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Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: miti16295
so speedy update wow
story is getting interesting
looking forward to next part

Thank you !😃

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Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: elanpremi
very nice update dear

Thx!😃

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Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: sidu12
Awesome dear tnx for quick update

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Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: 123mitul
what happened eight years ago??😲😲

i forgot to tell about chapter 6. i loved the subtle romance😳

You will get to know shortly. Don't worry.

Thanks for the appreciation.😃

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Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: freya123
grt part

Thx😃

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MelodiousDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Whoa, the ending of this chapter left me in a bit of a daze...

I really enjoyed gaining a bit of perspective about Yash back when he was just starting to step out of his father's and brother's shadows. Needless to say, the bit about the spotlight reminded me of the scene in the show with the rose petals...Loved that part.

Aarti Sharma...Beautifully described, Deepti, and that was honestly the worst place to stop - now I am really hoping that you'll be back with another update soon. Both the past and the present are suspended at points where I feel like I'm hanging off the edge of a cliff!

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Sunrio80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Beautiful update. Hope you continue it soon

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RIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

🤗 a Big hug just to say thanks for godd and quick update

welll i must say now the story is gettinh interesting i do remmber when g3 says something is a miss in yash n arpi wedding n he says yes once he saw ur photo oh my my Deepti itws awesome yaar.. looking forward to next👏👏👏

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Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams
Whoa, the ending of this chapter left me in a bit of a daze...

I really enjoyed gaining a bit of perspective about Yash back when he was just starting to step out of his father's and brother's shadows. Needless to say, the bit about the spotlight reminded me of the scene in the show with the rose petals...Loved that part.

Aarti Sharma...Beautifully described, Deepti, and that was honestly the worst place to stop - now I am really hoping that you'll be back with another update soon. Both the past and the present are suspended at points where I feel like I'm hanging off the edge of a cliff!

Well Yash was planning on giving a dramatic effect for the audience but i think he got more than he bargained for. LOL

EDIT: Of course the spot-light thing was a lift from the serial. But i was more inspired by the the introductory scene for the heroine in a telugu movie -- Toli Prema. I think they remade it in hindi. Tushar-Kareena kapoor starrer "Mujhe Kuch Kehna Hai".

Oh i was very worried about that part. Event management is an unknown field for me. And i was too lazy to do any research.😳😳 So just wrote whatever i could imagine.😆

Yeah now i have to take two stories to take to conclusion. One in the present and one in the past.

I know i am being a tease but well ... i am loving it.😆

Thanks for the detailed response.

Edited by Deepti1808 - 12 years ago