Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 66

Originally posted by: PuvZ

Superb... You're amazing,,,

Thanks Puvi. Take care.😊

fabulous update as usual INDU

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Yup I really mean what I said.. It's really well connected from one part to another. I've already start compiling it and read it like a book.. There were no "uh wait where did this come from or how did this get there" so it was really good. It's like you wrote everything at once then just broke it into parts for us to read. It was awemazing (awesome + amazing).. can't wait to use the word legendary when you finish this story..😆

@Sheema: That bold part is so encouraging I can't tell you because I am sure my way is the faultiest way for any story writer...I don't plan out any incident, any appearance of a character, or even the plot. I write as it forms in my head. I just know how it should be and how the story will end...nothing else. And don't even begin to think in terms of the L word in the last sentence above...cause it's too embarrassing, although you are a sweetheart to consider it.😳

Originally posted by: gcluv

fabulous update as usual INDU

loving the dilemma of Misti

She is happy and proud for her love yash

but her responsibility back firing her

me loving this confident yash

so sure of his love

How I wish Misty agreed to shake hand with Yash

She knew very well yash would be more sure of her identity

yash -- go man .. make Misty yours

Misty -- for once love yourself dear

loving their destiny

their children .. making them together

your write up is soo good that it makes me restless to read the next part

but indu,

you take time

you are always prompt with next update as compared to others

@Aditi: Thank you...Yup, Mishti's priority are her responsibilities and she won't compromise them...plus there's no way she would want to create a wedge between Yash and his family...so it's Catch-22 for her. On the other hand, Yash is sure of what he wants. He knows something is holding Mishti back...and he will find out anyhow what it is.

I'll try to update by Sunday.😊

@Indu: awesome update man!! hope u update soon though can't wait to see wht mischief Yashji is planning here 😛

Wow great work dear !!!

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Nikki: Thanks😊...Well, the battle of wills has begun. Hmmm...a stalker? I thought it was more like his wanting to be there when he broke the news...to silently share her pain. Plus now he knows she sits there every night, so he waited for her to come and then called her.

Wow... fabulous writing and a great story line. Thank you. I'll be waiting for more.

Wonderful work my dear indu

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

@Indu: awesome update man!! hope u update soon though can't wait to see wht mischief Yashji is planning here 😛

@Kesha: Thank you. 🤗 Well...the PV Yashji is taking over so much of my brain space at the moment that I haven't had time to visit Sparsh Yashji's repertoire of schemas...maybe in a day or so.😃