Always,Only You--(fiction) THREAD 1 - Page 23

Originally posted by: ummisco

Another update so fast...

You have done it again...stopped right where things are getting more intresting..

Anyway,Superb update!!

Love the way Aarti still tried to talk to Yash because of the kids even though she's afraid to...and the ending where Aarti was being revealed was beautifully written...

Originally posted by: ksfan2

loved it so much...waiting for the next part..

Originally posted by: taahir004

Its an interesting chapter

I was wondering is the beautiful lady perhaps Aarti ... I hope so

Originally posted by: rutu83

ohhh

always, only you 😃

awww

but stil no clue for his anger now 😕

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Superb Awesome update, Deepti dear! 👏👏👏

Read both part 6 and part 7 together! 😊 Part 6 left me blushing initially.. And then I was confused with Yash.. 😕😕

Yes i will reveal what's eating him. Don't worry.

Part 7 made me shocked.. 😲😲 8 years ago story came up.. Wow! Hmm.. Loved the last paragraph of the part 7.. U described her beautifully.. I could imagine! And last word.. Lost.. 😳😳

But, I'm still confused about Yash.. The suspense never reveal yet.. 😕

Update ASAP! I can't wait anymore! Thanks for the PM! Continue PM me on your next part! 😉

Thank you sooo much for such a detailed response. It makes me want to write the next update immediately. But i want to take some time with the next one.

Originally posted by: saf24

Another fab update. Loved it and looking foward to what is in store next.

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Wow deepti interesting update and the suspense is killing me pls continue the next part soon.