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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kdsubs1



Ummm, thanks i think. Now i have to finish the story in 5, max 6 parts so i stay within this thread. Sigh...hope this one listens to me and picks up its pace. Stories are as bad as children sometimes...

Thank you Deepti. I had to bring in the orphanage and the kids there, na? Now lets see where i can go with it.


Why are you restricting yourself to a single thread?

Please make it as long as necessary till you think it is right.

I am loving AarYa in your story please give them all the time and space they need.

Edited by Deepti1808 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zahra15

This was awesome.
It's more like, Aarti is slowly and unconsciously making Yash get back to the things he used to like, and maybe someday she will even help him in moving on as he would be to her 😊

Really loved the update.
Thanks for the PM.



Thank you Zahra.

Right now, Arti is/has been the medium for Yash to find a way to start healing. No active involvement yet 😊. But yes, eventually the two will help the other move on - that's the journey no?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Fantastic part!! 👏👏


Just loved the way Yash went all to find for Aarti at the orphanage and soon join them to deal and do dolls with the clay! 😊 It seems like both Yash and Aarti were like children though.. 😳!!

Aww.. So our Aarti and also Yash are quite creative in life! Aarti is good at sketching and Yash got to do some stuffs with the clay and wood! 😊😳

Looking forward for more.. I'm happy with their bond now! 😳



Thank you Isya.

Waise you are reading more into Yash's actions than he intended. Yash went to the orphanage because he was curious - not really to track Arti down per se. But he had dropped her there and after what Zoya told him about Arti and the orphanage, he was just curious.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RA17

So yahs babu is looking for Aarti intresting hmmm n thn finally he gone to meet her

Idea of Zoya gift is so cute Kat n then how he made 6 other 2 perfect which seems the glimpse of future where aarti sketches and yash make it happen which will be a life where they are meant to be

It is also very beautiful way you told us how by giving happiness to other for humanity sake brings a joy which cannot be expressed in words n then both got direction to lead their life.. indeed kids are god gift love the ways its going dear..thanks for pm and update😃😃



Thank you Riya.

Yash just gave in to his curiosity about the orphanage, rather than anything else.

Thank you for liking the gift. Idea toh aa gaya - just hope Dr. Sahab's house is big enough for it 😉.
Arti lost a child - and through the orphanage children found a reason to live. And the same children showed Yash a way to heal. Yes, they both needed the push to realize that there is more to life and the children helped them there. Someday, these two will have to pay that debt back...



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kdsubs1



Thank you Riya.

Yash just gave in to his curiosity about the orphanage, rather than anything else.

Thank you for liking the gift. Idea toh aa gaya - just hope Dr. Sahab's house is big enough for it 😉.
Arti lost a child - and through the orphanage children found a reason to live. And the same children showed Yash a way to heal. Yes, they both needed the push to realize that there is more to life and the children helped them there. Someday, these two will have to pay that debt back...



but kat in a way indirectly aarti was a reason which fetch yash to orphanage or is shud say to healing path
hmm well pay back.. seems lot of layers which you will reveal later...
lol dr sahab ka ghar really sochna toh padega😆
thanks deary for replying it reallsy feels good to hear n btw belated happy birthday
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

This businessman is keen observer or its just about Aarti that he understood her closeness wid Zoya😉 Khair the point is, he was surprised not finding her !
Zoya's Nikah would b an Earth-shattering news 😆 Orphanage 😃 Another thread to bind them 😉
Aarti didi, some uncle is standing there 😆 This seemed so cute to me 😊
Mr. Handsome loves to make objects wid clay 😃
I feel that Yash luvs children here !
N all because of Aarti, he got a chance in months, to b free from the problematic life 😊
They can defo cum close through this, I mean , close in thinking, Close in understanding, each other's problems 😊 Unconsciously they'll feel more free in each other's company now 😊 N Aarti's talent is also flashed in front of Yash now 😃
Aww poor guy had to give up on his favs ie clay n wood just because his other-half didnt lyk it, but nevertheless , Der aaye durust aaye😃
Sometyms yew have to give up somethings yew love the most 4 those whom yew love😊
Loved the chapter 😃
They r progressing 😉
Thanx buddy 😃



Thank you Naureen.

@underline - hmm, good question. I think he is a good observer of people and their interactions in general. He has to be - to be good at his job.

Yes Yash does love children. Hence his ease in working with them.

Yash and Arti aren't really close - not yet. They found common grounds, found a medium where they saw each other at their best. Bas, itna hi.

Waise - chappla mat maarna after you read the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maha9

wow my dear superb parts as i read the last 2 together.

The smile back on yash's face is so sweet and i really enjoy arya's friend like helping tendency.
continue soon dear



Thank you Maha.

Both Arti and Yash are good at heart, nice people - so helping others comes naturally. They are just re-discovering how helping others can help you.
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Thank you Alekhika.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunrio80

What a marvellous update. Both Yash and Aarti shares same interest and that is working with clay (although Aarti didn't know how much to make it). A very lovely story it is and getting more interesting. Waiting for the next part



Thank you Sunrio.

I hope i can sustain the interest through the coming parts...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: J12L85

Hello Kat, another blissful update dear. Hmmm so seems like our Yash missed Aarthis presence:) It was more that he noticed Arti's absence and that plus he involvement at the orphanage made him curious.

Loved that he decided to check out the orphanage and get involved. The experience at the orphanage really brought about a calmness for Yash and he was finally carefree after a long time.
Yes!! The calmness and the sense of being carefree - that was key.

Aarthi indirectly reintroduced working with clay for him and at the same time made him realize that there are still things in life which he enjoys and life does'nt have to be all dull and gloom. Hopefully through each others company they realize that they both still have a purpose in life and things didn't end with their loss.
Important lesson hain na?

Yash was wonderful with the kids and I loved how he read their longing thoughts. Aarthi is no less than an angel, not only does she give the children uncoonditional love but she wants them to accomplish things and believe that they capable of anything.
I think she understands their needs well because she has been through the same thing. Every child needs that - but for most, parents are there to help provide the sense of accomplishment and pride. Who would do that for an orphan?


Their private moment of thanking each other and that delicate acknowledgement by placing their hands of each others was significant and it was a sign for the future that together they could overcome anything.
This part was awkward. Normally, two strangers (and they are pretty much strangers still) won't be touching like that - but i tried to keep it natural and an instictive reaction, without either realizing what they had done.


Loved they parting self thoughts...was a feeling of hope and healing for both. This was baby steps for Arya but a wonderful start:) Thanx fr the PM buddy and can't wait for my next read:)




Thank you for the detailed feedback as always J. I just had to reply in-line this time 😊.

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