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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update as usual Kat!
Feel so bad for Aarti...though Prashant has a valid reason (to be financially stable and provide the best for his family is good thing), but he should see from Aarti's POV as well...after all, having one child now will not affect his ambition!
How long does he expect Aarti to lead a lonely life while he's on constant business trips.
Anyway, I just loved the way you bring the story forward flawlessly. Though am still curious of Yash's condition (why Vidhi's expression changes when Aarti asked about Yash-Arpita's marriage?).
Sorry for the late comments and thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: J12L85

Prashant...grrr the biggest slimball on earth, damn it did'nt even take a second to change his tune...hate him. Poor Aarti...so glad she has Zoya. Fantastic update...drama n tension setting in. Eager for ur next update n thanx for the pm:)



J - thank you my friend. More drama and tension on its way 😆.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KS1000

wow amazing update dear👏👏👏

i'm eagerly waiting to know what happened to arpita and yash🤔
and now the story is damn interesting dear😳
thank you very much for the pm dear🤗



KS - thank you for the beautiful flowers! Really, its worth going through the pain and tedium of writing when you all reward me like this 😳.

I'll "reveal all" about Yash and Arpita eventually. The story is focused on Arti right now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Alekhika, Sheen, Shashi - thank you so much!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princess4120

i just foudn this story today and read all the parts in one go.. absolutely great story.. eagerly waiting to see how you continue.. you write really well and it is really interesting..

prashant.. ughh.. dont like him on the show.. dont like him here..
he accused arti of stopping the pills.. did she really stop or just happened to get pregnant.. cuz that can happen to ppl still on the pills too.. MEAN of him to treat her that way.. glad she had Zoya..
didnt understand why vidhi got gloom when asked about yash and arpita.. wonder whats that all about..
anyway.. looking forward to reading the next part.. not sure if you send pms.. if so i would like one.. if not.. i will check back for next updates..
take care



Princess - welcome! Thank you for reading and leaving your comments. I am so glad you found your way here and i hope i can keep your interest alive.

Lol - no one likes Prashant it seems 😆 - poor guy. But, at least here, he is more complex than he seems - and hopefully i can bring that out.

Arti did stop the pills - she decided to let fate make the choice for them so she stopped the pills. He guessed, because he does know her really well. But his reaction was uncalled for.

I do send PMs and will add you to the list. Once again, thank you for your interest. I am blessed to have readers like you.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64

Kat...Super narration. 👏One could sense the reason for Prashant drifting away. They are both strong-minded individuals wanting to lead one life in opposite directions. They have already bifurcated the common path on which they started this married journey...worst is they are not even leaving room for a compromise. They are just imposing their decisions on the other. That's a death knell of the loudest order. He can't fathom her womanly desire for a baby...she can't fathom his need to climb the professional ladder at the cost of remaining childless...so what results is Catch-22...and both not getting the other's support.

Fantastico, my friend!! This is just proceeding right...Stage is well set for the entry of the other woman.



Ah Indu - as always you get to the gist, the real issue without my having to spell it out. Its such a pleasure to write for readers like you my friend. Thank you for taking the time to do so.

@bold - you too?? 😆 The next part may well surprise you then.
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Kat: Wating...waiting...what surprise might you hold??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: elanpremi

P is a jerk...wonderful update dear




Lol 😆 - Elanpremi. Poor Prashant - everyone thinks of him as a jerk or slimeball. I guess i didn't help his case by making Zoya think of him as one too 😆.

Thanks for reading and your feedback.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Beautiful update

I'm really liking Zoya at the moment but still Aarti its just so sad been her .
and Yash I'm curious to know more about him



Thank you, Taahir.

I am so glad Zoya is so well-liked. She's a totally fictional character - inspired by Zoya Khan from DK, but with characteristics from my closest friends. So, your appreciation of her holds a very special place in my heart.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SarahRam

Lovely update as usual Kat!

Feel so bad for Aarti...though Prashant has a valid reason (to be financially stable and provide the best for his family is good thing), but he should see from Aarti's POV as well...after all, having one child now will not affect his ambition!
How long does he expect Aarti to lead a lonely life while he's on constant business trips.
Anyway, I just loved the way you bring the story forward flawlessly. Though am still curious of Yash's condition (why Vidhi's expression changes when Aarti asked about Yash-Arpita's marriage?).
Sorry for the late comments and thanks for the PM!



Sarah - thank you! And no worries on being "late". The story is here for you, you take your time reading it. I am just happy that you all find it worth reading.

Yes, Arti and Prashant have been on different tangents. Happens to many couples - the thing is some at least are able to re-converge. Perhaps these two will as well?

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