Aarya SS - You're impossible! Part 21 pg 142

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: ns1970
I am not one to write long comments but i am happy yash realize his mistake and approach the game differently just love the HUG
anyways update soon

thank you for leaving two comments behind since you said that you normally do not write long comments! 🤗

I am also glad Yash realise his error in pressuring Aarti that she managed to score!

I will try to update soon...

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roserosey

@roserosey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

when r u updating SABRINA waiting😭

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akui1984

@akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

@ Naheeda - thanks so much for reading this story!

@miyasingh1 - thank you for commeting!

@ freya123 - thanks for your comments!

@goldenmoon - thanks a lot for commenting!

Edited by akui1984 - 12 years ago

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akui1984

@akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: roserosey
when r u updating SABRINA waiting😭

Not so soon!! sorry! I hope this weekend if I have the time...but no promise!😳

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akui1984

@akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16
loved it finally you're starting update more regularly hpe evrything was fixed.
Nd loved this update the way Yash is beginning to warm up to Aarti like tht its like he is lowly falling deeply in love with her can't wait for ur other update which will be soon i presume 😊

hey thanks a lot for your comments! hmmm..I think it is not fixed but I am feeling better though so thanks for asking! 😊

haha...I hope the next update will be soon enought! 😆

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akui1984

@akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: KamliKudi
Loved it ❤️

Hope ArYa win ☺️

hey thanks for reading and commenting! Gotta read the next update to find out if they win! 😉

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akui1984

@akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: elanpremi
I love the way how u write ur story dear, so smooth.
Nice updates (part 11 and 12).

Hey thank you so much for your sweet comment! Somehow it makes me happy to know the story is smooth.. I feel it is too detailed n draggy sometimes but I am still new in writing a ff/ss so hope the readers bear with it and gives me feedback...

Edited by akui1984 - 12 years ago

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akui1984

@akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: lulujjj
Sabrina thanks dear for the PM and beautiful update , tennis is one of my favourite sports since teen age days the description about the game made me feel as if I am watching it live. He he please continue soon. The other ff on aarya please update that also ASAP.

Hey thank you so very much for your comments..wow..you love tennis? I hope I did not make too many mistakes with the game...I am a lousy tennis player...but your comments are very encouraging so thank you!
Hmmm...regarding the other story...it is a work-in-progress...

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caller123

@caller123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#469

Great story and really nice.Please update soon. I love your concept.

Waiting

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Chitra_11

@Chitra_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#470

Akui...your SS...I read it in one sitting...why?...I just can't believe that your way of story telling is so different 'cause...I didn't consider this SS as story telling...it looked more like 'happenning' and you can relate to it instantly as it looked...yes...natural. Your conversation is so real - instant - humorous...nothing looked like 'made up'...more like river flowing. Just loved tennis game and the thoughts of Yash and Arti...🤣 was my position...right from your first chapter.

Am very sure..your true character is giving the shape of this SS ...humorous... and a person full of life in real life. How did I miss this? Just one word for your SS - Unique.

Continue to entertain us - no not for the story - but for the conversation part...which is BREATH of this story... would love to rate you...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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