Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 102

Firstly sorry for my late reply

Hi Indu di😉

Indu awesome update i knew payal would be arpita daughter, aman and yash part was very touching. waiting for your next update. Insha Allah.

What an amazing chapter!! Again, you managed to surprise me! After the last chapter, I had imagined that Yashji ran away from his life and his family after Arpita's deception. I never imagined the poise and confidence he displayed and that he looked like a vagrant because he was on a trip to commemorate a friend's death. Amazing plot!

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Congratulation you finished aarya's past in ten chapters..👏 👏

Coming to the updates..Its just mind blowing dear..👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Arpita is so sick😡...She did all this for money and didn't even saw her daughter at once😲...So heartless women😡😡.Happy that arpita confronts the truth about journal to yash.⭐️

Glad yash took Payal( beautiful name.) with him❤️.

Loved the way SP managed the family about arpita's issue.👏

Omg Aman died😭 😭😭..Felt poor for him..Deepa is so cruel😡 😡.Thats pathetic end for him.😭 😭

Last part..Payal and yash scene cute😳 ..Finally that how he met aarti in that shop😃...

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next part

Radha...thank you so much. I was always clear that I won't drag the first part of Yash and Aarti's individual past, so yeah I am happy that I managed to stick to the number I had in mind. Also, I don't see myself going for months with the story so I have a tentative deadline in my mind for the end as well.😳

Thanks for such a sweet feedback🤗...Yeah, that's how he met Aarti, finally. It was always meant to be in a natural manner...nothing melodramatic about it. The only drama here is that Aarti thinks he is a penniless hobo. Let's see what Yash does about that.

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Wow! It's just fabulous. Arpita is so selfish and greedy for the money that she even doesn't saw her daughter once. And Yash is so nice man to lovingly caring someone else child as his own. Lovely Papa-daughter bonding.

Poor Yash, he had always encountered with bad girls. Aman is so nice to bring him to that place where he can found his soul mate. Payal told him to bring the mountain fairy, and he got that fairy. But you stopped at the climax, that's not fair. Pls. update soon.

Thanks Shashi It's my turn to say wow...So, Wow!! This has to be your longest feedback to me. Thank you so much my friend.

Oh yes, Yash did find a fairy for his princess, didn't he? Glad that you made the connect...the only one so far. Now we wait to see what Payal wants of her.😊

Originally posted by: gmhatcher

WOW 👏 👏 👏 What a fabulous story Indu.

Thanks Gemmy. However, I would be much obliged if you give me a more elaborative opinion. 😳

Originally posted by: jasraj123

omggg arpita arghhh how a mother can leave her child and not even look at it
she just sooo 😡😡😡

omggg poor yash struck and lost his money too😕😕😕 but he did find her😉😉😉

waiting for next update

Thanks Jasraj.

Unfortunately people like Arpita do exist, albeit in different flavors. I have a relative who gave birth to a son, and then within a month left with her husband to a foreign country to start something they had planned for long. Their son stayed with his grandparents. It took almost a decade for the parents to establish themselves. They came to take their son back after 11 years...by then it was too late. Their son had no attachment toward them. He refused to leave his grandparents who were like his parents now. They had to go back empty handed.

Originally posted by: pvejani

wow👏...awsome...loved very much..

thanx for update and pm.

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: maha9

Wow wow superb part indu dear !!!

how cunning is this arpita so easy to make yash fall in her trap.

But i am happy that she left and now yash will meet his soulmate arthi !!!! Yippee i am waiting for that great day and it came finally.

so update soon sweety dont make me wait okie

Maha...thank you so much.

The soul mates have met...now begins the journey of recognition.😊