. seems like some peeping into the past is gonna happen soon

Awesome part, Indu!! 👏👏 Loved it.. ❤️

Hey! It's fabulous. The feeling of love, companionship, togetherness are beautifully woven in words. Payal and Aarti's relationship is amazing. Yash understands Aarti very well even if she doesn't show him. The diaries indicates that Aarti had a bitter past. Curious to know what happened in her past.