A Tale of Three Dads - update Page 12 - Page 7

wonderful..you really captured how ans feel wonderfully..

i iike the way you made ansh sense danger in prashant!

that was so heart wrenching... you made me so emotional with Ansh's musings... How much that little one has to go through in this biggie's fights😭... Loved ur tale of three dads and this part too👏👏

@Anonee ( meena ) dear the title of the letter "Mumma please come soon" pulled my heart strings dear , ansh keeping his promise and being loyal is the character that is found in both yash and aarti . Loved it waiting for the next tale dear. Awesome meenu kutty.

So touching yaar! Keep up the good work in your writings! 😃

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Great part dear👏👏

The way ansh poured all his emotions was so touching👍🏼...Well written⭐️

Thanks for pm😊

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Anonee thats a beautiful piece of writing 👏👏👏👏... Reading this part of yours made me see things from Ansh's POV for the first time .. what all mixed emotions he must b going through while he is being manipulated by his dost uncle in such manner 😭😭... I will b more than happy if Ansh realises his dost uncle's true colours soon and completely detach himself from Prashant 😡😡.. I loved the part where Ansh remembers all that he had to go through because of this dost uncle and still he cannot find any peace or happiness in his dost uncle's forced company 👍🏼

Aimf I absolutely loved your pointers too 👏👏👏 and it just makes me hate Prashant and Mr.Dubey plus that Taiji more and more for manipulating this innocent kid 😡😡

Originally posted by: nan0102

wonderful..you really captured how ans feel wonderfully..

Originally posted by: sallybaby

i iike the way you made ansh sense danger in prashant!

and the letter was so heart wrenching! prashant should leave ansh alone, poor ansh was just trying to be nice because prashant has helped him and his mother😕

beautiful work dear, keep it up👏

Originally posted by: PhalguniK

Very nicely written