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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo
Deepti.. So glad you updated so fast but now I'm confused re..
What's going on with Yash and he knew Aarti 8 years ago😲
Now you've created 100 questions in my mind...
Hopefully the next update will answer my questions and not add to it😆

Loved it..

I forgot my own timeline. 😆

I had started with the anniversary so it should be 8 years ago.

Well i thought this chapter would reveal Yash's POV, at least give us a glimpse of it.

Hmm... so maybe i should reveal more in the next chapter.

OK... feedback taken.

Thanks for going through.😃

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kholita

@kholita

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Great work, thanks for the speedy update, please continue soon : )

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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: kholita
Great work, thanks for the speedy update, please continue soon : )

Thank you.

Lot of free time on hand today.

So i thought, what the heck, let me just write another chapter. 😆

Let me see when i get to continue.

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ummisco

@ummisco

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Another update so fast...

You have done it again...stopped right where things are getting more intresting.. Unhappy

Anyway,Superb update!!

Love the way Aarti still tried to talk to Yash because of the kids even though she's afraid to...and the ending where Aarti was being revealed was beautifully written...

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@ksfan2

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

loved it so much...waiting for the next part..

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Its an interesting chapter

I was wondering is the beautiful lady perhaps Aarti ... I hope so

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

ohhh

always, only you 😃

awww

but stil no clue for his anger now 😕

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Aisyah Abdul

@IsYaRoCHeR

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Superb Awesome update, Deepti dear! 👏👏👏

Read both part 6 and part 7 together! 😊 Part 6 left me blushing initially.. And then I was confused with Yash.. 😕😕

Part 7 made me shocked.. 😲😲 8 years ago story came up.. Wow! Hmm.. Loved the last paragraph of the part 7.. U described her beautifully.. I could imagine! And last word.. Lost.. 😳😳

But, I'm still confused about Yash.. The suspense never reveal yet.. 😕

Update ASAP! I can't wait anymore! Thanks for the PM! Continue PM me on your next part! 😉