Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 104

Originally posted by: rutu83

phew got little time to myself finally-sleepy but comment first 🥱

as i said before, loved it! and so long 😃 i had this huge smile on my face when i saw how long it was- even though i was crazy busy😆

ugh arpita 😡- while i'm glad she left, i'm really really reallly angry that she got off that easily😡😡

but i guess that was realistic in some sense. i adore yash for taking responsibility of payal🤗

and can i just say SP was a secret hero for me here for supporting yash. for yash to take on payal's responsibility and to treat her like his own was spot on. but for SP to support him through it all is 👏

aman and yash's friendship was beutifully portrayed- and so sad yet...😭

ah to see aarti through yash's eyes 😳❤️

btw, can we see more from aarti's journals? 😳

Originally posted by: smileymj10

Congratulate me Indu dear! 😃
Finally, I got the chance to read the 3 updates. Only in just one seat!
And I'm very happy about it..
Am so so glad that my free time never get wasted (and I know it will never happen) reading this wonderful story...

The last time I left reading it, was when Aarti met YAsh in the store.
I guess I got a good timing that the latest updates finishes on the same scenario.
Wow! Lucky I am to catch up again and come up with the best part of the story, the meeting of Aarti and Yash.

Before that, let me just give my comment about the past...

Yash was so unlucky to have met such unfaithful, ambitious and gold-digger women! First, it was Tanya, then it's Deepa, and the last Arpita.
But good thing, like Aarti, GOD never fails to help him. He always gave him the hint to find the truth..
And Yash never closes the fact that there's this one woman whose just waiting for him somewhere there.. Like what Aman and his dadima had told him..

I loved the friendship that Aman and Yash have built. They're just like a real brother, ready to help each other even in his last breath.
Wonder how Aman fall on Deepa's bait, if only Yash was there...

But I guess they do have the same fate, falling on the wrong person to live with...
This time Yash fall on Arpita's trap. But at least he has reason why he did it, for his dadima's happiness.. I don't know what kind of woman/ mother is she, don't even bother seeing her own daughter on her birth!
But since she's alive, I will still not closing my expectation of seeing her returning, ready to fight for her right to Payal. Will Payal accept her?? Or Is there a possibility that PAyal will find the truth before her 17th or she may be the one who will eager to search for her real parents? Wonder what will Aarya do..

Well, I might just wait and see...

And the journal, am so glad it landed in the good hands. On YAsh!
Thanks God he find out that it was not hers...
I guess this is the only thing that really connects Aarti and Yash..

So, YAsh was not a real beggar, he just look like that because of some reason, and destiny just made it happen... So happy to know that!

Now the real story has just began, am eager to wait for that one...

Love this story, and I always will.. 😳


*BTW, thanks for the wishes pal, am quite better now...🤗

Hey Indy di i am back
part 8

OMG yeh toih yash nikala hainnn

oh yash on his birthday for hunger sake hi sahi met the best gift e can ever hav elater aarti his soul mate

in all yash journey i found one thing strange be it tanya, deepa or aarpit he never found any connection its okay but y thesde 3 were never even ggod to be so this was may be god was making it yash to feel th ebitterness after the sweetnees importance he will had by aarti in his life
except that all i can say he is blessed with family and aman or sudhir kinda good frnz

so aarpita n yash marriage dont tell me it is aarti journal only who made him fall for her... hmm nahi re but lets read part9 how u unfolds it

I am damn angry how could she is *@$#%#$^% #&Y$%&^%$&%^& maaannn
ow could honeslty with my bff broken heart recently n yash 3 wicked woman making me feel disgust abt woman

DI i know wat will you say it is not like in genral it is just few but y i mean how selfish ppl can get by breaking somebody dreams feeling n alll

dadimaa aapko nahi pata Karela may be bitter but a healthy food this time you gave a sweet which has so much bitterness that it is difficult to survive

Payal my angel was aarota n rahul kid nnnooo i mean atleast i thot it is yash angel i know she is now but aarpita you are

kya yash is also hope he accept kid no harm but dont let aarpita win no way forst he made yash to fall which hoenslty was aarti journal n later she stab her with no gulit such a &
%@#&5

gals r actually selfish i know it may sound wierd coming frm myself as a gal mouth but it is bitter fact n true

my blood is boiling so will come back later for aprt 10

bbye di tc n thanks for updates n regular omn i love the way you write that my heart reacts n my mind stop working

Originally posted by: InduG64

C'mon Disha...no trouble at all. I take it as a sweet compliment that you should be a little upset with this di of yours for seemingly missing you from the mailing list, cause you were waiting to read the next part. 😊

Thanks...you take care as well.🤗

Originally posted by: InduG64

Sia...thank you for the combined review. I look forward to your feedbacks for the sheer practicality you bring into it. 😊

Yash indeed found his peace in her journal, in the same manner as she gave cognizance to his words of advice spoken as a stranger.

Sia, Yash took the child as his own because, first, Arpita had already decided to call the child his so as to provide legitimacy to her pregnancy; second, and most important, he realized within moments that Arpita is not the kind of person to give a good upbringing to a child. He was proved right soon when she didn't even argue once when he put the condition regarding the baby. If Arpita had insisted that she won't let go of her baby, he might have considered. But she didn't...not even once. She was in fact much relieved. Under the circumstances he felt it morally bound to take the baby as his own. Later he took care of Arpita during her pregnancy, which brought him closer to the baby.