Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 115

Yes... I made it before you posted a new part.. YESSS...

So Yash does recognise her but at the same time doesn't remember who exactly she is. Those eyes have definitely captivated him and it was fantastic that he immediately connected the dots (the words in the diary and the owner). I've heard many times that unknown emotions can make you do strange and crazy things and in Yash's case it made him lie to her by saying it was his birthday and he was playing out as the poor chap. 😆 . I guess part of him wants that confirmation that aarti isn't a gold digger like all the previous girls he has dated.

When aarti took that gift for a moment I was worried that upon hearing Prashant's treats towards naanimaasi, she'd accept the proposal but thank goodness courage is starting to appear within her and also she has begin to trust naanimaasi to know that she wouldn't force aarti into such an alliance which is against aarti's heart. but yes now i'm thinking who is the guy walking towards her and that too holding out a phone. It can be yash but if it was, the question is why didn't she react.. hmmm... I guess that I'll have to wait for your next update...

Indu fantastically written again and as usual. I can sense that my time to burst out in tears is nearing already.. I'm so prepared for that. Each time I read your ff, I ensure that I'm alone so that people don't panic if and when I tear up or start smiling like crazy (Like i did in your previous ff). Brilliance beyond brilliance. So now here my long overdue jhappi... 🤗

Hi Dear Indu caught up with your beautiful emotional story Samarpan.

It was heart wrenching and heartwarming loved it!


But I had a lot of trouble going through finding the links


So I sent a pm to you in the hopes of you considering hyper-linking! 😳

Sheema: Thank you so much. I am sorry I cannot give you a detailed response today due to space crunch. However, I assure you I won't make Yash/Aarti's interactions morbid at all...I want Yash and Aarti's evolution and lean toward each other to be natural...maybe a little hurting at times...but mostly they will deal with the past hurts.Hope is what they will immediately recognize in each other and will want to hold on to.

Thanks for my jhappi...and right back to you.🤗

@Angel: Thank you so much my friend. You are a savior.

Thanks for catching up with Samarpan. I am happy it appealed to you. Your opinions are always valuable to me. 😊

Since we've made it to page 151 anyway, I might as well post something, too!

Indu it's time to start new thread

Originally posted by: freya123

amazing update

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Thanks Freya.😊

Dear friends,

We part to meet in Thread 2.

The Link: Samarpan--Thread 2

Love
Indu

Hey Indu di Iam back
Aarpita n rahul story is mean but y yash adopted payal so that he has someone in aloof life.. really i am amazed n wat lil clarity on it Di
i mean i dont want to say it but helplessness n restleesnees increased as i am sailing in yash journey its really leaving a lump in my throat
the journal which was a soothin balm for aarti earlier is in a way reason to live fr yash the one he is meant to be thats a blissful connection
beautiful words hides alot of depth n pain which is still not making much sense to me di but wat i say it hits you deep inside
its heavy but will atleast finish thread 1 so that i can move n congratulate you for th2

part 11
Yash met his gal but cant reconize but eyes speaks volume
deepa, aman all have played a role which we say make you learn a lesson n move on with conduming the goodness n evileness which is part of this world
aman shud not die but later i thot if he hasnt yash has not met aarti which in a way true friend soul guided his frnd
aarti yash

aaarti n naani massi as it say its not easy for woman to stand alone n survive cleaerly indicates p n singhania intension
raj n naanimassi ( forgt her name) a story of its own which is pleasent
aarti deep scars not on bod, mind, heart but on soul n yash past has its own turmoil
two depriev souls will find their soulace

one thing is for sure you may writ one word but it has its own story which is lil diffcult to crack for a nut cracker like me😉

take care😃