Aarya SS - You're impossible! Part 21 pg 142 - Page 48

Originally posted by: rutu83

on vacation so couldnt' reply earlier
loved the strategy and the closeness 👏
dhire dhire...😉

Originally posted by: sara1990

they are finally falling for each other...

awesome update

waiting for the next one

Originally posted by: suhaa0_O

pm me de nxt tym u update plz...i loved dis aarya story very much..

Originally posted by: villager00

Haha, finally got through all the chapters.

Awesome story!!!👏👏👏

tennis game reminded me of the cricket match in the show.. why exactly didn't we see the bahus join the game😉

Thanks a lot, Sabrina..😊

Originally posted by: Josmi01

nice writeup

Originally posted by: caller123

Great story and really nice.Please update soon. I love your concept.

Waiting

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Akui...your SS...I read it in one sitting...why?...I just can't believe that your way of story telling is so different 'cause...I didn't consider this SS as story telling...it looked more like 'happenning' and you can relate to it instantly as it looked...yes...natural. Your conversation is so real - instant - humorous...nothing looked like 'made up'...more like river flowing. Just loved tennis game and the thoughts of Yash and Arti...🤣 was my position...right from your first chapter.

Am very sure..your true character is giving the shape of this SS ...humorous... and a person full of life in real life. How did I miss this? Just one word for your SS - Unique.

Continue to entertain us - no not for the story - but for the conversation part...which is BREATH of this story... would love to rate you...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: akui1984

@ bold... complaining that you are going on and on abt the same things...well..Akui...the character Arti going on and on and on abt 'Arpita' and their respective thoughts...was funny and tickling...follow your thoughts...we will follow u...for a change...to me it was 'cool' yaar !

Regarding comment each time - it may be fine for you but not for me when I don't get your feedback on my comment😆

Would be happy if ARYA lose...I know many will kick me...but behaviour pattern of Yash towards Arti and his frustration would be fun to read and Arti's thought ...and 'on the spot' reply that follows...will be thrilling and childish too...let me see ...how u r going to take the story forward...I know either way...it will be good😊

Edited by chitsri65 - 12 years ago