Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 103

Originally posted by: dhrashtee

book marking ;)

Waiting!!!😃

Originally posted by: ns1970

Well indu another superb update thank god that bi..h Arpita is gone

And now our lovely aarti will enter his life

Thanks ns.😊

Originally posted by: taahir004

Firstly sorry for my late reply

what a twist it was so unexpected Yash and Arpita gets married

but why has she got Aarti's journal

yet again a captivating part

Taahir...I was wondering where you were. Missed you. It's OK if you skip a part or two...I understand. Life can get real busy at times.

Arpita confiscated Aarti's journal before the final year's exams. If I am not wrong, the incident is in Part 7.😊

Originally posted by: disha_rajdev

Hi Indu di😉

Your are most welcome di😃

Thank u for giving such a wonderful updates⭐️⭐️⭐️

Okay now I got that.About the gap😃

So after this I wont be worry and troubles u di..so sorry di if i got troubled u😔

Just I got no patience,I think.Yeah got ur mail ready.

Take care always Indu sis🤗

C'mon Disha...no trouble at all. I take it as a sweet compliment that you should be a little upset with this di of yours for seemingly missing you from the mailing list, cause you were waiting to read the next part. 😊

Thanks...you take care as well.🤗

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Indu awesome update i knew payal would be arpita daughter, aman and yash part was very touching. waiting for your next update. Insha Allah.

Thanks Naeema. Glad you liked the part.😊

Originally posted by: AliciaZA

What an amazing chapter!! Again, you managed to surprise me! After the last chapter, I had imagined that Yashji ran away from his life and his family after Arpita's deception. I never imagined the poise and confidence he displayed and that he looked like a vagrant because he was on a trip to commemorate a friend's death. Amazing plot!

Yash is such a wonderful character, a truly good person cos he covered up Arpita's lies, took care of her and loved her child like it was his. He's amazing. Loved how attached he is to the journal and the person who wrote it without having met her. I wonder how he'll react when he realizes what an influence he has had on her life:). I'm suprised he thinks her voice is familiar??? Its been years!!! Aw, the end was so cute when he's captured by a pair of soulful eyes *hai, dreamy sigh*.

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful writing Indu and a beautifully thought out love story. I cannot wait to read what happens next!

Havent read your collab story with KittenCullen yet. Its on my to do list hehe:)

Alicia...Thanks pal. Wow...did you really think that of Yash? Nah...he tends to internalize a lot of things and doesn't open up to everyone...yes...He only really opened up to two people, Aman and dadima...But where his life differs from Aarti's is that he has a strong support system in his family. They stuck by him when the outsiders gave him such pain and disillusionment. In Aarti's case the situation was opposite, wherein she got all the belongingness from some outsiders, but her own family rejected her.

Yash heard Aarti's twice...once when he saved her near that tree and then over the phone. Let's just say that it was one of those voices that stayed in some recess of his mind and never got erased...maybe because both the encounters were unique in their own respect.

Well, we have reached the point where both their lives converge and the path becomes one. Let's hope I don't falter here. If expressing the disturbing past was difficult, then this phase of their lives is going to be toughest for me to depict. I am kinda nervous.😳

Originally posted by: taahir004

An amazing update

Thanks Taahir.😊

Read the last 3 chapters together...!!

Originally posted by: sia221

Read the last 3 chapters together...!!

Yash's story is as painful as Aarti's...!!

While we have seen Aarti expressing her emotions.. pains in the form of writing..drawing.. haven't seen Yash doing anything to express his reactions..?? considering what he has gone thru...

The only way of easing his pain. is reading the journal...

He seems to be finding his own emotions being reflected in the writings hence the attraction deepening with each passing day

I just love the twists that u create Indu... Yash is not bankrupt... 😆 Payal is Arpita's child...!!

Yash (as similar to Sparsh ) again is a strong,clear thinking,calm person... really liked the way he handled Arpita...!!

For whatever Arpita did...she at least accepted that diary was not hers ?? Thank god.. that was huge...!! Can even forgive everything for telling that...!!

One thing.. as to what really led Yash to accept Arpita's child...HE was not even the father 😕

Very nice Indu...

Thank u.. and Do continue...!! 😊

Sia...thank you for the combined review. I look forward to your feedbacks for the sheer practicality you bring into it. 😊

Yash indeed found his peace in her journal, in the same manner as she gave cognizance to his words of advice spoken as a stranger.

Sia, Yash took the child as his own because, first, Arpita had already decided to call the child his so as to provide legitimacy to her pregnancy; second, and most important, he realized within moments that Arpita is not the kind of person to give a good upbringing to a child. He was proved right soon when she didn't even argue once when he put the condition regarding the baby. If Arpita had insisted that she won't let go of her baby, he might have considered. But she didn't...not even once. She was in fact much relieved. Under the circumstances he felt it morally bound to take the baby as his own. Later he took care of Arpita during her pregnancy, which brought him closer to the baby.

Originally posted by: freya123

grt part

Thanks Freya.😊